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Timid Devotion (Part 21)
"I liked watching you while I was doing it," Tina admitted, "It felt so …"
"Mmm wonderful," Bette smiled, remembering the same expressions across Tina’s face. "I know baby."
"So …" Tina smirked, lowering her hand again teasingly.
Bette smiled up at the blonde, "Ahh baby … I love you so much. And I really can’t believe how amazing that was."
Tina beamed, leaning back over Bette with excitement, "Was it?"
"Oh my god …"
"What felt good?"
"Everything!" Bette chuckled, "You really seem to know what you’re doing."
"Well, not really. I just did what I would have wanted, and I kept doing what was making you moan."
Bette smiled, "Perfect." She took Tina’s head in her hands again and brought her down for another soft kiss. "Perfect baby."
Tina accepted the kiss and deepened it, allowing Bette to taste herself. She felt Tina’s knee between her legs and she smiled at the blonde’s need.
When Tina finally pulled away, a big smile touched her face. "I reeeally love going down on you."
Bette smiled back. Wonderful words to hear from her new lover. "Mmm I’m so glad, T. I love it too."
"Is it normal that my tongue’s sore?" Tina asked, pursing her lips with a smile.
"Yes," Bette smiled back, still out of breath. "Your tongue will eventually get used to it and you won’t feel it as much."
Tina smirked, "So if I practice …"
Tina made her way down Bette’s body again, leaving Bette with one eyebrow raised and a smile on her face at Tina’s attitude. She couldn’t believe how eager and excited the blonde was to keep going. It was like exhaustion never even crossed her mind.
Bette laid back, closing her eyes, as she felt Tina push her legs further apart and brought her mouth down again.
Her tongue continued to work and she ignored her own fatigue. She genuinely loved being between Bette’s legs, tasting her and touching her. It was like nothing else she had ever experienced, or even dreamed.
Bette was living in a dream. She relaxed and brought her head up to watch Tina losing herself in the act once again. She was so beautiful. Bette held the blonde hair to the side and watched her in amazement as Tina slowly brought her to another powerful orgasm.
Once Tina finally left her favorite place and leaned back over Bette’s body, her words made Bette chuckle.
"I think I’m a lesbian," Tina smirked, pressing her waist between Bette’s legs as she laid ontop of her playfully.
"Oh god … you’re such a lesbian!" Bette chuckled, locking eyes with Tina again as they both giggled. She brought her eyes to Tina’s face. "Baby … that was … absolutely amazing. Weren’t you tired?"
"Sort of, but I was so excited …"
"Mmm," Bette panted, holding Tina to her body, "I love you baby."
"I love you too," Tina whispered, laying down on Bette’s chest and burying her face in Bette’s wild expanse of wavy hair. She felt so right.
"Is this how it’s supposed to feel?" Tina asked quietly. "… Sex?"
"Well that was better than anything I’ve experienced," Bette smiled, turning to look into Tina’s eyes. "But yes. I imagine that’s how it’s supposed to feel. When it’s right."
"I feel giddy," Tina beamed, closing her eyes.
"Me too," Bette agreed with a smile, holding her lover to her chest.
After a few minutes of comfortable silence with both of their eyes closed, Tina turned and caught Bette’s eye again. She just stared at her for a moment. "I love you so much."
Bette smiled at her sincerity and passion, "I love you too baby. So so much."
Tina smiled and closed her eyes, snuggling back into Bette’s embrace. "And I want more sex tomorrow."
Bette chuckled at the blunt statement, glad it was Friday and they would have plenty of time to continue their exploration. "As you wish."
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Well, this post definitely unleashed the animal within me! Soft and slow, yet hot and powerfull.
I love how excited Tina is, and I’m sure Bette likes it too! :) Love the update. Thanks for posting!
Is it normal to feel like them so giddy, that was brilliant my friend, wow B you are amazing, it really feel great reading it so how does it feel when you are living it. Thank you so much for this amazing pleasure, you are one of my best writers ever.
“Did I hurt you baby?” “No,” Bette whimpered. Tina smiled, “Good. Because I haven’t even started.”**THUD**** Bette wasn’t the only one who was saying “Fuck Me.” LOL! WOW Bi,I love slow and sexy and you are the best at writing it. I’m sure Bette will be happy to fill Tina’s order for more sex tomorrow and vice versa. Can’t wait for your next post.
go tina!!!!
Good gracious alive, either Bette is going to die from lack of fluid (Tina stole it all) or Tina is going to die from exhaustion. That was an awesome post. The night of first love (well first time in bed together) will go down in history, the start of Tibette.
Damn that was so freaking hot and loving it. Please post more, thanks!
the tease is over… well done…
SPEECHLESS. Off to take a cold shower. WOW. PPS
My god!!! Will somebody call the fire brigade please???? Ha I loved it!!! PPVVVVVVVS!!!
Wow!!! PPS
no more teasing I see and Bette has to be thinking now so well worth all the teasing and wait…You manage to capture Tina excitement and giddiness through out the NC17 and that was perfect. Staying true to the character you have create for Tina. Awwh.. Excellent
One sex filled weekend coming up! lol PPS:)
Yeah well Tina…I think we’re all feeling abit giddy right now…among other things! So worth waiting for!!
Tina…She made Bette a pillow queen? Nice =D i’m never reading your updates in the library again… I feel so exposed! lmao and ppl kept coming up to me that day!
Holy! *THUD* sorry let me just pick myself off the ground that was so fucking hot I can’t even speak… I’ll have to read it again ;) PPS and yeah I’ll never learn to not read your stories in public places LOL I just get too excited when I see an update well done as always
haha “poor bette” tina wants to to know her new place by heart anf tonge haha damn shes so lucky
wow… that was very, very well done! loved tina’s reaction – perfect! and now that the wait is over… bring on the weekend ;)
WOW!!! Damn that was so HOT and SEXY!!! Love IT!!! Now bring on the weekend. Thank you so much Bi
It’s great to have your two fictions when I’m jonesing for the L Word. Love it as usual. Thank you!
Tina is so cute! I love how excited she it with learning all she can. ; )
Amazing tender no teasing :) Love it! Thank you and cold shower here I come :)
ha ah ha…Tina kilsl me-‘Is it normal for my tongue to be sore’ What an amazing chapter, thanks lady for yet another diplay of masterful writing;)
now that the teasing is over, its more cold shower for us! great job!