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Timid Devotion (Part 16)
Bette smiled at her words, "Maybe that’s because this is right for you." She got up and stood in front of Tina. "Does it feel right?"
Tina smiled as she looked to the ground, "Every time you touch me … I just want to explode …"
Bette smirked and pulled Tina to her, feeling Tina’s head against her neck. "Aww … well don’t explode just yet."
Tina chuckled and brought her head back up. "This is perfect, Bette."
Bette’s eyes searched her girlfriend’s with a smile. "Yes, it is."
"Okay, well I’m just gonna get naked and jump into the shower," Tina smirked, pulling away from the brunette.
"Ahh why do you do that to me when you know how much agony it brings me?" Bette chuckled, shaking her head at her own misery.
"Because it’s fun to know I can tease you," Tina smiled, walking down the hall, "Besides, you’re doing really well."
Bette dropped her head back and brought her hands up with frustration. She smiled at Tina’s figure which quickly disappeared into the bathroom.
"Fuck," Bette mumbled with a smile, moving over to check her phone messages.
"Hey Bette, it’s your best friend in the whole world who needs no intro, and I was just calling to say maaaybe I said some … things to Tina that you wouldn’t like," Alice started, her voice slightly scrambled from the recording, but Bette could still hear her laughing, "So I mean, if you want to hear about it … just gimme a call! You know you waaant to! You know you looove me. You know you-"
Bette clicked next, shaking her head. "Idiot." She waited for the next message to start playing.
"K-I-S-S-I-N-"
Bette skipped it again, hearing Alice’s voice once again.
"Alice," Bette sighed, trying not to laugh at her shenanigans. No more messages. She picked up the phone and dialed Alice’s number.
"Howdy!"
"Alice," Bette started, "What did you do now?"
"Oh hey grumpy pants," Alice smiled, "Okay, so this is how it went down. Tina called me like a few days ago. Like that day we all found out about you guys or whatever, and …"
"What?" Bette asked, already becoming impatient.
"Don’t get your boxers in a bunch."
"I don’t wear boxers," Bette said, making a face at Alice’s remark.
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(47 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
I really hope that Tina will be ready soon. I don’t know how much longer Bette can hold out. Bette is being really sweet though, I love how she is so patient. =) PPS!!
OMG! How is Bette surviving all this endless teasing??? I am so in awe of her patience. Tina will be absolutely kicking herself for waiting so long once she finally conquers her apprehension. I just want to say…the erotic dancing is going to kill me!!! AGGHHHH! Bring it on!!!
Amazing amazing amazing writing!!! OHHHH Tina PLEASE be ready!!!! I can’t wait!!! Poor Bette! :) PPS!!!
OoooOOOooo…They’re going dancing with Tina commando? Bette’s in for the time of her life! I liked Alice’s voicemails…Haha
This is an achingly slow burn…but I like it!!!!!!
I was just thinkin’….could you give me ample warning when you decide to post “the deed”? You know I’m going to end up on the floor and I’d rather get there and wait for it than fall. LMAO
Tina may be Superman’s daughter with the ability to change that fast and in turn being Bette’s Kryptonite!
Good gracious alive, what is Tina doing to Bette. Both are going to melt into a puddle of butter with love as a topping. Maybe it is time to stretch a little further on Tina’s end of the deal.
That was great and hope Tina will be ready for the next chapter cause she is killing Bette and us here lol. Please post more, thanks!
is tina going to be ready in the next chapter or you’re still in the mood to torture us a little bit more? :) lovely update!
I’m glad that you have them taking their time. Tina still has a couple things to sort out. Soon it will fall into place, but no more advice from Alice. :) Thanks for posting!
love it, love it, love it!!
Bette is being really good! i wonder who will crack first!:)
Alice is so funny. I hope Tina gives Bette some loving some, before she explodes. They are both dressed to kill. Great post. PPS
hmmm why is tina not ready and what does she not have on under her dress….humorous
Let the teasing continue over dinner…
Brilliant Chapter – Really enjoying this story, and I say torture us some more…Imao – Its so fun to read! PPVS xx
Oh man! I don’t know who’s getting tortured .. Bette or us :) Are you going to allow them and us to finally get some relief. Thank you for posting and glad you’re feeling better :)
Wow..how do you make them so breathless,with so little effort?! It’s just keeps getting better and better..but phew!! Talk about some foreplay!! I don’t think poor Bette’s gonna make it!! And I don’t think she even really wants to at this point. Thank you my friend!!
I am such a fan! I always feel a bit happier when I see you’ve updated… Inspire me to sit down and try to write something! Anyways greatbupdate as always… I wonder what tuna said to alice? Thanks for updating!
I meant Tina by the way not tuna LOL typing on a phone is difficult apologies LOL
i love ittttttttttttt. listrn i dont thing i ever been teased like ur doinh to us in my life. bette is amazing and tina is so sweet and innocent its so lovely how bette is keeping her safe. torture us a little bit more plssssss
I actually like your teasing)))
ok I am bette to crack first…these two are lovely but killing each other or at least one of them are…Alice is being Alice…so I wonder what holding Tina back..?? Then again maybe a twirl on the dance floor with her Bette will push her in the right direction..
I bet Tina cracks first…it will be Bette’s reward for all that will-power and restraint. She does deserve an award!
Tina’s more than ready, except Alice probabaly scared the crap outta her with her advice, and Tina knowing Bette’s past probably isn’t helping either, she’s just scared she won’t please her woman the way she knows she’s gonna be pleased! Wonder how torturous dinner is gonna be…and what’s really for dessert?? PPS:)
So, she has probably never had an orgasm, huh? Interesting! Something to look forward to..
there is nothing wrong with waiting but what is alice up to? :)PPS
Aweosme as always….and its so interesting, with the two stories…how different the characters are. I am impressed you don’t get confused…lol…but I like the progress of this story, and they are so super sweet together…thanks again Bi…xxx