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    Tina, Chapter 14

    Tina? I here Alices voice and open my eyes to look at her. Shes gonna be okay. Her words reassure me not the slightest bit. Bette might not be able to walk or talk if she even makes it through the night.

    Id like to go to the other waiting room, so I can see her as soon as shes settled, I request.

    Thats a good idea why dont we all go, Alice says as she wraps an arm around my shoulder. Her warm touch reminds me of what I may never feel again from my best friend my love my life my soul mate. I turn and hold Alice, crying into her shoulder like I did that fateful night two weeks ago (*yes, thats the correct time frame). I feel several other hands rubbing my back as various voices sound off about their own feelings. Tina, do you think you can walk? I back away and nod my head. Nothing in this world will keep me from her side. Ill crawl if I have to, but Ill get to her somehow.

    Dr. Anderson opens the door and leads us all into the hallway. Mary will you show these ladies to the ICU waiting room?

    Sure thing doctor. The young woman is wearing a Pepto Bismol pink smock. I think shes some kind of candy striper of something. She has a pleasant smile that reaches her eyes. Bette has a smile like that. The way her eyes dance when she laughs makes me melt. I love the way she can seduce me with just a look. Mary leads us to an elevator near the rear of the emergency room. I turn and look up at each number as it lights up. As the elevator descends each floor, it pauses momentarily longer than momentarily. Bette will be settled long before we get up there. Whats taking so long? Finally! The elevator reaches the first floor DING, the doors slide open. Mary steps in and holds the door for the rest of us. Im the last one on I dont know why, but my feet seem to weigh a ton. Its as if I dont want to go if I go then Ill have to look at her and see how hurt she is Ill have to stay composed if she wakes up and doesnt remember me. I slowly drag myself into the compartment and turn around facing the doors as they slide shut.

    Comments

    1. Well well. Miss Perfection, I see you have definately been putting alot of time and effort into this story, and it is brilliant. I hope Tina is prepared for what she is going to see.

    2. You are doing such a great job on this story. Most cities do have A HATE CRIME UNIT. Some small town dont so the use the next lagest city. Hope Tina doesnt freak out when she see Bette. It can look pretty bad.in the beginning. thanks.

    3. i dont understand allyour laws and all or the medical talk very muchbut i would really like to send Bette a beautiful flower arrangement and a get well card!!

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