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Timid Devotion (Part 16)
Tina smiled, "I just find it hard to believe that you want me as much as I want you."
Bette laughed at that, "I don’t think it’s possible that you want me as much I want you. Especially … right now …" she finished, trailing off as she began to stare at the blonde’s breasts again.
"Do you get all tingly too?" she asked innocently, shaking her shoulders gently to emphasize her words. "I feel …"
Bette focused on the throbbing between her legs and smiled up at Tina, "Yes. I do." She smiled at her thought, and decided to act on it. "Is it tingly when I do this?"
She touched only her fingers to Tina’s legs, softly caressing up to her hips. She watched as Tina’s eyes closed, her breathing halted and her lips parted. Bette enjoyed her reaction.
"Yes," the blonde whispered, barely audible.
"And … this?" Bette asked again, bringing her hand up and allowing her fingers to trace from Tina’s neck, trickling down her cleavage, and down to her bellybutton before pulling away.
"You’re touching me," Tina whispered, "It feels so good Bette … I’ve just … it’s never felt like this before."
Bette smiled, "Yeah?"
"Yes," Tina breathed again, softly starting to grind into Bette’s lap. The brunette rested her hands on Tina’s hips and looked up to her expression.
"T?"
"Yeah," Tina whispered, sounding very much like a moan.
"Tina?"
"Bette," Tina moaned softly, arching her back slightly as she bit her lower lip.
"Hunny … this is teasing me too much …" Bette whispered up to her as Tina slowly snapped out of it.
"Bette."
"Hey," the brunette smiled, holding Tina’s hands in hers.
"Why did you do that?" Tina asked with confusion written all over her face.
"Just wanted to see what your reaction was," Bette smiled, "I liked it."
"Could you tell that I like it when you touch me?"
Bette smiled, "Yes." She let go of Tina’s hands, "You’d better get up though before I really lose it."
Tina giggled, "Okay," she answered, getting off of her. "I just … this feeling is so new to me. It’s never felt that way with anyone else. It’s strange to be so aroused so easily now."
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(47 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
I really hope that Tina will be ready soon. I don’t know how much longer Bette can hold out. Bette is being really sweet though, I love how she is so patient. =) PPS!!
OMG! How is Bette surviving all this endless teasing??? I am so in awe of her patience. Tina will be absolutely kicking herself for waiting so long once she finally conquers her apprehension. I just want to say…the erotic dancing is going to kill me!!! AGGHHHH! Bring it on!!!
Amazing amazing amazing writing!!! OHHHH Tina PLEASE be ready!!!! I can’t wait!!! Poor Bette! :) PPS!!!
OoooOOOooo…They’re going dancing with Tina commando? Bette’s in for the time of her life! I liked Alice’s voicemails…Haha
This is an achingly slow burn…but I like it!!!!!!
I was just thinkin’….could you give me ample warning when you decide to post “the deed”? You know I’m going to end up on the floor and I’d rather get there and wait for it than fall. LMAO
Tina may be Superman’s daughter with the ability to change that fast and in turn being Bette’s Kryptonite!
Good gracious alive, what is Tina doing to Bette. Both are going to melt into a puddle of butter with love as a topping. Maybe it is time to stretch a little further on Tina’s end of the deal.
That was great and hope Tina will be ready for the next chapter cause she is killing Bette and us here lol. Please post more, thanks!
is tina going to be ready in the next chapter or you’re still in the mood to torture us a little bit more? :) lovely update!
I’m glad that you have them taking their time. Tina still has a couple things to sort out. Soon it will fall into place, but no more advice from Alice. :) Thanks for posting!
love it, love it, love it!!
Bette is being really good! i wonder who will crack first!:)
Alice is so funny. I hope Tina gives Bette some loving some, before she explodes. They are both dressed to kill. Great post. PPS
hmmm why is tina not ready and what does she not have on under her dress….humorous
Let the teasing continue over dinner…
Brilliant Chapter – Really enjoying this story, and I say torture us some more…Imao – Its so fun to read! PPVS xx
Oh man! I don’t know who’s getting tortured .. Bette or us :) Are you going to allow them and us to finally get some relief. Thank you for posting and glad you’re feeling better :)
Wow..how do you make them so breathless,with so little effort?! It’s just keeps getting better and better..but phew!! Talk about some foreplay!! I don’t think poor Bette’s gonna make it!! And I don’t think she even really wants to at this point. Thank you my friend!!
I am such a fan! I always feel a bit happier when I see you’ve updated… Inspire me to sit down and try to write something! Anyways greatbupdate as always… I wonder what tuna said to alice? Thanks for updating!
I meant Tina by the way not tuna LOL typing on a phone is difficult apologies LOL
i love ittttttttttttt. listrn i dont thing i ever been teased like ur doinh to us in my life. bette is amazing and tina is so sweet and innocent its so lovely how bette is keeping her safe. torture us a little bit more plssssss
I actually like your teasing)))
ok I am bette to crack first…these two are lovely but killing each other or at least one of them are…Alice is being Alice…so I wonder what holding Tina back..?? Then again maybe a twirl on the dance floor with her Bette will push her in the right direction..
I bet Tina cracks first…it will be Bette’s reward for all that will-power and restraint. She does deserve an award!
Tina’s more than ready, except Alice probabaly scared the crap outta her with her advice, and Tina knowing Bette’s past probably isn’t helping either, she’s just scared she won’t please her woman the way she knows she’s gonna be pleased! Wonder how torturous dinner is gonna be…and what’s really for dessert?? PPS:)
So, she has probably never had an orgasm, huh? Interesting! Something to look forward to..
there is nothing wrong with waiting but what is alice up to? :)PPS
Aweosme as always….and its so interesting, with the two stories…how different the characters are. I am impressed you don’t get confused…lol…but I like the progress of this story, and they are so super sweet together…thanks again Bi…xxx