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    Thoughts – Chapter 1

    Story written on October 1, 2007 by TwistedTempest.
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    Dana and Alice go over things in their minds as Dinah Shore goes on.

    "You guys Dana’s hooking up!" I couldn’t believe what I had just heard on the other side, I hadn’t heard that much and that was my point usually when I phone Dana I would get a running commentary on what she had done and what she was going to do then there was the kissing noises in the back ground that along with the heavy breathing gave it away.

    "Oh my god. Its not the weird hopitality chick is it?" Tina said shaking me out of my thoughts.

    "Ok call me a hippie but that girl has some bad fucking vibes! I mean …and Dana’s judgement sucks right well except for Lara." I don’t know what it was but she creeped me out big time and I wasn’t afraid to let my friends know what I thought, god I never had been afraid to. But as the night drew on I kept thinking about them together. Eventually I shook the thoughts out of my head and we all fell asleep minus Dana.

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    Dana

    The photoshoot didn’t go too badly, considering I was practically sweating bullets from being so nervous. The weird Tonya lady kept trying to get people to back away from me, which I thought was a little rude. the attention was nice, and it wasn’t like I was being mobbed. Still, on our way back to the room, she kept shooing away the girls who came up to me to ask for autographs. I felt a little bad when she basically told them to leave in no uncertain terms. I just smiled and shrugged as Tonya kept leading me down the hallway…in the opposite direction of my room.

    Before I had a chance to ask what was going on, Tonya had opened her room door and shoved me against it, giving me some nonsense about how she’d been waiting all day to kiss me and so on. I…well, I guess I was flattered, but at the same time, I was completely uninterested. Still, I didn’t want to be rude and hurt my chances of more celebrity appearances in the future, so i kissed her back.

    Big mistake. The only way I could get through it was to think of Alice doing what Tonya currently was…only better. I got so into my fantasy that I let Tonya get me to the bed and remove my shirt before I really had a chance to process what was happening. By the time I came back to myself and realized that it was the creepy lady rather than Alice above me, it seemed like it was far too late to stop things. It looked like I was going to have to go through with this or risk hurting my career.

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    1. great start. yes i think you should definitely continue. i would love to see what would have happened if dana got rid of tonya sooner than she did. in my mind – i always thought alice started having feeling for dana around this time anyway. if not before. it was just the appearance of tonya that made her think – wow i think i like my best friend.

    2. i think its great to and both of you together on a story…this is gona be amazing!lol please keep posting i cant wait to see what happens with tonya and how al and dana get together!pps

    3. What a great writing combination – and I love the stories which build up to the Danish love affair, and hopefully this one will loose Tonya … quickly. Looking forward to more.

    4. Should you continue… Hmmmmmmm… Lemme think… YES!!! This is a very interesting view on Danish and I can’t wait to see where you take it. That and two of my favorite authors make this a must-have. Great start to it, too. The Dinah Shore weekend was such a fun episode. And I love how you get into Dana’s thought process with Tonya. I feel bad for Dana in that she felt she couldn’t stop Tonya that first time they were together. I can see that being her thought process, though (about her career) — that and having someone so excited to be with her. I hope this doesn’t mean you are giving up on your other stories: “You” and “Living for Love”.

    5. Hats off to you both, MT & TT. I have always wondered about how A felt as D walked into the Planet with her new hair do and her blue tank top and jeans. A said, “Kate Moss, eat your heart out!” and then “You Look Great.” Then Shane said to A, “What’re you doing.” Cause, A was checking D out. I always felt the show should have expanded on that and gone in depth with A & D relationship. I sort of felt cheated. What you two dynamic duo are doing is fantastic. I am really glad that you decided to write this and please continue. As for the plot, I always thought D could not have been that stupid to be dating a money grabber. I love your explanation of how A & D felt at the time. The dreams they had in the car, priceless. To me, it made no sense that D even let Tonya move in. I could see a one night stand but moving in was absurd. Maybe A could have a heart to heart talk with D before things went out of hands as was on the show. Maybe then Mr. Piddles’ life would be spared. You two rock!!!!!

    7. umm should you continue…hmmm…HELL YES!! Love it! I would also like to echo what a few posts have already said, if you can get Danish together quicker, and get rid of Ton Ton faster than they did on the show! Anyway I am total fan! PPS

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