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“But I do?” Bette was trying not to focus on the part about sex. Truth be told it relieved her to hear Tina say it.
“No, you don’t. I’m the only one that should be hurt. This…all of this is my fault. I should have left you alone and gone on with the life I was supposed to have.”
“Why didn’t you?” Bette walked out onto the deck not waiting for an answer.
Tina ran her hand through her hair giving Bette a minute alone. She knew today would be intense but right at this minute, it was obvious just how difficult it was going to be to say goodbye to her.
She walked out and put her arms around Bette’s waist and pressed her face to her back.
“I didn’t because I fell in love with you too. I’m in love with you. Are you happy now?”
She let go moving to the other side of the railing. Bette knew Tina loved her but she had never said it before. Her heart beat out of her chest as she walked over to her. She turned her around and kissed her, catching her off guard. Tina tensed at first but relaxed in a few seconds. They had kissed before and often but never with such need. They stopped after a few minutes, pulling away frustrated. Bette reached for her drink and took a seat trying to control her want. Tina walked over to her.
“Bette…let’s make love. I want to make love to you please, don’t you want to?”
She looked at her as if she had two heads. “Of course I want to. It’s all I think about. I’ve wanted to from the moment we met Tina. But I know that you’ll ruin me. You’ll ruin me for any future relationship I might have. I know if we make love I’ll compare every woman I’m ever with, to you.”
Tina looked angry and she couldn’t believe what she was feeling. Was she actually angry that Bette might find love with someone else one day? Was it possible that she was so selfish to think that she would go on to marry Eric while Bette sat at home…alone.
Bette noticed her anger and knew where it was coming from. “What should I do Tina? Should I crawl into a hole by myself while you go out and live your life with…him?”
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awesome, absolutely awesome!!!!
AMAZING STORY!!!! Thank you PPMS
Thanks for this story. I love happy endings :)
Beautiful. Completely different and perfectly written.
You are such an amazing writer! Thank you soo much for continuing to post and sharing your talent with us. What a great story!!!
Great story.
Oh my goodness! That was really, really, really, really good! I was just about to cry and was trying to stop it. Thanks for sharing this with us. I LOVE THIS!
Awww damn, you had me cryig like a baby, my heart was as broken as Bette’s was and then you fixed it. I wondered how on earth Tina could leave after Bette made love to her. Dang, I’m glad she went back. And she was right, she was married once that day and she made the right decision. Thanks for such a beautiful story, so sad and yet that’s how life is. Thanks for bringing this one to us.
That was soooo good. Thanks!
I really thought you were going to break my heart but Tina did it, she came back to the one person who held her heart.
That was amazing sad, beautiful and hot, hot, hot. I was crying when the ladies were sayin good-bye, but you put that smile back on my face with the last two paragraphs.
Amazing, HOT – HOT – HOT
Amazing:Right decision Tina.Thank you.PPS
That was awesome and wonderful, love it. So happy for them and glad Tina make a right decision. Please post more, thanks!
Whew, girl. You had me going! Loved it!!!
Good story bro!
The whole time I was reading this I’m thinking, fix it, please fix it. Then I started to get sadder. Thinking please please fix it. And you fixed it :) Yhey!!!
Lovely story, JBM. Thanks :)
I hardly ever curse unnecessarily but damn this warrants it.. This one-off was FUCKING AMAZING!!! JBM!!! I totally love this story and I loved how you portrayed their angst and the sorrow, the love and the sex and the inevitable reunion, their bond was described so beautifully!! :) Am bookmarking this!!! Thanks so much, hope you keep feeling prolific!! hahaha.. :D
Ok, truth: I read the 1st page and started the 2nd, but then immediately went to the last page, because there was no way my heart could take their last night together if Tina married Eric! And no, reading the end didn’t spoil the story because what was in between was lovely, and hot, and sweet! Thanks for sharing!
Wow, very heart wrenching! Thank god you had Tina come to her senses. Thanks for the post.
I’m going to take a cold shower before I read the next post.
that was great thanks….i could feel their pain
WoW! Simply Wow! Excellent story. Thank you. Just simply awesome :)
HEy JB, That was awesome.there was tenderness and understanding mixed with confusion and hurt. Hot monkey loving with the softest of caresses. You made me weep and laugh, sigh and shout.Just wonderfully and beautifully written.Thank you so much.Your Loyal Fan.
Wow, what an amazingly beautiful story. “she had the cutest freckles all over like stars waiting to be named.” My favorite line from the story. This was beautifully written. While I was reading, I was hoping that Tina would show up on Bette’s doorstep in her wedding dress. Simply beautiful :)
wow you had me balling…thanks for the ending!!!