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Timid Devotion (Part 20)
"No!" Bette shouted, causing Tina to chuckle at her quick response. "I mean … umm …"
"I was kidding Bette," Tina smiled, shaking her head as she walked over to the table.
Bette turned and checked her girl out. ‘Holy fuck. I don’t think I’ve ever seen anyone so beautiful in my entire life. If I say that, will it sound cheesy or fake? Oh god, it’s not a lie. Look at her … the way she moves …’
"Come on baby," Tina smiled, standing beside the table. "Dinner’s ready."
Tina’s smirk made Bette want to melt. ‘Ahh I want to hear that every day for the rest of my life.’ Bette nodded, still looking Tina up and down as she swallowed hard. "Wait … I didn’t get my kiss hello."
Tina chuckled as she walked over to Bette and held her face in her hands. "I love you."
Bette smiled, suddenly giddy, and unaware of how she could switch conditions so quickly. "Mmm I love you too."
With that, Bette moved her lips in closer to meet with Tina’s. It was a sweet kiss, while Bette’s hands roamed over Tina’s sides.
‘Ahh this material feels so smooth,’ Bette thought to herself with her eyes closed, enjoying Tina’s tongue, ‘I want to touch her so bad. Ahh I think I might die tonight of torture.’
Tina pulled away, sensing Bette’s excitement. She wanted to save that for later.
"Come on, let’s sit down and satisfy that hunger," Tina grinned, winking as she turned and sat at the table.
A smile began to creep up as Bette watched her go. ‘Damn, this night is gonna be difficult, isn’t it?’ she thought to herself, finally taking a seat. "This looks … amazing Tina," she smiled, looking up to meet Tinas’ gaze, "As do you … beautiful."
Tina smiled at the compliment, "You’re pretty gorgeous yourself." She had let her eyes gaze over Bette’s white fitted blouse and black dresspants while they stood, and now she wished she had watched Bette turn around.
When Bette took in the dishes of food, she smiled even wider. "Hey … it’s …" she felt she had almost lost her words.
"Our first meal together," Tina smiled warmly, adoring that look on Bette’s face. ‘She deserves all of this and more,’ Tina thought to herself, soon forming a grin, ‘Well, she’ll get that part later.’
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(75 votes, average: 3.39 out of 5)
Where the hell is my dinner invitation?
all I can say is WOW! I am really speechless and I can’t wait for the next one! Discovery is sooo delightful!!
OMFG!!!! Tina Kennard is one lucky girl and what a first time it was!!! i’m loving the story biissexi – bettes turn now…i’m thinkin’ you’ve unleashed the beast in our sweet Tina!! pps
I m with Jackiee…except fuck dinner i’ll take dessert please… now that was a hot first experience…we should all have been so lucky..
Tina did a fantastic job in surprising Bette. Bette did an awesome job in thanking Tina. I need a cold shower now. AWESOME post. Please post soon. Thank you for not torturing me any longer.
that a dinner pplllllllllll, tina is the main dose. hooooo i envy bette and envy tina so much….gosh i need a shoer…the tem’ is rising
Oh My God, I need to clam down and then write you a proper comment, That was incredible my dear Cami. You are a great firsts’ writer. I love your work and passion. Love
=O Now you’ve made me blush. I’m reading this in the college library…
*THUD* i am at a loss for words… beatifully written! hot and sexy but tender at the same time. looking forward to the next one!
Very explicit and well worth the wait…part deux soon…
Fantastic!
AMAZING!!!! OMFG!!! WOW!!! Thank you
OMFG*thud* :)PPS
*THUD!!!* OMFG Bi….I have no words to describe the sweetness & HOTness of this chapter…Jesus I’m Speechless!!! PPVS xxx
Ummmm, Ummmmmmm, Ummmmmmm
Holy jesus Mary and Joseph that was so incredibly hot! I felt like I was experiencing it right along with tina!! Finally release and what a release it was amazing as always! Can’t wait to see how tina reciprocates. PPS
WOW. that was great. worth the build up for sure. and i am sure we all re-lived our own first experiences, and for that thank you!! PPS.
Sorry, I was kinda tongue tied. That was just wow. I’m sure Tina is kicking herself for not letting Bette take her sooner. And now it’s Bette’s turn… I can’t wait!
That was something else….and now I can’t wait for Bette’s turn.
Fucking AMAZING! That was definitely worth the wait. Your description was excellent. WOW!
I’m totally speechless!! That’s the best! You’re the best! PPS
“Wasn’t even thinking in English”!!!!!!!!!! Excellent! Hope Bette just unleashed the animal in Tina!
I bow for you!! wow.. just.. wowwwwwwwwww.. the details are so beautiful described.. Bette and Tina are soo lovely, jeezz i’m jealous of what Tina experienced.. i don’ remember my first orgasm being this heavy haha :P you did a fantastic job with this girl.. now bring on Tina’s time.. :) thanks!! PPS!
I bow for you!! wow.. just.. wowwwwwwwwww.. the details are so beautiful described.. Bette and Tina are soo lovely, jeezz i’m jealous of what Tina experienced.. i don’ remember my first orgasm being this heavy haha :P you did a fantastic job with this girl.. now bring on Tina’s time.. :) thanks!! PPS!
HOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!! My hair is on fire!!!! I’m speechless!!! That was soooo worth the anticipation!!!! Now Can’t wait for the next part…. PPVVVVVS!!!
OMG, that was incredibly hot. Tina was in for the ride of her life. Can’t wait for Bette’s turn for her ride.
WOW thats hot hot hot!
I really, really, really want Tina to do that to Bette too! LOL! Bette was sweet, gentle and amazing. Very Hot!
worth the wait:)
WOW! That was amazingly beautiful! I love that Bette took so long to get a clue. :) Very sweet. And I do think that you have unleashed a monster in Tina, but it’s wonderful. Thanks for posting!
Holy smokes! That was so hot I think I’m on fire. Quick somebody hose me down! Wonderful build up to an incredibly intimate connection.
Whoo Hoo Bette has unleashed the beast in Tina. She is going to have fun gettting to know Bette’s body. PPS
Cold Shower anyone??? That was awesome!! can’t wait for the next chap!
Holy fucking shit! That was soooo worth the wa *THUD* (Ouch! I poked my eye with an umbrella. How the hell did that happen? I was already on the floor waitin’…)
Yeah WOW!!!
WOW…I want to say so much, but find myself speechless…for a change;)The way Tina responded to her first was so perfect, it reminded me of mine:)Thanks for that amazing writing and wicked chapter…you rock my world love…xxxx
Wow! Wow! Wow! Love this story and it was so tender the way Bette was with Tina. Definitely need a cold shower. Thank you :)
These two are in for a very long night! PPS:)