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Timid Devotion (Part 1)
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"So, Tina," Bette started, facing the blonde with her arm resting on the headrest, "When did you move here?"
Tina began to feel all tingly with the brunette so close to her. She wished that Bette’s hand would slide down onto her shoulder and pull her closer. Again, she visibly shook her head to rid herself of such thoughts. She took her drink in her hand. "About a month ago."
"Wow, you really haven’t been here long then," Bette smiled again, making Tina blush. She could feel the beautiful brunette’s eyes on her again. She knew that Bette could probably tell, but she wasn’t sure. She decided to take a sip of her drink.
Bette sat back watching Tina blush. Suddenly she panicked. ‘Ah crap, I made her blush! Was that a good blush or an uncomfortable blush? Am I making her uncomfortable? Shit! I just want to get to know her.’ She sat up further and took her arm off the couch and put it into her lap, taking another deep breath as she took her own drink in her hands. She hoped she wouldn’t scare off the blonde.
"I’m not shy," Tina blurted, looking to her side at Bette with those big hazel eyes. She meant that she wanted Bette and she could hardly wait to feel her closer, but it didn’t come out quite right.
Bette looked on in amusement at the blonde’s statement and smiled. The moment was quiet, and oddly comforting. The brunette felt all warm inside, feeling a kind of familiarity with the girl beside her. "I know."
Tina smiled back, fiddling with the drink in her hands. Bette didn’t know why Tina had said that, because she obviously was shy. Did she want Bette to think she wasn’t shy? Bette was utterly confused, but pressed on with the conversation.
"So, when did you meet Alice?" she asked, taking another sip of her rum and coke. "She tells me a few weeks ago?"
"Yup … yeah, a few weeks ago at the grocery store actually," Tina smiled, turning her body slightly towards Bette to be able to talk face-to-face. This pleased Bette, allowing her to assume she wasn’t scaring the blonde off. "I was looking for this special mix of soup and I couldn’t find it, so I went up to this woman wearing a blue vest, tapped her on the shoulder and asked her."
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Yeh! I’m so glad you’re going to continue this!!!
Love it!!! Glad you are going to both stories. Thank you
Yeeeh! That was my favourite) pps!
YES!!!! lets continue to chat!! hehe..:)PPS
I like this story. They are both so uncomfortable it’s hilarious. I hope one of them gets some courage soon. Thanks for posting!
glad you decided to continue this one :) like the other one too!! PPS :) thanks
liking this update bring on some more
Wow oh Wow! I loved all three stories and I’m so glad that you will be following up with two of them. This was my favorite one because Tina and Bette are both so awkward with one another. It just makes me smile from ear to ear to see them stumble upon words they don’t really mean to say. I can’t wait for more! Congrats on your exams — I hope that gives you a lot of writing time!
Yeah East! – smile from ear to ear – they’re so cute together! Can’t wait to see how they or “who” breaks the ice! And they better hurry up cause it’s melting! Hurry now – don’t leave us as puddles on the floor!
Thanks for posting this story and so happy that you will continue both stories. I can’t believe how bashful both of them are at this moment. This is gonna be great. Thanks again for posting. PPS
Oh yeah, you’ve got me hooked, more please:)
They are so cute together. Both are scared to open up about their growing desire. Can’t wait for the next post.
Woohoo :D You’re back!!!! I’m happy story 3 was the winner…I’ll be waiting ;) but this one is fabulous too. Great work I guess we’ll have frequent posts now right????
Omg this is so good and like it!
I really like the title. Can’t wait for more~
Wauw – it´s like Christmas all over again. What a treat that you´ll do both.
So cute!
What a treat…both stories..but I am so happy you started with this one..thanks Bi…and I love the tension you writing them with…cant wiat for more…KISS HER ALREADY!!
I am enjoying this and can’t wait for more. pps
WOOHOO! Story #2 and #3? HOW LUCKY ARE WE? okay, there has got to be one innocent kiss coming soon?! You know where those “chats” can lead!! LOL :)
Great chapter. I’m glad you are going to continue with both stories I liked them all.
yay! I was so worried story no.2 would lose out to 3 as i never got to vote as i only found your stories today. Am i glad you chose to continue this story anyway. Yay!