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Timid Devotion (Part 20)
Just as she felt Tina writhing around, she moved from her neck down to her chest, taking turns with each breast, letting her tongue graze over Tina’s sensitivity. She heard another small cry of pleasure coming from Tina’s lips as she closed her mouth over the little pebble and gave Tina pleasure she had never known was possible. She thought Bette’s tongue on her neck was the ultimate pleasure, but she was surprised at how good it felt on her nipple. She felt a tingle between her legs as Bette’s tongue moved over it, and awaited the same attention to her other breast.
After basking in the sensation of Bette’s tongue, she was surprised to feel Bette’s lips against her own, and lifted her head to press harder into the kiss. She was so at ease and ready, and the question of what to do had dissolved from her mind as she melted into the act. She had thought about this for so long, she felt like screaming for joy now that it was finally happening. As they were kissing, Tina began to tug at Bette’s shirt, finally lifting it with help from Bette herself.
Bette brought her shirt over her head and threw it off the bed, looking back down to Tina.
"I love your bra," Tina smiled, oggling Bette’s abdomen and cleavage openly.
Bette chuckled and leaned back over her. "Do you?"
"Yes," Tina whispered, reaching around Bette’s back to take her bra off. Thankfully she was very good with her own bras, because she unhooked Bette’s with one hand, holding the brunette’s face in the other.
Bette pulled away with surprise, "Wow, you’re really great at that."
Tina blushed, hardly even realizing she had done it until after. It seemed like instinct to her. "I’m glad you enjoyed it."
"Any more surprises?" Bette smiled, allowing Tina to reach her hands up and hold Bette’s naked breasts in the palm of her hands.
"Mmm … Maybe," she smiled, closing her eyes at the sensation of Bette’s warm skin against hers. Once she opened her eyes again, she let her eyes travel down Bette’s body with lust. "… I want you sooo bad, Bette."
"Mmm," Bette smiled, laying ontop of the blonde.
Tina moaned again, this time at the sensation of their breasts pressed together. She had never felt that before and she knew the instant she felt it she would never tire of the sensation.
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(75 votes, average: 3.39 out of 5)
Where the hell is my dinner invitation?
all I can say is WOW! I am really speechless and I can’t wait for the next one! Discovery is sooo delightful!!
OMFG!!!! Tina Kennard is one lucky girl and what a first time it was!!! i’m loving the story biissexi – bettes turn now…i’m thinkin’ you’ve unleashed the beast in our sweet Tina!! pps
I m with Jackiee…except fuck dinner i’ll take dessert please… now that was a hot first experience…we should all have been so lucky..
Tina did a fantastic job in surprising Bette. Bette did an awesome job in thanking Tina. I need a cold shower now. AWESOME post. Please post soon. Thank you for not torturing me any longer.
that a dinner pplllllllllll, tina is the main dose. hooooo i envy bette and envy tina so much….gosh i need a shoer…the tem’ is rising
Oh My God, I need to clam down and then write you a proper comment, That was incredible my dear Cami. You are a great firsts’ writer. I love your work and passion. Love
=O Now you’ve made me blush. I’m reading this in the college library…
*THUD* i am at a loss for words… beatifully written! hot and sexy but tender at the same time. looking forward to the next one!
Very explicit and well worth the wait…part deux soon…
Fantastic!
AMAZING!!!! OMFG!!! WOW!!! Thank you
OMFG*thud* :)PPS
*THUD!!!* OMFG Bi….I have no words to describe the sweetness & HOTness of this chapter…Jesus I’m Speechless!!! PPVS xxx
Ummmm, Ummmmmmm, Ummmmmmm
Holy jesus Mary and Joseph that was so incredibly hot! I felt like I was experiencing it right along with tina!! Finally release and what a release it was amazing as always! Can’t wait to see how tina reciprocates. PPS
WOW. that was great. worth the build up for sure. and i am sure we all re-lived our own first experiences, and for that thank you!! PPS.
Sorry, I was kinda tongue tied. That was just wow. I’m sure Tina is kicking herself for not letting Bette take her sooner. And now it’s Bette’s turn… I can’t wait!
That was something else….and now I can’t wait for Bette’s turn.
Fucking AMAZING! That was definitely worth the wait. Your description was excellent. WOW!
I’m totally speechless!! That’s the best! You’re the best! PPS
“Wasn’t even thinking in English”!!!!!!!!!! Excellent! Hope Bette just unleashed the animal in Tina!
I bow for you!! wow.. just.. wowwwwwwwwww.. the details are so beautiful described.. Bette and Tina are soo lovely, jeezz i’m jealous of what Tina experienced.. i don’ remember my first orgasm being this heavy haha :P you did a fantastic job with this girl.. now bring on Tina’s time.. :) thanks!! PPS!
I bow for you!! wow.. just.. wowwwwwwwwww.. the details are so beautiful described.. Bette and Tina are soo lovely, jeezz i’m jealous of what Tina experienced.. i don’ remember my first orgasm being this heavy haha :P you did a fantastic job with this girl.. now bring on Tina’s time.. :) thanks!! PPS!
HOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!! My hair is on fire!!!! I’m speechless!!! That was soooo worth the anticipation!!!! Now Can’t wait for the next part…. PPVVVVVS!!!
OMG, that was incredibly hot. Tina was in for the ride of her life. Can’t wait for Bette’s turn for her ride.
WOW thats hot hot hot!
I really, really, really want Tina to do that to Bette too! LOL! Bette was sweet, gentle and amazing. Very Hot!
worth the wait:)
WOW! That was amazingly beautiful! I love that Bette took so long to get a clue. :) Very sweet. And I do think that you have unleashed a monster in Tina, but it’s wonderful. Thanks for posting!
Holy smokes! That was so hot I think I’m on fire. Quick somebody hose me down! Wonderful build up to an incredibly intimate connection.
Whoo Hoo Bette has unleashed the beast in Tina. She is going to have fun gettting to know Bette’s body. PPS
Cold Shower anyone??? That was awesome!! can’t wait for the next chap!
Holy fucking shit! That was soooo worth the wa *THUD* (Ouch! I poked my eye with an umbrella. How the hell did that happen? I was already on the floor waitin’…)
Yeah WOW!!!
WOW…I want to say so much, but find myself speechless…for a change;)The way Tina responded to her first was so perfect, it reminded me of mine:)Thanks for that amazing writing and wicked chapter…you rock my world love…xxxx
Wow! Wow! Wow! Love this story and it was so tender the way Bette was with Tina. Definitely need a cold shower. Thank you :)
These two are in for a very long night! PPS:)