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Timid Devotion (Part 20)
"I want you to touch me," Tina whispered, connecting with Bette’s eyes again.
"Okay," Bette smiled, surprised at Tina’s request even though it was hardly out of place. "Are you sure?"
"Oh god," Tina chuckled, "I am so fucking sure."
"Mmm," Bette smiled, glad Tina was so confident. She had been waiting forever to feel Tina the way she was asking right now. She could barely contain her excitement. She took great care in tugging Tina’s dress off as the blonde lifted her hips and tried pushing it down.
Bette smiled at Tina’s urgency.
"Ah ah ah, I’m taking my time with you baby," Bette whispered, catching Tina’s eye as she slowly eased it down her legs.
"Ahhh Bette …" Tina breathed, feeling very vulnerable with her dress off, but she liked the feeling with Bette. She took in a deep breath and let it out again.
Bette could sense Tina’s thoughts and leaned over her to kiss her again. As soon as their lips touched, Tina parted her knees and became lost in the sensation. Bette slid her hands up and down the blonde’s legs, enjoying the freedom of touch. She loved Tina’s body – every inch of it.
Tina started grinding against the fabric of Bette’s pants, desperate for her touch. Bette kept her hands on Tina’s stomach, leaning over her with desire.
Bette continued kissing her, the sensation surreal for both of them. Tina lost herself in Bette’s lips and tongue, feeling the brunette smooth her hand down her stomach. It rested at her waist and Tina was becoming crazy.
"Touch me," she pleaded quietly, locking eyes with Bette. "Please."
Bette smiled, taking Tina’s lacy panties off with ease, discarding them without taking her eyes from Tina’s.
"Bette …" Tina moaned, feeling Bette crawl over her and gaze between her legs. The hunger in Bette’s eyes nearly had Tina whimpering.
Bette smiled and moved her hand down Tina’s stomach to her center, enjoying how whet the blonde was already. They each closed their eyes at the moment Bette’s fingers made contact.
"Bette," Tina moaned again, tightening at the feel of Bette touching the most sensitive part of her body. "Bette …" She covered her mouth with the back of her hand and arched her back at the very different, but amazing sensation. She had never felt so intimate with another person in all of her life.
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(75 votes, average: 3.39 out of 5)
Where the hell is my dinner invitation?
all I can say is WOW! I am really speechless and I can’t wait for the next one! Discovery is sooo delightful!!
OMFG!!!! Tina Kennard is one lucky girl and what a first time it was!!! i’m loving the story biissexi – bettes turn now…i’m thinkin’ you’ve unleashed the beast in our sweet Tina!! pps
I m with Jackiee…except fuck dinner i’ll take dessert please… now that was a hot first experience…we should all have been so lucky..
Tina did a fantastic job in surprising Bette. Bette did an awesome job in thanking Tina. I need a cold shower now. AWESOME post. Please post soon. Thank you for not torturing me any longer.
that a dinner pplllllllllll, tina is the main dose. hooooo i envy bette and envy tina so much….gosh i need a shoer…the tem’ is rising
Oh My God, I need to clam down and then write you a proper comment, That was incredible my dear Cami. You are a great firsts’ writer. I love your work and passion. Love
=O Now you’ve made me blush. I’m reading this in the college library…
*THUD* i am at a loss for words… beatifully written! hot and sexy but tender at the same time. looking forward to the next one!
Very explicit and well worth the wait…part deux soon…
Fantastic!
AMAZING!!!! OMFG!!! WOW!!! Thank you
OMFG*thud* :)PPS
*THUD!!!* OMFG Bi….I have no words to describe the sweetness & HOTness of this chapter…Jesus I’m Speechless!!! PPVS xxx
Ummmm, Ummmmmmm, Ummmmmmm
Holy jesus Mary and Joseph that was so incredibly hot! I felt like I was experiencing it right along with tina!! Finally release and what a release it was amazing as always! Can’t wait to see how tina reciprocates. PPS
WOW. that was great. worth the build up for sure. and i am sure we all re-lived our own first experiences, and for that thank you!! PPS.
Sorry, I was kinda tongue tied. That was just wow. I’m sure Tina is kicking herself for not letting Bette take her sooner. And now it’s Bette’s turn… I can’t wait!
That was something else….and now I can’t wait for Bette’s turn.
Fucking AMAZING! That was definitely worth the wait. Your description was excellent. WOW!
I’m totally speechless!! That’s the best! You’re the best! PPS
“Wasn’t even thinking in English”!!!!!!!!!! Excellent! Hope Bette just unleashed the animal in Tina!
I bow for you!! wow.. just.. wowwwwwwwwww.. the details are so beautiful described.. Bette and Tina are soo lovely, jeezz i’m jealous of what Tina experienced.. i don’ remember my first orgasm being this heavy haha :P you did a fantastic job with this girl.. now bring on Tina’s time.. :) thanks!! PPS!
I bow for you!! wow.. just.. wowwwwwwwwww.. the details are so beautiful described.. Bette and Tina are soo lovely, jeezz i’m jealous of what Tina experienced.. i don’ remember my first orgasm being this heavy haha :P you did a fantastic job with this girl.. now bring on Tina’s time.. :) thanks!! PPS!
HOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!! My hair is on fire!!!! I’m speechless!!! That was soooo worth the anticipation!!!! Now Can’t wait for the next part…. PPVVVVVS!!!
OMG, that was incredibly hot. Tina was in for the ride of her life. Can’t wait for Bette’s turn for her ride.
WOW thats hot hot hot!
I really, really, really want Tina to do that to Bette too! LOL! Bette was sweet, gentle and amazing. Very Hot!
worth the wait:)
WOW! That was amazingly beautiful! I love that Bette took so long to get a clue. :) Very sweet. And I do think that you have unleashed a monster in Tina, but it’s wonderful. Thanks for posting!
Holy smokes! That was so hot I think I’m on fire. Quick somebody hose me down! Wonderful build up to an incredibly intimate connection.
Whoo Hoo Bette has unleashed the beast in Tina. She is going to have fun gettting to know Bette’s body. PPS
Cold Shower anyone??? That was awesome!! can’t wait for the next chap!
Holy fucking shit! That was soooo worth the wa *THUD* (Ouch! I poked my eye with an umbrella. How the hell did that happen? I was already on the floor waitin’…)
Yeah WOW!!!
WOW…I want to say so much, but find myself speechless…for a change;)The way Tina responded to her first was so perfect, it reminded me of mine:)Thanks for that amazing writing and wicked chapter…you rock my world love…xxxx
Wow! Wow! Wow! Love this story and it was so tender the way Bette was with Tina. Definitely need a cold shower. Thank you :)
These two are in for a very long night! PPS:)