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Timid Devotion (Part 20)
Bette couldn’t believe the beautiful sight beneath her, Tina squirming and arching. And it was all because of her touch. She started smoothing her fingers over Tina’s center, teasing both herself and her girlfriend. She had wanted to be inside of her for so long.
"Bette … please …" Tina moaned, grabbing at the sheet with her head still thrown back.
"Look at me," Bette whispered, her voice deep and erotic.
Tina brought her head up and watched Bette with her mouth open in surprise of how amazing everything had felt so far. She couldn’t imagine any more pleasure.
Bette kept eye contact with Tina as she slowly slid one finger inside of her. Tina quivered and arched again, unable to help herself. Her legs shook gently with the feel and pleasure that it brought. She tilted her head back, while Bette slowly slid her finger in and out before getting the strength to lift her head again. She swallowed hard as she looked down to her legs parted, and Bette between them. She had never felt so at peace with anyone. Her hair fell across her face as she squirmed around, always bringing her head back up to look into her lover’s eyes.
"More …" Tina begged, already tightening against Bette’s finger.
With a smile, the brunette gently added another finger. Just as she slid her fingers in, she leaned over Tina and pushed them in all the way. She kept them there, brushing Tina’s hair out of her face and looking into her eyes. Tina was quivering before opening her eyes again.
"Bette … s-s-so good …"
Right then she knew Bette would give her something she had never experienced – an orgasm.
"Mmm," Bette smiled, holding Tina’s hand with her free hand, and intertwining their fingers on the bed. Bette slowly pulled her fingers out and pushed them back in. Tina moaned again, even louder, as she arched. Bette started to pick up her pace, making sure that Tina was comfortable. She looked down at Tina’s face, pleased that she could share this experience with her. She loved her so much.
"Ahhhh Bette … so good … right now … ahhh …" Tina panted, thrusting her hips against Bette’s hand.
Bette moved her fingers as her tongue touched the edge of her mouth in concentration. She knew she could find it. She watched Tina’s reaction and smiled when the blonde tensed, gasping wildly.
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(75 votes, average: 3.39 out of 5)
Where the hell is my dinner invitation?
all I can say is WOW! I am really speechless and I can’t wait for the next one! Discovery is sooo delightful!!
OMFG!!!! Tina Kennard is one lucky girl and what a first time it was!!! i’m loving the story biissexi – bettes turn now…i’m thinkin’ you’ve unleashed the beast in our sweet Tina!! pps
I m with Jackiee…except fuck dinner i’ll take dessert please… now that was a hot first experience…we should all have been so lucky..
Tina did a fantastic job in surprising Bette. Bette did an awesome job in thanking Tina. I need a cold shower now. AWESOME post. Please post soon. Thank you for not torturing me any longer.
that a dinner pplllllllllll, tina is the main dose. hooooo i envy bette and envy tina so much….gosh i need a shoer…the tem’ is rising
Oh My God, I need to clam down and then write you a proper comment, That was incredible my dear Cami. You are a great firsts’ writer. I love your work and passion. Love
=O Now you’ve made me blush. I’m reading this in the college library…
*THUD* i am at a loss for words… beatifully written! hot and sexy but tender at the same time. looking forward to the next one!
Very explicit and well worth the wait…part deux soon…
Fantastic!
AMAZING!!!! OMFG!!! WOW!!! Thank you
OMFG*thud* :)PPS
*THUD!!!* OMFG Bi….I have no words to describe the sweetness & HOTness of this chapter…Jesus I’m Speechless!!! PPVS xxx
Ummmm, Ummmmmmm, Ummmmmmm
Holy jesus Mary and Joseph that was so incredibly hot! I felt like I was experiencing it right along with tina!! Finally release and what a release it was amazing as always! Can’t wait to see how tina reciprocates. PPS
WOW. that was great. worth the build up for sure. and i am sure we all re-lived our own first experiences, and for that thank you!! PPS.
Sorry, I was kinda tongue tied. That was just wow. I’m sure Tina is kicking herself for not letting Bette take her sooner. And now it’s Bette’s turn… I can’t wait!
That was something else….and now I can’t wait for Bette’s turn.
Fucking AMAZING! That was definitely worth the wait. Your description was excellent. WOW!
I’m totally speechless!! That’s the best! You’re the best! PPS
“Wasn’t even thinking in English”!!!!!!!!!! Excellent! Hope Bette just unleashed the animal in Tina!
I bow for you!! wow.. just.. wowwwwwwwwww.. the details are so beautiful described.. Bette and Tina are soo lovely, jeezz i’m jealous of what Tina experienced.. i don’ remember my first orgasm being this heavy haha :P you did a fantastic job with this girl.. now bring on Tina’s time.. :) thanks!! PPS!
I bow for you!! wow.. just.. wowwwwwwwwww.. the details are so beautiful described.. Bette and Tina are soo lovely, jeezz i’m jealous of what Tina experienced.. i don’ remember my first orgasm being this heavy haha :P you did a fantastic job with this girl.. now bring on Tina’s time.. :) thanks!! PPS!
HOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!! My hair is on fire!!!! I’m speechless!!! That was soooo worth the anticipation!!!! Now Can’t wait for the next part…. PPVVVVVS!!!
OMG, that was incredibly hot. Tina was in for the ride of her life. Can’t wait for Bette’s turn for her ride.
WOW thats hot hot hot!
I really, really, really want Tina to do that to Bette too! LOL! Bette was sweet, gentle and amazing. Very Hot!
worth the wait:)
WOW! That was amazingly beautiful! I love that Bette took so long to get a clue. :) Very sweet. And I do think that you have unleashed a monster in Tina, but it’s wonderful. Thanks for posting!
Holy smokes! That was so hot I think I’m on fire. Quick somebody hose me down! Wonderful build up to an incredibly intimate connection.
Whoo Hoo Bette has unleashed the beast in Tina. She is going to have fun gettting to know Bette’s body. PPS
Cold Shower anyone??? That was awesome!! can’t wait for the next chap!
Holy fucking shit! That was soooo worth the wa *THUD* (Ouch! I poked my eye with an umbrella. How the hell did that happen? I was already on the floor waitin’…)
Yeah WOW!!!
WOW…I want to say so much, but find myself speechless…for a change;)The way Tina responded to her first was so perfect, it reminded me of mine:)Thanks for that amazing writing and wicked chapter…you rock my world love…xxxx
Wow! Wow! Wow! Love this story and it was so tender the way Bette was with Tina. Definitely need a cold shower. Thank you :)
These two are in for a very long night! PPS:)