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Timid Devotion (Part 21)
Bette was so whet it was dripping onto the bed. She had been waiting for what seemed like an eternity, and now that her girlfriend was finally ready, she just couldn’t stop her arousal from seeping out.
Tina saw how wet she was and took her fingers out in amazement, entering Bette with her tongue. She closed her eyes and moved her head back and forth to taste as much of her as she could. When she pulled away again, she noticed Bette’s head thrashing about again. She was happily surprised – she hadn’t known Bette would enjoy having her tongue inside of her – she just wanted to taste her.
"Was that good?" Tina smiled, enjoying every moment of Bette’s pleasure.
"Oh fuck …" Bette moaned, trying to give Tina feedback althought it was blatantly obvious already. "… Ahh T … Tina … yes … please-don’t-stop …"
Tina grinned to herself and quickly decided to use her fingers again, moving her tongue back to Bette’s clit.
As soon as the contact resumed, Bette couldn’t hold it anymore and felt the orgasm take her hard. This release was unlike any other. She moaned so loud it sounded like a scream while Tina kept her mouth in place. Something told her that Bette wouldn’t want her to stop yet.
The brunette closed her eyes and arched, tensing at the amazing sensation to sweep over her body. She felt Tina continue through the thrashing and screaming. She could feel Tina’s hunger for her by the way she used her mouth and tongue.
Tina smiled up at Bette and made her way up her body as Bette finally relaxed back into the mattress.
"Can I do that again?"
Bette chuckled at her lover’s enthusiasm. She tried to catch her breath before answering, "Tina …" She was so winded. She had never felt so completely exhausted after sex. She loved this.
"I want to try it again."
"Oh god, don’t call that a try," Bette smiled, looking into Tina’s eyes, "That was so amazing baby."
"Yeah?" Tina smiled, licking her lips even though she had wiped her mouth off on her arm before vacating her spot between Bette’s legs. The taste still lingered and she loved it.
Bette smiled, "That was so good baby." She held Tina’s face in her hands and smiled, pulling Tina down into a hug. It was the most intimate hug they had experienced together, thus far. They stayed that way for a few minutes before Tina pulled her head back up again.
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(47 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)
Well, this post definitely unleashed the animal within me! Soft and slow, yet hot and powerfull.
I love how excited Tina is, and I’m sure Bette likes it too! :) Love the update. Thanks for posting!
Is it normal to feel like them so giddy, that was brilliant my friend, wow B you are amazing, it really feel great reading it so how does it feel when you are living it. Thank you so much for this amazing pleasure, you are one of my best writers ever.
“Did I hurt you baby?” “No,” Bette whimpered. Tina smiled, “Good. Because I haven’t even started.”**THUD**** Bette wasn’t the only one who was saying “Fuck Me.” LOL! WOW Bi,I love slow and sexy and you are the best at writing it. I’m sure Bette will be happy to fill Tina’s order for more sex tomorrow and vice versa. Can’t wait for your next post.
go tina!!!!
Good gracious alive, either Bette is going to die from lack of fluid (Tina stole it all) or Tina is going to die from exhaustion. That was an awesome post. The night of first love (well first time in bed together) will go down in history, the start of Tibette.
Damn that was so freaking hot and loving it. Please post more, thanks!
the tease is over… well done…
SPEECHLESS. Off to take a cold shower. WOW. PPS
My god!!! Will somebody call the fire brigade please???? Ha I loved it!!! PPVVVVVVVS!!!
Wow!!! PPS
no more teasing I see and Bette has to be thinking now so well worth all the teasing and wait…You manage to capture Tina excitement and giddiness through out the NC17 and that was perfect. Staying true to the character you have create for Tina. Awwh.. Excellent
One sex filled weekend coming up! lol PPS:)
Yeah well Tina…I think we’re all feeling abit giddy right now…among other things! So worth waiting for!!
Tina…She made Bette a pillow queen? Nice =D i’m never reading your updates in the library again… I feel so exposed! lmao and ppl kept coming up to me that day!
Holy! *THUD* sorry let me just pick myself off the ground that was so fucking hot I can’t even speak… I’ll have to read it again ;) PPS and yeah I’ll never learn to not read your stories in public places LOL I just get too excited when I see an update well done as always
haha “poor bette” tina wants to to know her new place by heart anf tonge haha damn shes so lucky
wow… that was very, very well done! loved tina’s reaction – perfect! and now that the wait is over… bring on the weekend ;)
WOW!!! Damn that was so HOT and SEXY!!! Love IT!!! Now bring on the weekend. Thank you so much Bi
It’s great to have your two fictions when I’m jonesing for the L Word. Love it as usual. Thank you!
Tina is so cute! I love how excited she it with learning all she can. ; )
Amazing tender no teasing :) Love it! Thank you and cold shower here I come :)
ha ah ha…Tina kilsl me-‘Is it normal for my tongue to be sore’ What an amazing chapter, thanks lady for yet another diplay of masterful writing;)
now that the teasing is over, its more cold shower for us! great job!