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Timid Devotion (Part 20)
Tina wondered when she should tell Bette. When would the best time be? She wanted Bette to be surprised and already aroused.
Her thoughts were interrupted as Bette’s tongue slid into her mouth, hungrily seeking out its companion. Tina moaned into the kiss, feeling Bette’s lips press against her own.
When Bette finally pulled back and got up just far enough to take the sight in, Tina spoke. "What are you thinking?"
"You don’t want to know," Bette chuckled, "Just give me a minute."
Tina chuckled, squirming under Bette’s gaze. The brunette was shamelessly oggling her body. "I do wanna know," Tina grinned, feeling Bette’s hands smooth up her stomach slowly. She smiled as Bette let out a breath in amazement of Tina’s beautiful form.
"T … maybe not until you’re ready," Bette started, trying to keep her hands from growing a mind of their own. She tried desperately to control herself as her eyes took it all in.
"Well … tell me now then," Tina smirked, biting her lower lip.
Bette’s face was priceless as she looked up to the blonde with surprise and confusion. "W-what?"
‘Oh god I can’t breathe,’ Bette thought to herself, ‘Is she fucking serious?! Ahh this had better not be a game.’
Tina nodded, still smiling up at Bette. "I think you know, Bette."
"Are you … are you sure?" Bette asked, her sincere question making Tina laugh.
Tina chuckled when she heard those words. "I’m sooo sure, Bette," she said, reaching her hand out to touch Bette’s cheek lovingly. "I’ve been trying to wait because I knew you would ask me that … and I know now. For sure."
"Oh god you’re so beautiful," Bette whispered, getting up again to look down at Tina, "And the food … was this? …"
"I planned it for you baby," Tina smiled, happy that she could surprise her wonderful girlfriend. Bette had been so distracted by her outfit, she hadn’t put it together earlier. "You’ve been so amazing with everything and I just … I love you so much." She couldn’t help her emotions getting the better of her. She blinked back tears as she looked into Bette’s loving eyes. "I couldn’t ask for a better girlfriend."
Bette smiled down at her, cupping Tina’s face in her hands as she leaned back down, "Aww baby."
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(75 votes, average: 3.39 out of 5)
Where the hell is my dinner invitation?
all I can say is WOW! I am really speechless and I can’t wait for the next one! Discovery is sooo delightful!!
OMFG!!!! Tina Kennard is one lucky girl and what a first time it was!!! i’m loving the story biissexi – bettes turn now…i’m thinkin’ you’ve unleashed the beast in our sweet Tina!! pps
I m with Jackiee…except fuck dinner i’ll take dessert please… now that was a hot first experience…we should all have been so lucky..
Tina did a fantastic job in surprising Bette. Bette did an awesome job in thanking Tina. I need a cold shower now. AWESOME post. Please post soon. Thank you for not torturing me any longer.
that a dinner pplllllllllll, tina is the main dose. hooooo i envy bette and envy tina so much….gosh i need a shoer…the tem’ is rising
Oh My God, I need to clam down and then write you a proper comment, That was incredible my dear Cami. You are a great firsts’ writer. I love your work and passion. Love
=O Now you’ve made me blush. I’m reading this in the college library…
*THUD* i am at a loss for words… beatifully written! hot and sexy but tender at the same time. looking forward to the next one!
Very explicit and well worth the wait…part deux soon…
Fantastic!
AMAZING!!!! OMFG!!! WOW!!! Thank you
OMFG*thud* :)PPS
*THUD!!!* OMFG Bi….I have no words to describe the sweetness & HOTness of this chapter…Jesus I’m Speechless!!! PPVS xxx
Ummmm, Ummmmmmm, Ummmmmmm
Holy jesus Mary and Joseph that was so incredibly hot! I felt like I was experiencing it right along with tina!! Finally release and what a release it was amazing as always! Can’t wait to see how tina reciprocates. PPS
WOW. that was great. worth the build up for sure. and i am sure we all re-lived our own first experiences, and for that thank you!! PPS.
Sorry, I was kinda tongue tied. That was just wow. I’m sure Tina is kicking herself for not letting Bette take her sooner. And now it’s Bette’s turn… I can’t wait!
That was something else….and now I can’t wait for Bette’s turn.
Fucking AMAZING! That was definitely worth the wait. Your description was excellent. WOW!
I’m totally speechless!! That’s the best! You’re the best! PPS
“Wasn’t even thinking in English”!!!!!!!!!! Excellent! Hope Bette just unleashed the animal in Tina!
I bow for you!! wow.. just.. wowwwwwwwwww.. the details are so beautiful described.. Bette and Tina are soo lovely, jeezz i’m jealous of what Tina experienced.. i don’ remember my first orgasm being this heavy haha :P you did a fantastic job with this girl.. now bring on Tina’s time.. :) thanks!! PPS!
I bow for you!! wow.. just.. wowwwwwwwwww.. the details are so beautiful described.. Bette and Tina are soo lovely, jeezz i’m jealous of what Tina experienced.. i don’ remember my first orgasm being this heavy haha :P you did a fantastic job with this girl.. now bring on Tina’s time.. :) thanks!! PPS!
HOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!! My hair is on fire!!!! I’m speechless!!! That was soooo worth the anticipation!!!! Now Can’t wait for the next part…. PPVVVVVS!!!
OMG, that was incredibly hot. Tina was in for the ride of her life. Can’t wait for Bette’s turn for her ride.
WOW thats hot hot hot!
I really, really, really want Tina to do that to Bette too! LOL! Bette was sweet, gentle and amazing. Very Hot!
worth the wait:)
WOW! That was amazingly beautiful! I love that Bette took so long to get a clue. :) Very sweet. And I do think that you have unleashed a monster in Tina, but it’s wonderful. Thanks for posting!
Holy smokes! That was so hot I think I’m on fire. Quick somebody hose me down! Wonderful build up to an incredibly intimate connection.
Whoo Hoo Bette has unleashed the beast in Tina. She is going to have fun gettting to know Bette’s body. PPS
Cold Shower anyone??? That was awesome!! can’t wait for the next chap!
Holy fucking shit! That was soooo worth the wa *THUD* (Ouch! I poked my eye with an umbrella. How the hell did that happen? I was already on the floor waitin’…)
Yeah WOW!!!
WOW…I want to say so much, but find myself speechless…for a change;)The way Tina responded to her first was so perfect, it reminded me of mine:)Thanks for that amazing writing and wicked chapter…you rock my world love…xxxx
Wow! Wow! Wow! Love this story and it was so tender the way Bette was with Tina. Definitely need a cold shower. Thank you :)
These two are in for a very long night! PPS:)