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Timid Devotion (Part 20)
They each reminisced back to their first date as they portioned the spaghetti and chicken parmigiana for themselves, easily slipping into conversation about their days and work in general. The whole time, Tina was smiling with anticipation, trying not to giggle when she thought about how Bette would be acting if she knew Tina’s plans.
Bette spent her time stealing glances at Tina. ‘I can’t believe she took the time to do this … it’s all so beautiful. She’s the most amazing woman.’ She swooned as she ate, enjoying the company of the woman of her dreams.
After dinner, Tina got up to start with the dishes and Bette came over to help her.
"No no," Tina giggled, "I said I would do all the work."
"I can’t move away from you," Bette chuckled, wrapping her arms around Tina’s waist from behind. "You smell … wonderful." Bette’s senses were on overdrive, making her crazy. She let her hands feel the soft material of Tina’s silky black dress with desire.
Tina smiled, leaving the plates in the sink and quickly washing her hands. "How about I leave them in here for a little bit." She turned around with a big smile. "I want a kiss from my girlfriend."
"Aww man," Bette smiled, leaning back with her arms still around Tina’s waist. "Does she really have to come over? I’d really rather it just be you and I …"
Tina chuckled, walking towards the couch with Bette. "You’re terrible."
"That’s why you love me," Bette smiled as Tina sat on the couch and patted the cushion beside her.
"Oh no you don’t," Bette laughed, shaking her head, "Baby … you are such a fucking knockout in that dress."
Tina smiled at the compliment as Bette continued.
"I …" Bette started, beaming with a smile at the thoughts of what she wanted to do to the blonde, "I … don’t think I can stop myself if I start touching you tonight."
"Just for a minute," Tina grinned, trying very hard not to laugh, because she was only torturing Bette unnecessarily. Soon Bette would get her reward. ‘Come on, play into my hands,’ Tina thought, leaning back slightly.
"Mmm … you know I can’t deny you!" Bette chuckled, kneeling beside Tina on the couch and gently pushing her back. She laid over her girlfriend with desire. So much desire. She was beaming that Tina was her girl and she was the one that was allowed to touch and kiss her.
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(75 votes, average: 3.39 out of 5)
Where the hell is my dinner invitation?
all I can say is WOW! I am really speechless and I can’t wait for the next one! Discovery is sooo delightful!!
OMFG!!!! Tina Kennard is one lucky girl and what a first time it was!!! i’m loving the story biissexi – bettes turn now…i’m thinkin’ you’ve unleashed the beast in our sweet Tina!! pps
I m with Jackiee…except fuck dinner i’ll take dessert please… now that was a hot first experience…we should all have been so lucky..
Tina did a fantastic job in surprising Bette. Bette did an awesome job in thanking Tina. I need a cold shower now. AWESOME post. Please post soon. Thank you for not torturing me any longer.
that a dinner pplllllllllll, tina is the main dose. hooooo i envy bette and envy tina so much….gosh i need a shoer…the tem’ is rising
Oh My God, I need to clam down and then write you a proper comment, That was incredible my dear Cami. You are a great firsts’ writer. I love your work and passion. Love
=O Now you’ve made me blush. I’m reading this in the college library…
*THUD* i am at a loss for words… beatifully written! hot and sexy but tender at the same time. looking forward to the next one!
Very explicit and well worth the wait…part deux soon…
Fantastic!
AMAZING!!!! OMFG!!! WOW!!! Thank you
OMFG*thud* :)PPS
*THUD!!!* OMFG Bi….I have no words to describe the sweetness & HOTness of this chapter…Jesus I’m Speechless!!! PPVS xxx
Ummmm, Ummmmmmm, Ummmmmmm
Holy jesus Mary and Joseph that was so incredibly hot! I felt like I was experiencing it right along with tina!! Finally release and what a release it was amazing as always! Can’t wait to see how tina reciprocates. PPS
WOW. that was great. worth the build up for sure. and i am sure we all re-lived our own first experiences, and for that thank you!! PPS.
Sorry, I was kinda tongue tied. That was just wow. I’m sure Tina is kicking herself for not letting Bette take her sooner. And now it’s Bette’s turn… I can’t wait!
That was something else….and now I can’t wait for Bette’s turn.
Fucking AMAZING! That was definitely worth the wait. Your description was excellent. WOW!
I’m totally speechless!! That’s the best! You’re the best! PPS
“Wasn’t even thinking in English”!!!!!!!!!! Excellent! Hope Bette just unleashed the animal in Tina!
I bow for you!! wow.. just.. wowwwwwwwwww.. the details are so beautiful described.. Bette and Tina are soo lovely, jeezz i’m jealous of what Tina experienced.. i don’ remember my first orgasm being this heavy haha :P you did a fantastic job with this girl.. now bring on Tina’s time.. :) thanks!! PPS!
I bow for you!! wow.. just.. wowwwwwwwwww.. the details are so beautiful described.. Bette and Tina are soo lovely, jeezz i’m jealous of what Tina experienced.. i don’ remember my first orgasm being this heavy haha :P you did a fantastic job with this girl.. now bring on Tina’s time.. :) thanks!! PPS!
HOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!! My hair is on fire!!!! I’m speechless!!! That was soooo worth the anticipation!!!! Now Can’t wait for the next part…. PPVVVVVS!!!
OMG, that was incredibly hot. Tina was in for the ride of her life. Can’t wait for Bette’s turn for her ride.
WOW thats hot hot hot!
I really, really, really want Tina to do that to Bette too! LOL! Bette was sweet, gentle and amazing. Very Hot!
worth the wait:)
WOW! That was amazingly beautiful! I love that Bette took so long to get a clue. :) Very sweet. And I do think that you have unleashed a monster in Tina, but it’s wonderful. Thanks for posting!
Holy smokes! That was so hot I think I’m on fire. Quick somebody hose me down! Wonderful build up to an incredibly intimate connection.
Whoo Hoo Bette has unleashed the beast in Tina. She is going to have fun gettting to know Bette’s body. PPS
Cold Shower anyone??? That was awesome!! can’t wait for the next chap!
Holy fucking shit! That was soooo worth the wa *THUD* (Ouch! I poked my eye with an umbrella. How the hell did that happen? I was already on the floor waitin’…)
Yeah WOW!!!
WOW…I want to say so much, but find myself speechless…for a change;)The way Tina responded to her first was so perfect, it reminded me of mine:)Thanks for that amazing writing and wicked chapter…you rock my world love…xxxx
Wow! Wow! Wow! Love this story and it was so tender the way Bette was with Tina. Definitely need a cold shower. Thank you :)
These two are in for a very long night! PPS:)