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Timid Devotion (Part 21)
Tina pushed her middle finger all the way inside this time, earning a loud moan from Bette before starting her own rhythm. She closed her eyes at the sensation, finding it very similar to when she had touched herself in the past, but with a much better angle. She loved this so much more. She was the source of Bette’s pleasure. She braced herself with one arm to lean over her girlfriend, watching her head thrash back and forth.
"Bette … I love you," Tina breathed, lowering her head to be closer.
"Ahhh T," Bette whispered, closing her eyes tightly when she felt Tina slowly work another finger inside of her. "Ahhhh I love you -ah- … too … so much …"
Tina felt like she was on a high, working her fingers inside of her lover with care. She wondered how she could find Bette’s special spot, curling her fingers up the same way Bette had done. She looked up and saw Bette shift on the bed, her face unreadable; just a general expression of satisfaction.
She decided she would surprise her patient girlfriend, slowly inching backwards again as she watched Bette’s head tilted back and her eyes closed. She kept her fingers moving while she prepared herself for a sweet taste she would never forget.
Bette gasped and flung her head up when she felt Tina’s tongue on her clit. Her eyes shot opened with shock and excitement, her hair falling over her face. She lost all thought when her eyes locked with the blonde’s, feeling close already. She moaned when she watched Tina’s tongue dart out over and over, spreading Bette with her fingers.
"Fuck … me …" Bette breathed to herself, letting her head fall back again as her body began to move in a wave-like motion, meeting Tina’s fingers and tongue as her hips elevated. She continually brought her head up again to watch in disbelief at how amazing it felt to have Tina’s tongue on her.
Tina closed her eyes at the soft feel of Bette’s sensitive little nub. She felt like she had died and gone to heaven. Nothing before had been so personal and so soft. She was surprised at how soft Bette felt against her tongue. Bette also had a sweet taste to her and Tina had never imagined it would be so good. It was so unique and so pleasant. She smiled at this whole new realm of sexual adventure.
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Well, this post definitely unleashed the animal within me! Soft and slow, yet hot and powerfull.
I love how excited Tina is, and I’m sure Bette likes it too! :) Love the update. Thanks for posting!
Is it normal to feel like them so giddy, that was brilliant my friend, wow B you are amazing, it really feel great reading it so how does it feel when you are living it. Thank you so much for this amazing pleasure, you are one of my best writers ever.
“Did I hurt you baby?” “No,” Bette whimpered. Tina smiled, “Good. Because I haven’t even started.”**THUD**** Bette wasn’t the only one who was saying “Fuck Me.” LOL! WOW Bi,I love slow and sexy and you are the best at writing it. I’m sure Bette will be happy to fill Tina’s order for more sex tomorrow and vice versa. Can’t wait for your next post.
go tina!!!!
Good gracious alive, either Bette is going to die from lack of fluid (Tina stole it all) or Tina is going to die from exhaustion. That was an awesome post. The night of first love (well first time in bed together) will go down in history, the start of Tibette.
Damn that was so freaking hot and loving it. Please post more, thanks!
the tease is over… well done…
SPEECHLESS. Off to take a cold shower. WOW. PPS
My god!!! Will somebody call the fire brigade please???? Ha I loved it!!! PPVVVVVVVS!!!
Wow!!! PPS
no more teasing I see and Bette has to be thinking now so well worth all the teasing and wait…You manage to capture Tina excitement and giddiness through out the NC17 and that was perfect. Staying true to the character you have create for Tina. Awwh.. Excellent
One sex filled weekend coming up! lol PPS:)
Yeah well Tina…I think we’re all feeling abit giddy right now…among other things! So worth waiting for!!
Tina…She made Bette a pillow queen? Nice =D i’m never reading your updates in the library again… I feel so exposed! lmao and ppl kept coming up to me that day!
Holy! *THUD* sorry let me just pick myself off the ground that was so fucking hot I can’t even speak… I’ll have to read it again ;) PPS and yeah I’ll never learn to not read your stories in public places LOL I just get too excited when I see an update well done as always
haha “poor bette” tina wants to to know her new place by heart anf tonge haha damn shes so lucky
wow… that was very, very well done! loved tina’s reaction – perfect! and now that the wait is over… bring on the weekend ;)
WOW!!! Damn that was so HOT and SEXY!!! Love IT!!! Now bring on the weekend. Thank you so much Bi
It’s great to have your two fictions when I’m jonesing for the L Word. Love it as usual. Thank you!
Tina is so cute! I love how excited she it with learning all she can. ; )
Amazing tender no teasing :) Love it! Thank you and cold shower here I come :)
ha ah ha…Tina kilsl me-‘Is it normal for my tongue to be sore’ What an amazing chapter, thanks lady for yet another diplay of masterful writing;)
now that the teasing is over, its more cold shower for us! great job!