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The Wedding 33
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"I’m not even going to ask what you were doing at my daughter’s apartment…"
"It’s probably best if you don’t" Shane advised.
"There’s just too many coincidences in this for my liking" Bette continued.
"I’m just not sure I can quite believe that one of my daughter’s would kidnap the other"
"I know this can’t be easy to hear, but I really do think she’s involved somehow. After all, she does hate Tina doesn’t she?"
"I’m not sure hate is even the right word….she’s more like to just pretend she doesn’t exist than show any real emotion towards her"
"Do you know what car Charlotte drives?" Shane asked.
"Umm….last time I saw her I think she had a sports car of some kind. I’m afraid I’m not too good with makes and all that business"
"So definitely not an SUV then?"
"God no, she hates the things. She always used to complain about SUV drivers"
"Do you know anyone who does drive an SUV?" Bette rejoined the questioning.
"The only person I know is John, my husband"
"What colour is it?" Bette asked, not quite sure if she wanted to hear the answer.
"Black"
"Shit" both Bette and Shane said at the same time.
Jackie’s eyes widened "You don’t seriously think…."
"Who’s the person in the world that hated T associating with anyone gay more than anyone else?" Bette reasoned.
"But he’s her father"
"Come on Jackie, he’s never acted like a father towards her. He’s even more homophobic than Henry"
"Bette….I was married to the man for more than 30 years. Sure, he’s a bully and a bigot….but a criminal? I just can’t see it"
"Deep rooted hatred can make people do all kinds of crazy things" Shane said knowingly "and they can justify their actions to themselves on account of their beliefs"
"But how would abducting her help with his beliefs?" Jackie asked, not quite wanting to believe that her family members were involved in such an act.
"That’s what we need to figure out" Bette said firmly.
"Do you have an address for him?" asked Shane.
"Yes but what are you going to do, just turn up at his house?"
"If we have to" Bette resolved.
"No offense, but I don’t think he’d take too kindly to either of you knocking on his door" Jackie told them.
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What can I say? I love you. Love this story. Liking the twist. Avoiding using subjects in my otherwise grammatically correct sentences – well, I hope they are. Either way, PPS!
Yes! I love this story! Thank you for not going in that direction. But I wonder what else we could have in common? Oh, nearly forgot, is Genner the jealous type? Why is she reading your response to my comment? He he he, if she is, you are one lucky lady. After an argument make up sex with that type of person is more than HOT! I’m talking from experience (Liz)! Anyway, as always your writing is remarkable. Thank you for sharing girl
I love this story..can’t wait to see what happens next! I’m sorry you’re having a rough time with your diet..hang in there! I keep eating ice cream and thinking about you..lol!
So, good! You are doing a great job with this story. Hang in there Tina – Bette is on the way, I hope!
Diets do suck – moderation is so much easier – feeling your pain since today was the first day back at the gym! thanks for the homework break, chica!
i love this story and i can’t wait to read what happens next! Tina your superwomen is on the way baby!!
Nice flow… PPS :-) and I hope Bette’s temper wont put her in trouble when meet those bigots! (Although i kinda hope someone can SMACK some senses to them :-p )
Great post as always! Please, make them pay!
Just read all 3 of your updates. How excellent was that! What a twist! Thanks and love love love this story.
I hope,Tinas dad is not planing to “cure” his daughter by himself.Please let them find Tina soon.Great story.Thank you.
Please, don’t hurt Tina!
hanging onto the edge of me seat here. great great great. mmmmmmmmmmm me thinks the source of tina being gay is bette so here dad may go for her. that would hurt tina but wouldnt make her straight. hav been tellin peeps at work bout story to hav to giv updates lol ty ty ty :)
Hi BealsBaby, I have just caught up with the last few chapters as had a day’s vacation. Wow-wee what a turn up as Tina’s Dad is behind this kidnapping. It is such a shame that he believes that she can be cured of this disease by bible bashing and scripture readings. Her love for Bette is eternal and constant. Bette and Shane have been fun to read as their friendship grows. I am happy that Tina’s Mom is out of this loop and there to rebuild and support her daugther. So many threads and directions to go in. I can’t wait to read more. Many Thanks for keeping the faith. Bloody brilliant. Your Loyal Fan.
Gosh, now I dont know what to think. A couple chapters ago I thought Tina mentioned her mother being abused and now the woman says she wasn’t. And Tina’s pictures are in her dresser face down and the father has been gone for some time now. I think the woman is lying. Why would the pictures be face down if she lives alone. NOw to Tina’s father, (loosely) I certainly hope he does not intend to affect a “cure” himself or does he intend to bring dickhead henry along for the ride. Please don’t let him abuse Tina or let henry or any other male do that to her. I think she would fight like hell but I don’t put anything past any of those bigots by harming her in any way so they can do what it is they think is the thing to do. I’m trying to stay with this but don’t know if I can. Thanks for posting.
I think I am getting a little paranoid here. Why are the pictures face down? It is the mothers house now, right? You´d think that after reconciling with her long lost daughter… ? You have to wrap this up soon, I can´t stand homophobes and I really don´t want to throw my laptop through the window – so please give poor Bette (and me) a break! Interesting update. Thanks.
ADDICTED!