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    To Live Without You (Chapter 11)

    Story written on April 26, 2006 by ClosetDana.
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    Author Notes:

    Alice and Dana go below the belt, Victoria like to hit above

    "God Dana….Dana" The athlete was tranced by the writer’s sweet voice that moaned in her ears, she closed her eyes to revel in it,

    "Dana….God open the fucking door I know you’re in there." Dana’s eyes focused to see her own door vibrating from Alice’s knocking, she turned the knob quickly and ran to get the small bag she’d packed. Alice walked in slowly behind her,

    "What the crap were you doing? I was knocking for like five minutes." Dana mumbled sorry while scurrying down the hall getting as far away from the writer as she could, hell, if she kept having daydreams like those she’d have to commit herself to a mental institution. The blonde leaned around the corner to chat,

    "Hey…" Dana stood up straight bag in hand staring at Alice,

    "Hey…" a long silence fell over the room, neither woman wanting to be the first to talk about the break up.

    ****

    Dana and Alice lay naked on the writer’s living room floor in afterglow. They had made love for hours only stopping for the special dinner Alice had spent the day cooking. The athlete wrapped them in the checkered blanket Alice had bought for their ‘naked picnic’, the writer rested her head on Dana’s chest, the brunette breath slow and even, a pattern that made the young writer smile. Dana however, was not so content, still torn by the chef Lara’s actions earlier. Dana turned to Alice and looked her in the eyes, those deep brown windows to the writer’s soul.

    "Al, you know I would never lie to you…right?" The smile that spread from ear to ear was immediately replaced by fear,

    "…yes…Dana what’s wrong? You’re scaring me." Dana wrapped Alice’s arms around her and spoke into her neck,

    "Lara…kissed me today…in The Planet," The writer tensed, the wonderful ambiance of love and understanding that filled the room was washed away with one name. Had it been anyone else, Alice might have laughed, had it been anyone else she might have said it was alright…but this was Lara… Dana once said Lara was the love of her life, and although they weren’t together at the time whenever Alice thought about it a pain shot through her stomach. The writer tried to pull back but Dana held her close,

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    1. uh oh…could they be having a bit of car trouble along the road? Great update! When you started off with alice attacking dana, I thought it was real! But of course not, you have to be a tease and trick us all. But of course there’s a long way till they work it out, it’s like all things in life. Great update though, I can’t wait for the next one!!! :)

    4. The ‘fight’ Dana and Victoria had was really funny. :D And like Dawson, you got me there, I really thought Alice was making a move on Dana!!! :PThe most emotional and painful break-up…and you are just giving it us piece by piece. ;) Was this THE break-up scene or is Alice going to be backand will the famous words ‘I don’t think I can live without you’ be spoken? I’m looking forward to the 2-hour drive (dare I look forward to that? :) ). With the car trouble ahead, at one point the need to stop at a garage and maybe have yet another encounter in the restroom? :P

    5. Great Update!! They have a long road to travel together both to San Diego and in their relationship. But nothing that a little car trouble wont fix…they may even have to spend the night together in a far to small bed. hahaha I am loving this story and I’ll keep reading as long as you keep writing. Can’t wait for the next installment.

    6. I love this story. Like everyone else I thought whoa…they’re back, but it’s better this way, sex is not to foremost, it’s communication that’s going to see these two through. I think they make such an awesome pair. Love your Fic…can’t wait for Chapt. 12…heh, heh…hope it’s NC17. Cheers!!

    8. hiya great update, i hope you are not heading for a car accident because that would be mean lolif you need any help on the whole tennis jig just let me no lol and i will explain :)loving this story but would be better with danish reunited *cough hint cough*post soon x

    9. Like you really need my comment,lol. I know I’ve said this before but YOU ARE THE BIGGEST TEASE! Bye Cliff, lol. For some reason, I think I’m going to enjoy the drug induced Dana. :) But quit the daydreaming (it messes with my mind) I especially love, “I want to see in your eyes, everything I do to you. Car troubles ahead… I guess you’ll make me wonder about that. I wonder about you too… if you tease me I might have to look ahead to see if it’s real, lol. Great post. I want more. Can I be your biggest fan?

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