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Thoughts – Chapter 1
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"Saying goodbye to her fans." Shane replied as we continued packing the car up. Once the car was packed Shane climbed into the drivers seat and I opened the door just about to get in the passengers seat when I heard Shane.
"Shit!" Shane breathed.
"What?" I asked as I climbed in and closed the door then I saw Shane was looking behind me so I looked over my should to see what she was referring to. "She is not. She’s not." I said to Shane when my eyes saw what Shane’s did. Walking towards the minivan was Dana and Tonya hand in hand and Tonya had her luggage.
"Hey guys you remember Tonya, right?" Dana asked as she approached the minivan. How the fuck could we forget her I thought to myself.
"Uh-huh" I heard Tina reply and when I turned to see her she had her eyes shut and I knew what she was thinking because right at that moment I think all of us were thinking the same. Please say she isn’t coming with us!
"She’s coming with us." Dana announced. There she had said those four words I did not want to hear. What was I to do I looked at everyone and they weren’t going to say anything so Dana put Tonya’s bag in the minivan and they climbed in. All the way home we had to listen to her talk non stop all the way home I could see she was bugging Tina and Jenny, and listen to Dana encouraging her was driving me nuts. After the flirting came a question I thought would put the nail in the coffin of this "relationship" before it had started.
"Cat or Dog person? Please say dog because I hate cats. I think they’re so cold and unfeeling," Tonya said making everyone in the vehicle look at one another once again.
"Well some of them can be but some of them are almost human," came Dana’s shocked reply. If I knew one thing that was that Dana loved Mr Piddles.
"You think?" Tonya asked.
"Mine is. I really love Mr Piddles." Dana replied. I hated sitting in the front listening to all this crap.
"Mr Piddles?" Tonya asked. I tell you right there and then I almost burst out laughing at the look on her face.
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great start. yes i think you should definitely continue. i would love to see what would have happened if dana got rid of tonya sooner than she did. in my mind – i always thought alice started having feeling for dana around this time anyway. if not before. it was just the appearance of tonya that made her think – wow i think i like my best friend.
i think its great to and both of you together on a story…this is gona be amazing!lol please keep posting i cant wait to see what happens with tonya and how al and dana get together!pps
What a great writing combination – and I love the stories which build up to the Danish love affair, and hopefully this one will loose Tonya … quickly. Looking forward to more.
Should you continue… Hmmmmmmm… Lemme think… YES!!! This is a very interesting view on Danish and I can’t wait to see where you take it. That and two of my favorite authors make this a must-have. Great start to it, too. The Dinah Shore weekend was such a fun episode. And I love how you get into Dana’s thought process with Tonya. I feel bad for Dana in that she felt she couldn’t stop Tonya that first time they were together. I can see that being her thought process, though (about her career) — that and having someone so excited to be with her. I hope this doesn’t mean you are giving up on your other stories: “You” and “Living for Love”.
Hats off to you both, MT & TT. I have always wondered about how A felt as D walked into the Planet with her new hair do and her blue tank top and jeans. A said, “Kate Moss, eat your heart out!” and then “You Look Great.” Then Shane said to A, “What’re you doing.” Cause, A was checking D out. I always felt the show should have expanded on that and gone in depth with A & D relationship. I sort of felt cheated. What you two dynamic duo are doing is fantastic. I am really glad that you decided to write this and please continue. As for the plot, I always thought D could not have been that stupid to be dating a money grabber. I love your explanation of how A & D felt at the time. The dreams they had in the car, priceless. To me, it made no sense that D even let Tonya move in. I could see a one night stand but moving in was absurd. Maybe A could have a heart to heart talk with D before things went out of hands as was on the show. Maybe then Mr. Piddles’ life would be spared. You two rock!!!!!
Fantoosh guys! Man I hate Tonya, now even more!!
umm should you continue…hmmm…HELL YES!! Love it! I would also like to echo what a few posts have already said, if you can get Danish together quicker, and get rid of Ton Ton faster than they did on the show! Anyway I am total fan! PPS
definitely continue. yes, yes please:D