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Timid Devotion (Part 9)
"What’s that girl’s name? The blonde one?" Tina asked, pointing to the television.
"Bonnie something … umm …" Bette started, tilting her head for a moment.
"She’s funny."
"Hunt!"
"What?" Tina laughed, turning her head to Bette.
"Hunt."
"Ooh!" Tina laughed, turning back to the television.
"What did you think I said?" Bette laughed in return.
"Nothing," Tina giggled, wriggling further into Bette’s hold. Bette suddenly realized what Tina must have heard, and chuckled to herself.
"Why would I say that?"
"Maybe you don’t like her," Tina mused, relaxing completely in the comfort of Bette’s arms.
"Everyone likes Bonnie Hunt."
Tina let out a very soft moan before remaining still, signaling her agreement with Bette’s statement.
They both sat together, leaning over slightly as time passed.
Bette opened her eyes as she breathed in quickly through her nose, slightly startled. She looked out to the television and it had stopped. She furrowed her brows and looked around, suddenly realizing that Tina was laying ontop of her, with her head resting on Bette’s chest. This made Bette smile enormously, adoring the bouncy blonde curls and the soft glowing skin of the beautiful woman before her. ‘How did I get so lucky?’ she mused inwardly, letting her eyes glance over Tina’s eyelashes and lips. She wanted to get up, but she also didn’t want to wake up the sleeping blonde. She gently brought her hand to Tina’s face and brushed away a strand of her hair that had fallen, touching her nose. She softly brushed Tina’s hair with her fingers, smiling all the while.
"Mmm," Tina moaned quietly which made Bette beam with happiness.
‘She’s so adorable,’ she thought to herself, watching Tina move slightly, making her gasp.
Tina’s lips were nearly over her nipple, and the clothes in between didn’t lessen the sensation for Bette. She could feel her body reacting quickly, and her eyes widened as she tried to shift under the blonde make the situation more appropriate.
Just as she was trying to move, she saw Tina’s eyes flutter open. She stopped moving and waited for Tina to realize where she was.
"Oh, sorry," Tina smiled, immediately getting up from the comfort of Bette’s body.
"I think it’s cute that you fell asleep," Bette teased, sitting up as well.
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(44 votes, average: 3.91 out of 5)
OMG the tension, how in god’s name are they gonna walk?LOL :)PPS
I wonder if the walk will be a short one to the bedroom…they might actually make it there without starting to remove articles of clothing…whew! There is so much desire between these two, it’s like a powderkeg waiting to explode. Did you per chance take time to write two chapters???
So,this is “taking it slow” huh? Feels like the speed of light to me…! LOL
Love it! I love both the stories, but this one best, so far.You have a fan. ;o]
I am exhausted, the tension between them sucks the energy out of me. Making out…… it’s been awhile. LOL
Love this .. thank you so much for the update… so they’re not going to last with this “taking it slow”… LOL!!!! But I can’t wait to see how their walk goes… Great update! :D
“can we just kiss?” is the sweetest question ever! but really Tina? how can you “just kiss” bette? nearly impossible as this chapter has clearly portrayed! love it!
I don’t know if I could “just kiss” either one of these women..thanks for another great chapter. pps
How can they take a walk? Would’t they rather re-watch Jumanji..its such an entertaining film LMFAO
Mercy, I don’t know how they can find the strength to walk to the door let alone outside the house. The sexual tension is so high they could float to wherever they wanted. I can hardly walk after reading what they were doing. This just can’t last for much longer. How can you write this wihout falling off your chair biissexi? Lovd it. PPS
Mercy, I don’t know how they can find the strength to walk to the door let alone outside the house. The sexual tension is so high they could float to wherever they wanted. I can hardly walk after reading what they were doing. This just can’t last for much longer. How can you write this wihout falling off your chair biissexi? Lovd it. PPS
Mercy, I don’t know how they can find the strength to walk to the door let alone outside the house. The sexual tension is so high they could float to wherever they wanted. I can hardly walk after reading what they were doing. This just can’t last for much longer. How can you write this wihout falling off your chair biissexi? Lovd it. PPS
why r they teasing themselves? enuff already!!!! lol.
I love the tension between the two. They are so loving and playful…I really like your story. I wonder how they are going to last. lol PPS!
Their desire for each other put together is like a bomb waiting to explode…and when it does, it will be a hell of a night for both of them. I think the make out sessions are really fun…Bette is so cute trying to contro, herself :P Great chappie, good luck with school ;)
I am not sure that either one can hold out much longer. I know that Bette wants to take it slow, but their bodies are not allowing that to happen.
Ahh you such a tease my friend for leaving us like that lol. They are sweet and hot but they taking things slow its killing us here lol. Please post more, thanks!
mmmmmmmmmm….yummy…You could cut a block out of the all the tension in the air!I liked the Bonnie Hunt touch~Hunt…=)
They aren’t exactly going slow anymore. :) Love it. Love this story. Thanks for posting!
Timid ….Right
These two can’t possibly last much longer – they are on fire for one another – and dirty thoughts – Yikes – if even one mentions something to the other – its on! They are so cute together – trying to be respectful of one another – but all the while tourerching themselves
Yikes i hit leave comment before I was done. See thats how little I comment on stories but since your stories are so amazing I could not be a silent reader anymore. PPS – can’t wait to read more!
“Apparently we can read each other’s minds”, well that my dear friend is because great minds think alike! lol Oh the tension between these two, I have a feeling they’re not gonna be walking anywhere but to the bedroom! PPS:)
They will need to walk very, very slowly. They are one HOT couple. Great job!!!!! PPS
great chapter. tension between these two is incredible! PPS!
OH Babe…WOW…WOW…I know I am sooo behind but had to leave you a message. What a magically wonderful chapter..I LOVED their interactions. My dear..you rock my world;)