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Timid Devotion (Part 1)
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"Nice to meet you Tina," Bette smiled, completely oblivious to what her attention was doing to the blonde. She was completely captivated by the girl, but was calmly covering it with her smooth talk, thinking that she was straight. She wished Tina was gay from the moment she saw her, because she had fallen head over heels. Because of this, she tried to distance herself from the girl to remind herself that she was off limits.
"Nice to meet you too," Tina nodded with a joyful smile. "Can I help you with the dishes?"
"No no," Bette smiled back, feeling tortured by Tina’s enthusiasm and attention. She didn’t know what to do to make the feeling go away. "I’m just getting the water in here, the dishes can soak for a while."
"Oh," Tina said, unsure of where to go from there. She was getting a high off of her private attention with the brunette and she didn’t want it to end anytime soon.
Bette threw the soaking wet tea towel to the side, deciding to use the other one. "Excuse me," she smiled, glad that Tina was facing the counter as she grabbed up by the cupboard for the other towel, accidentally brushing up against Tina’s ass. She was so embarrassed by her own quiet moan she had missed Tina’s gasp. If only she knew the blonde wanted to grind against her, stopping herself just in time.
There was something about this blonde that was driving Bette especially crazy. It wasn’t just how gorgeous she was, because Bette had been with many gorgeous women, but it was something more – something unexplainable. There was an electricity between Tina and herself, and she pulled away after what felt like ages.
"Tina, do you have a ride home?" Bette asked, just trying to be a nice hostess, but finding herself quickly falling apart at the sight of Tina biting her lower lip. She wished she could kiss her, be the one to bite her lip, play with her tongue. She shook her head after thinking these things. ‘She’s sweet little Tina, stop it! Stop it!’ she scolded herself, looking down to the dishes.
"Uh … yeah, I’m just gonna take a taxi." Tina smiled, unsure of how long she could pretend the proximity wasn’t killing her. She breathed in quietly, trying to think of anything but the terrible dirty things coursing through her mind.
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Yeh! I’m so glad you’re going to continue this!!!
Love it!!! Glad you are going to both stories. Thank you
Yeeeh! That was my favourite) pps!
YES!!!! lets continue to chat!! hehe..:)PPS
I like this story. They are both so uncomfortable it’s hilarious. I hope one of them gets some courage soon. Thanks for posting!
glad you decided to continue this one :) like the other one too!! PPS :) thanks
liking this update bring on some more
Wow oh Wow! I loved all three stories and I’m so glad that you will be following up with two of them. This was my favorite one because Tina and Bette are both so awkward with one another. It just makes me smile from ear to ear to see them stumble upon words they don’t really mean to say. I can’t wait for more! Congrats on your exams — I hope that gives you a lot of writing time!
Yeah East! – smile from ear to ear – they’re so cute together! Can’t wait to see how they or “who” breaks the ice! And they better hurry up cause it’s melting! Hurry now – don’t leave us as puddles on the floor!
Thanks for posting this story and so happy that you will continue both stories. I can’t believe how bashful both of them are at this moment. This is gonna be great. Thanks again for posting. PPS
Oh yeah, you’ve got me hooked, more please:)
They are so cute together. Both are scared to open up about their growing desire. Can’t wait for the next post.
Woohoo :D You’re back!!!! I’m happy story 3 was the winner…I’ll be waiting ;) but this one is fabulous too. Great work I guess we’ll have frequent posts now right????
Omg this is so good and like it!
I really like the title. Can’t wait for more~
Wauw – it´s like Christmas all over again. What a treat that you´ll do both.
So cute!
What a treat…both stories..but I am so happy you started with this one..thanks Bi…and I love the tension you writing them with…cant wiat for more…KISS HER ALREADY!!
I am enjoying this and can’t wait for more. pps
WOOHOO! Story #2 and #3? HOW LUCKY ARE WE? okay, there has got to be one innocent kiss coming soon?! You know where those “chats” can lead!! LOL :)
Great chapter. I’m glad you are going to continue with both stories I liked them all.
yay! I was so worried story no.2 would lose out to 3 as i never got to vote as i only found your stories today. Am i glad you chose to continue this story anyway. Yay!