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Three is Not a Crowd – Part 2
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“T, we havent ordered Room Service, maybe theyve come to the wrong room!” Bette said, noticing a certain look in Tinas eye, knowing that Tina knew something about this, “youd better get the door” as Tina made her way to the door, she glanced back to look at Bette, who had turned and continued to look out of the window.
Tina opened the door and beckoned the visitor in. The trolleys wheels giving a slight bump over the door threshold; the ice chinking against the expensive champagne bottle that was cooling in anticipation.
Bette turned to see the back of the room service attendant placing the wine cooler and two covered platters on the table, Tina stood watching, her face showing something Bette couldnt quite read.
As the items were placed the attendant walked back toward the door and closed it, turned the lock and turn to face the two hotel residents, she looked from one to the other as she began to slowly undo the buttons of her room service uniform. As her eyes glanced from Tinas to Bettes shocked, open mouth gaze, she spoke in a smouldering, sensual voice, “Hello Bette, I understand youre the birthday girl today”
“Helena.”
Tina looked at Bette and saw the look of sheer joy spread across her face. She was giving her wife the most unusual present she could ever manage. Helena was smiling and looking very beguiling in her little outfit. Bette looked from Helena to Tina and back again.
“Please tell me this isnt a dream, not that I would mind but it would be terrible if the alarm went off in the middle of this.”
“No Bette, it isnt a dream,” Tina assured her wife.
“Oh babe!”
They met in the centre of the room and Bette took Tina with one hand behind her head, her fingers grasping the blonde hair, she kissed her deeply, the love they shared never more all consuming than at this moment.
Tina ended the kiss, “Baby, I think you should greet Helena now.”
Helena was already battling with a throbbing clit just from the anticipation of this day and night they were going to share. Seeing the married couple in front of her aroused her more than she could ever try to put into words. They had no idea how beautiful they looked as a couple, Tina so innocent and Bette so obviously dangerous. Tina with her skin so milky; while Bettes contrasting mocha. Despite their differences they were both gorgeous, both sexy, the combination of them together, completely lethal.
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The synergy of you two is fucking amazing. Now, if IC would have this as the final season episode of TLW, it would make many people happy. But that doesn’t seem to be her goal for this show.
It raining like hell here in Texas, I;m going to save on the water and go stand in the cold rain That was hot,never in my wildest dream would i believed that Tina would share Bette with another woman. I never would. thanks
OMG YAY! You know how much I dream about tibette & Helena gettin it on! WoOoOo Sweet! As, I can not wait for the next Chap! Gd collab
WOW! And I thought that you both wrote so well individually. Ally with your so well writen stories without anything left out and Jobage with your gallery scene, I am left speechless. My dreams are no where as hot as this. Keep this up and this site will explode.
Damn this is hot and this is gonna be unbeleivable. OK let see whats next, thanks!
un-fucking-believable!! holy hell u guys r so bad!! in such a good way! i want so much more!!
Hey hey flames all over the north east of england soon to be a national water shortage – that was fantastic girls i dont comment a lot being a bit shy but HOLY CRAP this deserves comments regardless – cant wait for the next one but maybe it should come with a fire hazard warning!!!
Somebody call 911, I’m on fire.
Trust me gals -if you thought that was hot wait until you see the next chapter. it made me blush as i wrote my part – and thats before Jo starts beefing it up. Jo – its a honour to work with you babe A x
OMG!!! It’s 6:30 in the morning and I’m about to have a f…ing heart attack!!
its not just WRITING love scenes where we Brit girls are creative !!
hm mm mm bloody hell maybe I should make a trip to England pretty soon. I never thought you girls over there would be so damn creative when it comes to love scenes.
Oh my fucking god, so hot and sexy – like Mad Maggot I’m on fire here….you both know I love you gals, brits are definitely the best :o)). Ally you have to stop those comments or I will not survive LOL. Your crazy brits – have a great sunday and thank you for this :o))
Okay, you guys CANNOT WAIT until next sunday to post the next chapter. The set-up is absolutely suberb. I’m thinking 69’s for everybody!!! Please post soon!
Great comments so far, glad all the readers are enjoying the ride… so far… the next chapters comments will be reeeaalllyyy interesting… beacuse its reeeaalllyyy hot writing it… Al, my friend, I think we’re coming up with some good stuff here, great what the North East & South West can do together!
Holy Fuc**** Sh**! This is incredible. I mean WOW! I’m blown away at how hot that little snippet was; you have got to post the rest of this ASAP. I can’t wait to read what happens when they really get down to business. Who’s going to tatse whom; and whose going to touch whom…..i can’t even think staright at this point. I can’t wait for the continuation of Bette’s b-day celebration.
OMFG!!!! This is so hot, please don’t leave us hanging for too long.
Ally, you are so bad but in a good way. You and Jo are both such fantastic writers individually, but this collaberation is just–there aren’t any words to describe it. I know everyone wants the next chapter ASAP, but take as much time as you both need to write the next chapter.
wow, I swear this is amazing…and I think we need to have another award level for best NC-17…Jobadge you are the bomb, both of you together are amazing talent that we are greateful to have!!! Go girls…got o love those brits…
fuck… i need a cold shower… hell i should just jump into the frozen pool… dam girls… this is so fucking good… please please post again…
You saucy English wenches! Could this turn into a regular thing, like a weekly bridge club? OK, Ally, we’ve discussed this, I’ve warned you, but as you’re in collaboration with Jo, I’m only giving you half a demerit for the ‘mocha’ thing. From here on out, if either of you pulls that one out, I’m jumping all over you! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter, you naughty things.
OMG this story makes me so proud to be british lol hot hot hot damn cant wait to see the rest of the action post asap dnt think i can wait a week great girls
And British minds and imaginations are hot hot HHOOTTT!!! Wow!!! Please keep on writing. I’m looking forward to another chapter from you BBaB!
Absolutely great stuff. I totaly love the story and can’t wait to read more. Really f*ing amazing. My respect and post soon.
man post now!!!
We’re both typing as fast as we can!!!
i guess i’m in minority but i was just laughing through the last part…not because it’s not hot, it was…but i’m an old fashioned girl, three-some just doesn’t do it for me knowing that B&T are in a loving commited relationship…i could understand if they were in trouble like it happened on QAF…sorry…or maybe i’m just too straight to let my imagination go wild…great writing though…whatever make pps happy