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“Uh, come in. Are you hungry? I made lunch.”
“Yeah, let’s eat.” Neither had any appetite in the last few weeks and both had lost weight but they never refused an opportunity to share a meal together.
Tina looked at her as she set everything out. Would it really be the last time she would ever see her? They had discussed the possibility of them remaining friends after Tina got married but Bette made it clear that she would not be able to do it. Tina continued to try and convince her at every opportunity.
“Uh, maybe in a few weeks we can go on that ski trip we were talking about. You know maybe before the holidays.” Tina went to open the bottle of wine she had brought with her.
Bette stopped what she was doing and stared into the refrigerator trying her best not to get angry.
“T…I told you how I felt about that. I can’t, you know I can’t do that.”
Tina could feel the emotion start to build in her. “Bette, we could do it. We could still be in one another’s lives. You’re my best friend. Please, couldn’t we try?”
Bette turned to face her. “Tina, I can’t. I love you. I’m in love with you. What is that you want me to do? Have lunch from time to time, or go shopping, or maybe see a movie every now and again and then watch you go home to him. I can’t stand it now and you’re not even married or living with him! It isn’t fair to ask me to watch you be with someone else.”
Tina lowered her head. “ I know I’m being selfish but…I don’t want to lose you.”
“Then don’t marry him.”
Tina got up and walked toward the windows. “It’s not that simple Bette. They have expectation of me. What am I supposed to do? Should I tell my right-wing, conservative parents that I’m in love with a woman and I can’t marry their idea of my perfect mate? And what should I say to Eric? He has been nothing but patient with me. I haven’t had sex with him in over a year, and he’s still with me! He doesn’t deserve to be hurt.”
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awesome, absolutely awesome!!!!
AMAZING STORY!!!! Thank you PPMS
Thanks for this story. I love happy endings :)
Beautiful. Completely different and perfectly written.
You are such an amazing writer! Thank you soo much for continuing to post and sharing your talent with us. What a great story!!!
Great story.
Oh my goodness! That was really, really, really, really good! I was just about to cry and was trying to stop it. Thanks for sharing this with us. I LOVE THIS!
Awww damn, you had me cryig like a baby, my heart was as broken as Bette’s was and then you fixed it. I wondered how on earth Tina could leave after Bette made love to her. Dang, I’m glad she went back. And she was right, she was married once that day and she made the right decision. Thanks for such a beautiful story, so sad and yet that’s how life is. Thanks for bringing this one to us.
That was soooo good. Thanks!
I really thought you were going to break my heart but Tina did it, she came back to the one person who held her heart.
That was amazing sad, beautiful and hot, hot, hot. I was crying when the ladies were sayin good-bye, but you put that smile back on my face with the last two paragraphs.
Amazing, HOT – HOT – HOT
Amazing:Right decision Tina.Thank you.PPS
That was awesome and wonderful, love it. So happy for them and glad Tina make a right decision. Please post more, thanks!
Whew, girl. You had me going! Loved it!!!
Good story bro!
The whole time I was reading this I’m thinking, fix it, please fix it. Then I started to get sadder. Thinking please please fix it. And you fixed it :) Yhey!!!
Lovely story, JBM. Thanks :)
I hardly ever curse unnecessarily but damn this warrants it.. This one-off was FUCKING AMAZING!!! JBM!!! I totally love this story and I loved how you portrayed their angst and the sorrow, the love and the sex and the inevitable reunion, their bond was described so beautifully!! :) Am bookmarking this!!! Thanks so much, hope you keep feeling prolific!! hahaha.. :D
Ok, truth: I read the 1st page and started the 2nd, but then immediately went to the last page, because there was no way my heart could take their last night together if Tina married Eric! And no, reading the end didn’t spoil the story because what was in between was lovely, and hot, and sweet! Thanks for sharing!
Wow, very heart wrenching! Thank god you had Tina come to her senses. Thanks for the post.
I’m going to take a cold shower before I read the next post.
that was great thanks….i could feel their pain
WoW! Simply Wow! Excellent story. Thank you. Just simply awesome :)
HEy JB, That was awesome.there was tenderness and understanding mixed with confusion and hurt. Hot monkey loving with the softest of caresses. You made me weep and laugh, sigh and shout.Just wonderfully and beautifully written.Thank you so much.Your Loyal Fan.
Wow, what an amazingly beautiful story. “she had the cutest freckles all over like stars waiting to be named.” My favorite line from the story. This was beautifully written. While I was reading, I was hoping that Tina would show up on Bette’s doorstep in her wedding dress. Simply beautiful :)
wow you had me balling…thanks for the ending!!!