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To Live Without You (Chapter 11)
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"God, Alice I don’t think I can do this," The writer never replied she only stared into Dana’s eyes which gave the athlete new determination, realizing
‘if Alice wants this, I’ll try my best to give it to her.’ The writer pushed into Dana slowly and the athlete’s eyes grew wide and serious, trying to will her body to obey her. Dana kissed the writer and moaned her name loudly when Alice began to pump her fingers in and out. The athlete didn’t make it far, this would her fifth orgasm of the night, and the way Alice was staring intently at her caused an even larger flood around the writer’s fingers. Dana threw her head back but kept her eyes open, her gaze returning to the writer, Alice spoke her voice trance-like and seemingly far away.
"I want to look into your eyes when you cum Dana, can you keep them open for me?" The athlete couldn’t respond, she couldn’t do anything but keep her eyes open and feel the amazing sensations of orgasm creep through her thighs. Dana’s breaths became ragged and her eyes opened even wider, Alice felt the athlete’s muscles contract around her fingers. No sound escaped Dana’s mouth she couldn’t breath or scream she could only think of one thing she could see, and that was Alice. The athlete came down in Alice’s arms the young writer held her and looked the same way Dana had before, distant. Alice sat up and walked to the door way of the room,
"I’m going to go for a walk…I need to think." Dana sat up still shaking, resting her head on her knees, groaning as the writer left the apartment.
"Al, please, don’t do this
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They stood in the living room, both of them remembering the last time they’d been there. Alice tried to change the subject, nervously playing with the moulding around the door.
"I was watching Sportscenter and they were talking about you…You’re going to be ranked number two soon," Dana nodded sheepishly.
"I still have to win my next match, but yeah it’s a possibility." The both nodded and stared at each other hoping to God that the trip wouldn’t be this awkward. Alice smiled gesturing over her shoulder,
"Ok number two let’s move it…ooooh can I call you Number Two like in the Austin Powers movies?" Dana thought about it for a moment, walking out of the door
"If you’re going to call me Number Two, I rather it be in reference to Agent Number Two from the Bond movies." Alice piped in,
"Roger Moore?" Dana’s face wrinkled in disgust,
"Sean Connery…Al," The athlete feigned disappointment in the writer, scoffing.
"Roger Moore, yeah right." Alice hopped in the car and turned the key, the Mini making a strange puttering sound, Dana face wrinkled in confusion.
"Al what’s that sound?" The writer shrugged pulling the small car out of parking lot as fast as humanly possible,
"Eh, I don’t know I’ll get it checked out when we get back." The car puttered again and the athlete winced,
"You sure you don’t want to just take my car?" Alice shook her head,
"Too late already gone."
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uh oh…could they be having a bit of car trouble along the road? Great update! When you started off with alice attacking dana, I thought it was real! But of course not, you have to be a tease and trick us all. But of course there’s a long way till they work it out, it’s like all things in life. Great update though, I can’t wait for the next one!!! :)
So, I guess Cliff doesn’t know they have a history?
ah.. forget to say I love your story. Before they can reconcile, day dreams are great for readers :p
The ‘fight’ Dana and Victoria had was really funny. :D And like Dawson, you got me there, I really thought Alice was making a move on Dana!!! :PThe most emotional and painful break-up…and you are just giving it us piece by piece. ;) Was this THE break-up scene or is Alice going to be backand will the famous words ‘I don’t think I can live without you’ be spoken? I’m looking forward to the 2-hour drive (dare I look forward to that? :) ). With the car trouble ahead, at one point the need to stop at a garage and maybe have yet another encounter in the restroom? :P
Great Update!! They have a long road to travel together both to San Diego and in their relationship. But nothing that a little car trouble wont fix…they may even have to spend the night together in a far to small bed. hahaha I am loving this story and I’ll keep reading as long as you keep writing. Can’t wait for the next installment.
I love this story. Like everyone else I thought whoa…they’re back, but it’s better this way, sex is not to foremost, it’s communication that’s going to see these two through. I think they make such an awesome pair. Love your Fic…can’t wait for Chapt. 12…heh, heh…hope it’s NC17. Cheers!!
Car trouble anyone, and will it be poor Cliff…? He seems like a really good guy, but are Dana and Alice destined to be…?
hiya great update, i hope you are not heading for a car accident because that would be mean lolif you need any help on the whole tennis jig just let me no lol and i will explain :)loving this story but would be better with danish reunited *cough hint cough*post soon x
Like you really need my comment,lol. I know I’ve said this before but YOU ARE THE BIGGEST TEASE! Bye Cliff, lol. For some reason, I think I’m going to enjoy the drug induced Dana. :) But quit the daydreaming (it messes with my mind) I especially love, “I want to see in your eyes, everything I do to you. Car troubles ahead… I guess you’ll make me wonder about that. I wonder about you too… if you tease me I might have to look ahead to see if it’s real, lol. Great post. I want more. Can I be your biggest fan?
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! this story is so good! I kno I’m a little late… but its awesome
the background is good but I can’t wait to see what will happen while they are on this trip please post soon I love it