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Timid Devotion (Part 1)
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"I could drive you if you want," Bette added, doing her absolute best not to crack a smile or show any emotion about it.
Tina looked on to see Bette’s complete disregard for her obvious feelings for her and looked to the floor. "Uh … no, it’s okay really." She took a few steps toward the door, letting out the breath she had been holding. ‘How could you be so stupid? She thinks of you as a dorky friend, you idiot!’ she thought to herself, shaking her head slowly as she approached the door.
"Tina?"
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Continued …
The blonde turned around, her hair slowly falling from her shoulders as she steadied her eye contact with Bette. The tension was unbelievable, but neither woman had the courage to speak up. Bette’s lips parted, unsure if she should tell Tina how she felt or just be nicer to her.
"Tina, why don’t you stay for another drink at least," Bette said, smiling after she finished her offer. She took in a deep, silent breath as she watched Tina’s eyes drop to the floor.
"Umm …" Tina wondered aloud, her heart beating even faster than before. She was incredibly nervous with this simple proposition. She was screaming at herself in her head until she finally responded. "Sure."
Bette let out her breath just as silently as it came in, and turned to the counter. "What’s your poison?"
Tina was confused for a moment before she saw Bette pouring her own drink. ‘Oh, she means alcohol’ Tina thought to herself with a smile. ‘The things Bette could teach me,’ and then she snapped out of it and shifted her weight onto her other foot, noticing that Bette was looking to her, waiting to hear what she wanted. She felt awkward, having shaken away her smile and standing on a trembling foot. "Umm … I guess a screwdriver," she said, as if she were asking a question.
Bette couldn’t help but smile at Tina’s choice. She didn’t think the word ‘screw’ would ever slip out of her mouth. "Wonderful choice."
While Bette poured her drink, Tina sat back down on the couch, waiting for Bette to take her favorite lounger. Once the brunette put their drinks down on the coffee table, she walked around it to the sofa Tina was sitting on.
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Yeh! I’m so glad you’re going to continue this!!!
Love it!!! Glad you are going to both stories. Thank you
Yeeeh! That was my favourite) pps!
YES!!!! lets continue to chat!! hehe..:)PPS
I like this story. They are both so uncomfortable it’s hilarious. I hope one of them gets some courage soon. Thanks for posting!
glad you decided to continue this one :) like the other one too!! PPS :) thanks
liking this update bring on some more
Wow oh Wow! I loved all three stories and I’m so glad that you will be following up with two of them. This was my favorite one because Tina and Bette are both so awkward with one another. It just makes me smile from ear to ear to see them stumble upon words they don’t really mean to say. I can’t wait for more! Congrats on your exams — I hope that gives you a lot of writing time!
Yeah East! – smile from ear to ear – they’re so cute together! Can’t wait to see how they or “who” breaks the ice! And they better hurry up cause it’s melting! Hurry now – don’t leave us as puddles on the floor!
Thanks for posting this story and so happy that you will continue both stories. I can’t believe how bashful both of them are at this moment. This is gonna be great. Thanks again for posting. PPS
Oh yeah, you’ve got me hooked, more please:)
They are so cute together. Both are scared to open up about their growing desire. Can’t wait for the next post.
Woohoo :D You’re back!!!! I’m happy story 3 was the winner…I’ll be waiting ;) but this one is fabulous too. Great work I guess we’ll have frequent posts now right????
Omg this is so good and like it!
I really like the title. Can’t wait for more~
Wauw – it´s like Christmas all over again. What a treat that you´ll do both.
So cute!
What a treat…both stories..but I am so happy you started with this one..thanks Bi…and I love the tension you writing them with…cant wiat for more…KISS HER ALREADY!!
I am enjoying this and can’t wait for more. pps
WOOHOO! Story #2 and #3? HOW LUCKY ARE WE? okay, there has got to be one innocent kiss coming soon?! You know where those “chats” can lead!! LOL :)
Great chapter. I’m glad you are going to continue with both stories I liked them all.
yay! I was so worried story no.2 would lose out to 3 as i never got to vote as i only found your stories today. Am i glad you chose to continue this story anyway. Yay!