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Timid Devotion (Part 9)
‘Bad bad bad,’ Bette said to herself, in response to all of her dirty thoughts. ‘Pull away, it’s the only way you can control yourself. Just pull away. You need to breathe.’ She tried so hard to listen to herself, but that hand felt too good to separate from.
‘Ahhh sooo good,’ Tina moaned in her mind, transmitting into an audible "Mmm."
"God this is too good," Bette smiled, pulling her lips away for a moment.
Tina slowly opened her eyes and blinked a few times before smiling back, her breathing still heavy. "It’s so good."
"I think … I think I need a moment to gather myself," Bette chuckled, resistant to take her hand away from Tina’s leg, but she knew she had to. She crawled off of the blonde and sat in the spot she had vacated just earlier.
"Yeah," Tina agreed, realizing that she had been thinking dirty thoughts as well. She knew they couldn’t push things too far, but she had forgotten in the midst of their make out session. "Wow, I think I lost my mind," she chuckled back, sitting back up with great difficulty. She had never been so aroused in all her life.
"I think we should probably just take a short break from that," Bette smiled, dropping her head in her hands.
Tina smiled at the affect she was having on Bette. "Okay," she replied cheerfully, thinking about the future make out sessions they would have. She moved over slowly toward Bette on the couch, her hand resting on the brunette’s back. "Thanks."
Bette looked up with a smile, "Thanks for what?"
"You know," Tina smiled, kissing her softly on the cheek.
That made Bette’s smile erupt into a goofy grin. She sat up and invited Tina into her arms. "Come on, time to watch Jumanji."
"Aww nooo," Tina teased, comfortably easing back into Bette’s arms.
They both settled in nicely and tried to stop thinking about their previous explosion of passion. Tina smiled at how comfortable it was to lean against Bette and rest her head on her shoulder. She let out a deep breath and shifted slightly.
Bette was smiling as well, in disbelief at how satisfying it was just to have Tina in her arms. She was glad she was able to control herself earlier. Suddenly, with that thought, she began thinking about how their first time would be. She smiled imagining the evening she would set up for Tina.
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(44 votes, average: 3.91 out of 5)
OMG the tension, how in god’s name are they gonna walk?LOL :)PPS
I wonder if the walk will be a short one to the bedroom…they might actually make it there without starting to remove articles of clothing…whew! There is so much desire between these two, it’s like a powderkeg waiting to explode. Did you per chance take time to write two chapters???
So,this is “taking it slow” huh? Feels like the speed of light to me…! LOL
Love it! I love both the stories, but this one best, so far.You have a fan. ;o]
I am exhausted, the tension between them sucks the energy out of me. Making out…… it’s been awhile. LOL
Love this .. thank you so much for the update… so they’re not going to last with this “taking it slow”… LOL!!!! But I can’t wait to see how their walk goes… Great update! :D
“can we just kiss?” is the sweetest question ever! but really Tina? how can you “just kiss” bette? nearly impossible as this chapter has clearly portrayed! love it!
I don’t know if I could “just kiss” either one of these women..thanks for another great chapter. pps
How can they take a walk? Would’t they rather re-watch Jumanji..its such an entertaining film LMFAO
Mercy, I don’t know how they can find the strength to walk to the door let alone outside the house. The sexual tension is so high they could float to wherever they wanted. I can hardly walk after reading what they were doing. This just can’t last for much longer. How can you write this wihout falling off your chair biissexi? Lovd it. PPS
Mercy, I don’t know how they can find the strength to walk to the door let alone outside the house. The sexual tension is so high they could float to wherever they wanted. I can hardly walk after reading what they were doing. This just can’t last for much longer. How can you write this wihout falling off your chair biissexi? Lovd it. PPS
Mercy, I don’t know how they can find the strength to walk to the door let alone outside the house. The sexual tension is so high they could float to wherever they wanted. I can hardly walk after reading what they were doing. This just can’t last for much longer. How can you write this wihout falling off your chair biissexi? Lovd it. PPS
why r they teasing themselves? enuff already!!!! lol.
I love the tension between the two. They are so loving and playful…I really like your story. I wonder how they are going to last. lol PPS!
Their desire for each other put together is like a bomb waiting to explode…and when it does, it will be a hell of a night for both of them. I think the make out sessions are really fun…Bette is so cute trying to contro, herself :P Great chappie, good luck with school ;)
I am not sure that either one can hold out much longer. I know that Bette wants to take it slow, but their bodies are not allowing that to happen.
Ahh you such a tease my friend for leaving us like that lol. They are sweet and hot but they taking things slow its killing us here lol. Please post more, thanks!
mmmmmmmmmm….yummy…You could cut a block out of the all the tension in the air!I liked the Bonnie Hunt touch~Hunt…=)
They aren’t exactly going slow anymore. :) Love it. Love this story. Thanks for posting!
Timid ….Right
These two can’t possibly last much longer – they are on fire for one another – and dirty thoughts – Yikes – if even one mentions something to the other – its on! They are so cute together – trying to be respectful of one another – but all the while tourerching themselves
Yikes i hit leave comment before I was done. See thats how little I comment on stories but since your stories are so amazing I could not be a silent reader anymore. PPS – can’t wait to read more!
“Apparently we can read each other’s minds”, well that my dear friend is because great minds think alike! lol Oh the tension between these two, I have a feeling they’re not gonna be walking anywhere but to the bedroom! PPS:)
They will need to walk very, very slowly. They are one HOT couple. Great job!!!!! PPS
great chapter. tension between these two is incredible! PPS!
OH Babe…WOW…WOW…I know I am sooo behind but had to leave you a message. What a magically wonderful chapter..I LOVED their interactions. My dear..you rock my world;)