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Three is Not a Crowd – Part 2
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Bette was met with a steely gaze from Tina, “I wanted to do this for you and only you, its your birthday, please allow me to spoil you and indulge you, its my way of showing you how much I love you, I like to make your birthday special babe, and this year is now exception, well the only exception is that I love you far more this birthday than I did your last birthday!”
Their eyes met, Bette knew she was in a no win situation, Tina wanted to do this for her, to deny her this pleasure would upset the one and only thing that meant the world to her, and she was not about to do that.
“Ok, Im sorry sweetheart, youve just made the day so special already, forgive me?”
“Of course, come here” Tina leaned over to meet Bette in the middle, their lips met in an intimate, precious kiss between two uniquely joined souls.
Once check in was completed they made their way up in the lift, sharing kisses as the metal box began its ascent, the ding confirming they had reached their floor. They exited the lift hand in hand and walked to their designated room, Tina unlocked the door for them to enter.
They both walked to the window, looking out at the view over city, the mid afternoon hustle and bustle building toward the early evening rush hour traffic; Tina stood behind Bette and wrapped her arms around her midriff, kissing the back of her neck, smelling the fresh aroma of her shampoo from their earlier shower.
“Bette?”
“Mmmm” Bette eyes were closed, enjoying the closeness of Tina, the feel of her lips on the back of her neck.
“I just want you to know that I love you so, so much. I never want you to lose focus of that, how much I love you and that everything and anything I do is because of how much I love you, OK?”
“I know how much you love me sweetheart; I just hope you know that I love you in the same way”
A knock at the door interrupted their words, they looked at one another, Tina responded and called out, “whos there?”
“Room Service,” came the reply.
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The synergy of you two is fucking amazing. Now, if IC would have this as the final season episode of TLW, it would make many people happy. But that doesn’t seem to be her goal for this show.
It raining like hell here in Texas, I;m going to save on the water and go stand in the cold rain That was hot,never in my wildest dream would i believed that Tina would share Bette with another woman. I never would. thanks
OMG YAY! You know how much I dream about tibette & Helena gettin it on! WoOoOo Sweet! As, I can not wait for the next Chap! Gd collab
WOW! And I thought that you both wrote so well individually. Ally with your so well writen stories without anything left out and Jobage with your gallery scene, I am left speechless. My dreams are no where as hot as this. Keep this up and this site will explode.
Damn this is hot and this is gonna be unbeleivable. OK let see whats next, thanks!
un-fucking-believable!! holy hell u guys r so bad!! in such a good way! i want so much more!!
Hey hey flames all over the north east of england soon to be a national water shortage – that was fantastic girls i dont comment a lot being a bit shy but HOLY CRAP this deserves comments regardless – cant wait for the next one but maybe it should come with a fire hazard warning!!!
Somebody call 911, I’m on fire.
Trust me gals -if you thought that was hot wait until you see the next chapter. it made me blush as i wrote my part – and thats before Jo starts beefing it up. Jo – its a honour to work with you babe A x
OMG!!! It’s 6:30 in the morning and I’m about to have a f…ing heart attack!!
its not just WRITING love scenes where we Brit girls are creative !!
hm mm mm bloody hell maybe I should make a trip to England pretty soon. I never thought you girls over there would be so damn creative when it comes to love scenes.
Oh my fucking god, so hot and sexy – like Mad Maggot I’m on fire here….you both know I love you gals, brits are definitely the best :o)). Ally you have to stop those comments or I will not survive LOL. Your crazy brits – have a great sunday and thank you for this :o))
Okay, you guys CANNOT WAIT until next sunday to post the next chapter. The set-up is absolutely suberb. I’m thinking 69’s for everybody!!! Please post soon!
Great comments so far, glad all the readers are enjoying the ride… so far… the next chapters comments will be reeeaalllyyy interesting… beacuse its reeeaalllyyy hot writing it… Al, my friend, I think we’re coming up with some good stuff here, great what the North East & South West can do together!
Holy Fuc**** Sh**! This is incredible. I mean WOW! I’m blown away at how hot that little snippet was; you have got to post the rest of this ASAP. I can’t wait to read what happens when they really get down to business. Who’s going to tatse whom; and whose going to touch whom…..i can’t even think staright at this point. I can’t wait for the continuation of Bette’s b-day celebration.
OMFG!!!! This is so hot, please don’t leave us hanging for too long.
Ally, you are so bad but in a good way. You and Jo are both such fantastic writers individually, but this collaberation is just–there aren’t any words to describe it. I know everyone wants the next chapter ASAP, but take as much time as you both need to write the next chapter.
wow, I swear this is amazing…and I think we need to have another award level for best NC-17…Jobadge you are the bomb, both of you together are amazing talent that we are greateful to have!!! Go girls…got o love those brits…
fuck… i need a cold shower… hell i should just jump into the frozen pool… dam girls… this is so fucking good… please please post again…
You saucy English wenches! Could this turn into a regular thing, like a weekly bridge club? OK, Ally, we’ve discussed this, I’ve warned you, but as you’re in collaboration with Jo, I’m only giving you half a demerit for the ‘mocha’ thing. From here on out, if either of you pulls that one out, I’m jumping all over you! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter, you naughty things.
OMG this story makes me so proud to be british lol hot hot hot damn cant wait to see the rest of the action post asap dnt think i can wait a week great girls
And British minds and imaginations are hot hot HHOOTTT!!! Wow!!! Please keep on writing. I’m looking forward to another chapter from you BBaB!
Absolutely great stuff. I totaly love the story and can’t wait to read more. Really f*ing amazing. My respect and post soon.
man post now!!!
We’re both typing as fast as we can!!!
i guess i’m in minority but i was just laughing through the last part…not because it’s not hot, it was…but i’m an old fashioned girl, three-some just doesn’t do it for me knowing that B&T are in a loving commited relationship…i could understand if they were in trouble like it happened on QAF…sorry…or maybe i’m just too straight to let my imagination go wild…great writing though…whatever make pps happy