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Timid Devotion (Part 1)
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"Eew, Shane!" Dana groaned, following Alice to the door. "And I am not meow whu-pssh’d, okay?"
Shane’s laughter died down with a smile still remaining, "Whatever you say."
"Bye guys," Alice waved as they shut the door behind them.
"Well, I think I’m gonna start cleaning up," Bette said with a smile, getting out of her chair.
"Do you want any help?" Shane asked as she finished off her beer as well.
"No, really I’m fine, but thank you Shane." she answered, taking all of the drinks from the coffee table and making her way to the kitchen. Tina just looked on, watching Bette’s legs and up to her ass. She turned away, blushing, as she hoped no one would notice.
"Well I think I’m gonna head out then," Shane smiled, looking to Tina, "Are you gonna be alright getting home?"
Tina smiled, realizing she would have to take a cab home. "Yeah." She was nearly entranced by Bette’s figure cleaning up in the kitchen. She snapped back to reality and looked back up to Shane.
"Okay, well, night ladies," Shane smiled, waving before exiting out the front door.
"Bye Shane," Bette and Tina shouted out simulatneously.
"So Tina," Bette started, "Would you mind bringing in the last two glasses in here by the counter?"
Tina’s eyes widened with excitement, realizing she was probably getting excited over nothing, but she didn’t care. Any closer to Bette would be a good thing. She picked up the glasses and slowly made her way to the kitchen, breathing very slowly at the same time. She put the glasses on the counter and turned her head slightly to see Bette already working on the dishes.
"So I don’t even think we’ve been properly introduced," Bette smiled warmly, turning to Tina, her hands still in the water.
"Uh … no, not really," Tina smiled shyly, taking a visible breath in.
"Well I’m Bette," the brunette said in a completely friendly tone, drying off her right hand off before offering it to the blonde. Tina wished there was some sort of other intention to helping her out with the dishes.
"Uhh …" Tina shivered, trying not to make her feelings too obvious, "Tina." She held out her hand as well, meeting Bette’s as another tingle shot down her spine.
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Yeh! I’m so glad you’re going to continue this!!!
Love it!!! Glad you are going to both stories. Thank you
Yeeeh! That was my favourite) pps!
YES!!!! lets continue to chat!! hehe..:)PPS
I like this story. They are both so uncomfortable it’s hilarious. I hope one of them gets some courage soon. Thanks for posting!
glad you decided to continue this one :) like the other one too!! PPS :) thanks
liking this update bring on some more
Wow oh Wow! I loved all three stories and I’m so glad that you will be following up with two of them. This was my favorite one because Tina and Bette are both so awkward with one another. It just makes me smile from ear to ear to see them stumble upon words they don’t really mean to say. I can’t wait for more! Congrats on your exams — I hope that gives you a lot of writing time!
Yeah East! – smile from ear to ear – they’re so cute together! Can’t wait to see how they or “who” breaks the ice! And they better hurry up cause it’s melting! Hurry now – don’t leave us as puddles on the floor!
Thanks for posting this story and so happy that you will continue both stories. I can’t believe how bashful both of them are at this moment. This is gonna be great. Thanks again for posting. PPS
Oh yeah, you’ve got me hooked, more please:)
They are so cute together. Both are scared to open up about their growing desire. Can’t wait for the next post.
Woohoo :D You’re back!!!! I’m happy story 3 was the winner…I’ll be waiting ;) but this one is fabulous too. Great work I guess we’ll have frequent posts now right????
Omg this is so good and like it!
I really like the title. Can’t wait for more~
Wauw – it´s like Christmas all over again. What a treat that you´ll do both.
So cute!
What a treat…both stories..but I am so happy you started with this one..thanks Bi…and I love the tension you writing them with…cant wiat for more…KISS HER ALREADY!!
I am enjoying this and can’t wait for more. pps
WOOHOO! Story #2 and #3? HOW LUCKY ARE WE? okay, there has got to be one innocent kiss coming soon?! You know where those “chats” can lead!! LOL :)
Great chapter. I’m glad you are going to continue with both stories I liked them all.
yay! I was so worried story no.2 would lose out to 3 as i never got to vote as i only found your stories today. Am i glad you chose to continue this story anyway. Yay!