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    Thoughts – Chapter 1

    Story written on October 1, 2007 by TwistedTempest.
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    Dana and Alice go over things in their minds as Dinah Shore goes on.

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    Alice

    I woke up feeling like I had a mouthful of cotton wool, I dragged my heavy bones out the bed and went over to the table I picked up a bottle of spring water and quenched my thirst. I did note that the first thing that was on my mind this morning was the same as the last thing on my mind last night, Dana. Why was I thinking so much about my best friend and why was it bothering me so much that she never came back to the hotel room last night? I turned to see Jenny rising from the bed and stretching her arms, then I heard a key being put in the door, it could have only been one person. I ran over and shoved Jenny back down and took a leap and belly flopped on the bed near knocking Tina off, I pretended to be asleep but I heard Dana open the door then close it. She was trying to be quiet not to wake anyone, as I heard her walk past my bed I jumped up and grabbed her and swung her round so she was on the bed and I was on top of her. Looking down into her sparkly eyes.

    "Tell me everything, tell me everything. Where were you?" I repeated as Dana and I wrestled on the bed. I was hoping she would tell me that she got drunk with some of the sponsors and fell asleep, but deep down I knew the truth and it was eating me up. Dana never got the chance to explain where she had been because the next thing we knew Shane had joined in and threw her lanky body on top of us making Tina jump up to see what was going on. After Tina climbed out the bed and called Bette she then too joined us wrestling on the bed, leaving a daze and confused Jenny in her own bed looking over at us. After we got ready Dana had some autograph things to attend. We all got packed and made our way down to the front doors to load the car up. I looked around to see where Dana was.

    "Where’s Dana?" I asked no one in particular.

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    1. great start. yes i think you should definitely continue. i would love to see what would have happened if dana got rid of tonya sooner than she did. in my mind – i always thought alice started having feeling for dana around this time anyway. if not before. it was just the appearance of tonya that made her think – wow i think i like my best friend.

    2. i think its great to and both of you together on a story…this is gona be amazing!lol please keep posting i cant wait to see what happens with tonya and how al and dana get together!pps

    3. What a great writing combination – and I love the stories which build up to the Danish love affair, and hopefully this one will loose Tonya … quickly. Looking forward to more.

    4. Should you continue… Hmmmmmmm… Lemme think… YES!!! This is a very interesting view on Danish and I can’t wait to see where you take it. That and two of my favorite authors make this a must-have. Great start to it, too. The Dinah Shore weekend was such a fun episode. And I love how you get into Dana’s thought process with Tonya. I feel bad for Dana in that she felt she couldn’t stop Tonya that first time they were together. I can see that being her thought process, though (about her career) — that and having someone so excited to be with her. I hope this doesn’t mean you are giving up on your other stories: “You” and “Living for Love”.

    5. Hats off to you both, MT & TT. I have always wondered about how A felt as D walked into the Planet with her new hair do and her blue tank top and jeans. A said, “Kate Moss, eat your heart out!” and then “You Look Great.” Then Shane said to A, “What’re you doing.” Cause, A was checking D out. I always felt the show should have expanded on that and gone in depth with A & D relationship. I sort of felt cheated. What you two dynamic duo are doing is fantastic. I am really glad that you decided to write this and please continue. As for the plot, I always thought D could not have been that stupid to be dating a money grabber. I love your explanation of how A & D felt at the time. The dreams they had in the car, priceless. To me, it made no sense that D even let Tonya move in. I could see a one night stand but moving in was absurd. Maybe A could have a heart to heart talk with D before things went out of hands as was on the show. Maybe then Mr. Piddles’ life would be spared. You two rock!!!!!

    7. umm should you continue…hmmm…HELL YES!! Love it! I would also like to echo what a few posts have already said, if you can get Danish together quicker, and get rid of Ton Ton faster than they did on the show! Anyway I am total fan! PPS

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