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The Wedding 33
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"You’ll regret this Christina, believe you me"
"I highly doubt it"
"Maybe you’ll change your mind if I decide to treat the cause rather than the symptom"
　
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The sun had long set by the time Bette and Shane arrived at Tina’s childhood home. They were greeted fondly by Jackie who had secretly been longing for company since her husband had moved out.
"Come in come in, I’ve kept some dinner for you both if you’d like some?" she smiled at them both.
"That’d be great" Bette accepted.
"Thanks Mrs K" Shane added.
There was nothing quite like a good home cooked meal, and for two women who had grown up without their mothers, it had added meaning to it by who had prepared it. Secretly, of course, Bette thought it wasn’t quite as good as Tina’s cooking, but she was grateful all the same.
When they’d finished eating, Jackie refused the offer of help with the dishes and showed them to their rooms. Shane would be taking the guest room while Bette had the privilege of sleeping in Tina’s old bedroom.
The two women returned downstairs and found Jackie in the living room with a bottle of wine. They both accepted a small glass when it was offered and settled down in front of the fire.
"You have a beautiful home" Shane told her genuinely.
"Thank you. It’s been my pride and joy over the years, I’m just grateful that John isn’t going to fight me for it"
"Jackie…" Bette started, unsure of how the women would take her inquisitions "have you seen anything of Charlotte today?"
"Yes, she came by this afternoon. Are you going to tell me what this is about?"
"Soon I promise. Did she bring her friend with her?"
"No, apparently he was meeting an old friend or something. I didn’t really ask"
"Jackie the thing is…..we think the friend she’s brought down here is Henry"
"As in Tina’s Henry?"
Bette pulled a face "Well I’d rather not hear him described as that, but yeah"
"Sorry…slip of the tongue. What on earth makes you think that?"
"We saw him visiting her at her apartment yesterday, but when we asked her if she’d heard from him she said she hadn’t spoken to him in years"
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What can I say? I love you. Love this story. Liking the twist. Avoiding using subjects in my otherwise grammatically correct sentences – well, I hope they are. Either way, PPS!
Yes! I love this story! Thank you for not going in that direction. But I wonder what else we could have in common? Oh, nearly forgot, is Genner the jealous type? Why is she reading your response to my comment? He he he, if she is, you are one lucky lady. After an argument make up sex with that type of person is more than HOT! I’m talking from experience (Liz)! Anyway, as always your writing is remarkable. Thank you for sharing girl
I love this story..can’t wait to see what happens next! I’m sorry you’re having a rough time with your diet..hang in there! I keep eating ice cream and thinking about you..lol!
So, good! You are doing a great job with this story. Hang in there Tina – Bette is on the way, I hope!
Diets do suck – moderation is so much easier – feeling your pain since today was the first day back at the gym! thanks for the homework break, chica!
i love this story and i can’t wait to read what happens next! Tina your superwomen is on the way baby!!
Nice flow… PPS :-) and I hope Bette’s temper wont put her in trouble when meet those bigots! (Although i kinda hope someone can SMACK some senses to them :-p )
Great post as always! Please, make them pay!
Just read all 3 of your updates. How excellent was that! What a twist! Thanks and love love love this story.
I hope,Tinas dad is not planing to “cure” his daughter by himself.Please let them find Tina soon.Great story.Thank you.
Please, don’t hurt Tina!
hanging onto the edge of me seat here. great great great. mmmmmmmmmmm me thinks the source of tina being gay is bette so here dad may go for her. that would hurt tina but wouldnt make her straight. hav been tellin peeps at work bout story to hav to giv updates lol ty ty ty :)
Hi BealsBaby, I have just caught up with the last few chapters as had a day’s vacation. Wow-wee what a turn up as Tina’s Dad is behind this kidnapping. It is such a shame that he believes that she can be cured of this disease by bible bashing and scripture readings. Her love for Bette is eternal and constant. Bette and Shane have been fun to read as their friendship grows. I am happy that Tina’s Mom is out of this loop and there to rebuild and support her daugther. So many threads and directions to go in. I can’t wait to read more. Many Thanks for keeping the faith. Bloody brilliant. Your Loyal Fan.
Gosh, now I dont know what to think. A couple chapters ago I thought Tina mentioned her mother being abused and now the woman says she wasn’t. And Tina’s pictures are in her dresser face down and the father has been gone for some time now. I think the woman is lying. Why would the pictures be face down if she lives alone. NOw to Tina’s father, (loosely) I certainly hope he does not intend to affect a “cure” himself or does he intend to bring dickhead henry along for the ride. Please don’t let him abuse Tina or let henry or any other male do that to her. I think she would fight like hell but I don’t put anything past any of those bigots by harming her in any way so they can do what it is they think is the thing to do. I’m trying to stay with this but don’t know if I can. Thanks for posting.
I think I am getting a little paranoid here. Why are the pictures face down? It is the mothers house now, right? You´d think that after reconciling with her long lost daughter… ? You have to wrap this up soon, I can´t stand homophobes and I really don´t want to throw my laptop through the window – so please give poor Bette (and me) a break! Interesting update. Thanks.
ADDICTED!