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    Thoughts – Chapter 1

    Story written on October 1, 2007 by TwistedTempest.
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    Dana and Alice go over things in their minds as Dinah Shore goes on.

    "Yeah he’s Dana’s cat." Tina piped up.

    "I think that’s great. These decisions have to be made on a cat-by-cat basis. I cannot wait to meet Mr Piddles" Tonya replied. Well she sure squirmed her way out of that one I thought, I just couldn’t believe that Dana was being taken in with all the bullshit. I could do nothing but sit and stare out the window and listen to all this, it was making my stomah churn. We stopped and dropped Dana and Tonya off first, Tina was driving by this time and I think she could take no more. After we said bye I shut the door and looked at my friends.

    "What the fuck are we gonna do?" I asked looked over at Tina and Jenny.

    "About what?" Shane replied, I cannot believe I was hearing this was I the only one hearing all that crap on the way back. Was I the only one that thought Tonya was no good for Dana? Was I the only one that cared?

    "Don’t tell me you don’t think she’s trouble?" I said with a look of disbelief.

    "Well yeah the cat thing was a bit much." Shane sighed.

    "Yeah and that story about meeting Anne Heche. What was that about?" Tina added.

    "And you guys I gave her 50 bucks for the gas and I watched the meter, not to be crazy, it was $32.50 and she didn’t give me the change." I told my friends.

    "What? Why didn’t you say anything?" Shane asked.

    "I dunno, I guess I need more evidence or something. And what am I supposed to say? Dana your girlfriend’s a grifter. I mean she’s happy, I can’t," I replied. After that we drove the around dropping off each person in silence. I walked into my apartment and dropped my bags on the floor and slumped onto the sofa, what did Dana see in this girl its not like she was her type she was nothing like Lara.

    **********

    Dana

    I don’t know what possessed me to do it. Hell, I was ashamed walking back into the room the next morning. I didn’t tell Alice who I’d been with, but I didn’t have to. She already knew without me having to say a word.

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    1. great start. yes i think you should definitely continue. i would love to see what would have happened if dana got rid of tonya sooner than she did. in my mind – i always thought alice started having feeling for dana around this time anyway. if not before. it was just the appearance of tonya that made her think – wow i think i like my best friend.

    2. i think its great to and both of you together on a story…this is gona be amazing!lol please keep posting i cant wait to see what happens with tonya and how al and dana get together!pps

    3. What a great writing combination – and I love the stories which build up to the Danish love affair, and hopefully this one will loose Tonya … quickly. Looking forward to more.

    4. Should you continue… Hmmmmmmm… Lemme think… YES!!! This is a very interesting view on Danish and I can’t wait to see where you take it. That and two of my favorite authors make this a must-have. Great start to it, too. The Dinah Shore weekend was such a fun episode. And I love how you get into Dana’s thought process with Tonya. I feel bad for Dana in that she felt she couldn’t stop Tonya that first time they were together. I can see that being her thought process, though (about her career) — that and having someone so excited to be with her. I hope this doesn’t mean you are giving up on your other stories: “You” and “Living for Love”.

    5. Hats off to you both, MT & TT. I have always wondered about how A felt as D walked into the Planet with her new hair do and her blue tank top and jeans. A said, “Kate Moss, eat your heart out!” and then “You Look Great.” Then Shane said to A, “What’re you doing.” Cause, A was checking D out. I always felt the show should have expanded on that and gone in depth with A & D relationship. I sort of felt cheated. What you two dynamic duo are doing is fantastic. I am really glad that you decided to write this and please continue. As for the plot, I always thought D could not have been that stupid to be dating a money grabber. I love your explanation of how A & D felt at the time. The dreams they had in the car, priceless. To me, it made no sense that D even let Tonya move in. I could see a one night stand but moving in was absurd. Maybe A could have a heart to heart talk with D before things went out of hands as was on the show. Maybe then Mr. Piddles’ life would be spared. You two rock!!!!!

    7. umm should you continue…hmmm…HELL YES!! Love it! I would also like to echo what a few posts have already said, if you can get Danish together quicker, and get rid of Ton Ton faster than they did on the show! Anyway I am total fan! PPS

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