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Three is Not a Crowd – Part 2
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Bettes throat gave a deep guttural moan as her mind registered Tinas actions, her body jerked as Tina made contact with the hyper sensitive area and slowly slid past it only to repeat the action slowly back and forth.
Bettes fingers mirrored the movements of her partners, as both sets of fingers sashayed between the lustrous folds, their timing holding the same synchronization as their co-joined lips, the intensity between them building with every stroke, as their arousal neared its peak they both slowed their lips and quickened their fingers, small moans coming from both mouths, only to become a united sound between them as the sounds rippled through their coupled lips.
As their stroking intensified, intuition took over and they both knew that within the next few seconds their blissful union would simultaneously reach their pinnacle, their bodies jerked, their bodies stilled, the waves overtaking them, allowing them to concurrently float into oblivion, their lips motionless as their peaks gently subsided.
Bette raised her head to look into Tinas eyes, “thank you for making my birthday so special T, I love you so much.”
Tina smirked, knowing that this afternoons plan, if it came off, was going to blow Bettes mind, “it aint over yet baby, this is just the beginning”
As they lounged by the pool, taking in the suns gentle rays, steeling glances, sharing smiles and idle chatter, Tina looked at her watch, which Bette noticed.
“You gotta be somewhere T?”
“We, actually. Come on, Im taking you out for the afternoon!”
“Where are we going?”
“Its a surprise!”
Bette looked at her with raised eyebrows, “you going to give me any clues to work on?”
“Nope!”
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Tina pulled the car up in front of the Marriott Hotel, glancing over at Bette who looked extremely perplexed.
“What are we doing here T?”
“Come on, I told you it was a surprise, and so this is the surprise, Ive booked us a room!”
“Why?”
“So we can spend time alone, have room service whenever we want, so we can make love anytime or way we want, and be pampered for your birthday!”
“T, really, you didnt have to do this, we can be alone at home, the girls know that we have my birthday together, they wouldnt have interrupted us. You dont have to do this T, this is an expensive hotel, why dont you cancel the reservation and we can spend time alone at home and you have already spent far too much money for my birthday!”
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The synergy of you two is fucking amazing. Now, if IC would have this as the final season episode of TLW, it would make many people happy. But that doesn’t seem to be her goal for this show.
It raining like hell here in Texas, I;m going to save on the water and go stand in the cold rain That was hot,never in my wildest dream would i believed that Tina would share Bette with another woman. I never would. thanks
OMG YAY! You know how much I dream about tibette & Helena gettin it on! WoOoOo Sweet! As, I can not wait for the next Chap! Gd collab
WOW! And I thought that you both wrote so well individually. Ally with your so well writen stories without anything left out and Jobage with your gallery scene, I am left speechless. My dreams are no where as hot as this. Keep this up and this site will explode.
Damn this is hot and this is gonna be unbeleivable. OK let see whats next, thanks!
un-fucking-believable!! holy hell u guys r so bad!! in such a good way! i want so much more!!
Hey hey flames all over the north east of england soon to be a national water shortage – that was fantastic girls i dont comment a lot being a bit shy but HOLY CRAP this deserves comments regardless – cant wait for the next one but maybe it should come with a fire hazard warning!!!
Somebody call 911, I’m on fire.
Trust me gals -if you thought that was hot wait until you see the next chapter. it made me blush as i wrote my part – and thats before Jo starts beefing it up. Jo – its a honour to work with you babe A x
OMG!!! It’s 6:30 in the morning and I’m about to have a f…ing heart attack!!
its not just WRITING love scenes where we Brit girls are creative !!
hm mm mm bloody hell maybe I should make a trip to England pretty soon. I never thought you girls over there would be so damn creative when it comes to love scenes.
Oh my fucking god, so hot and sexy – like Mad Maggot I’m on fire here….you both know I love you gals, brits are definitely the best :o)). Ally you have to stop those comments or I will not survive LOL. Your crazy brits – have a great sunday and thank you for this :o))
Okay, you guys CANNOT WAIT until next sunday to post the next chapter. The set-up is absolutely suberb. I’m thinking 69’s for everybody!!! Please post soon!
Great comments so far, glad all the readers are enjoying the ride… so far… the next chapters comments will be reeeaalllyyy interesting… beacuse its reeeaalllyyy hot writing it… Al, my friend, I think we’re coming up with some good stuff here, great what the North East & South West can do together!
Holy Fuc**** Sh**! This is incredible. I mean WOW! I’m blown away at how hot that little snippet was; you have got to post the rest of this ASAP. I can’t wait to read what happens when they really get down to business. Who’s going to tatse whom; and whose going to touch whom…..i can’t even think staright at this point. I can’t wait for the continuation of Bette’s b-day celebration.
OMFG!!!! This is so hot, please don’t leave us hanging for too long.
Ally, you are so bad but in a good way. You and Jo are both such fantastic writers individually, but this collaberation is just–there aren’t any words to describe it. I know everyone wants the next chapter ASAP, but take as much time as you both need to write the next chapter.
wow, I swear this is amazing…and I think we need to have another award level for best NC-17…Jobadge you are the bomb, both of you together are amazing talent that we are greateful to have!!! Go girls…got o love those brits…
fuck… i need a cold shower… hell i should just jump into the frozen pool… dam girls… this is so fucking good… please please post again…
You saucy English wenches! Could this turn into a regular thing, like a weekly bridge club? OK, Ally, we’ve discussed this, I’ve warned you, but as you’re in collaboration with Jo, I’m only giving you half a demerit for the ‘mocha’ thing. From here on out, if either of you pulls that one out, I’m jumping all over you! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter, you naughty things.
OMG this story makes me so proud to be british lol hot hot hot damn cant wait to see the rest of the action post asap dnt think i can wait a week great girls
And British minds and imaginations are hot hot HHOOTTT!!! Wow!!! Please keep on writing. I’m looking forward to another chapter from you BBaB!
Absolutely great stuff. I totaly love the story and can’t wait to read more. Really f*ing amazing. My respect and post soon.
man post now!!!
We’re both typing as fast as we can!!!
i guess i’m in minority but i was just laughing through the last part…not because it’s not hot, it was…but i’m an old fashioned girl, three-some just doesn’t do it for me knowing that B&T are in a loving commited relationship…i could understand if they were in trouble like it happened on QAF…sorry…or maybe i’m just too straight to let my imagination go wild…great writing though…whatever make pps happy