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True love – Chapter 23
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Shane: “I’m so sorry…”
Carmen: “I know you are…”
Shane: “I didn’t mean to do it…I just…I lost my mind. I wasn’t myself.”
5 hours earlier at Venice Beach
The sun was burning, the air was dry. Helena, Shane’s cousin and Alice, Shane’s best friend were on the beach.
Helena: “Alice, I’m begging you. Let’s retire. The day is hot, the Morales abroad. If we meet, there will be a fight. For now, these hot days, is the mad blood stirring.”
They took a seat at the patio of the Planet, when a black Ford Mustang arrived and stopped just in front of the Planet.
Helena: “By my head, here comes the Morales.”
Alice: “By my heel. I care not.”
Carlos Morales and two friends of him, Papi and Jenny, enter the Planet’s patio.
Carlos: “Follow me close. I will talk to them. Ladies, a word with one of you.”
Alice: “And but one word with one of us? couple it with something; make it a word and a blow.”
Carlos: “You shall find me apt enough to that, sir, an you will give me occasion.”
Alice: “Could you not take some occasion without giving?”
Carlos: “Alice! You consort with Shane.”
Alice: “Consort! What? Are you say that we are minstrels? If you make minstrels of us this is what you get. I will teach you how to dance!”
Helena: “ We are in a public place here, either you find another private place to talk or just leave. All eyes are on you here.”
Alice: “Eyes were made to look, so let them look. I will not budge for no man’s pleasure, I.”
Shane enters the Planet and runs toward Alice not seeing his company.
Carlos: “Well, peace be with you, lady. Here comes my man.”
Shane: “Alice!”
Carlos: “Shane!!”
Shane stopped realising the tension. She looked at Alice and the way Alice looked at her made her realize how serious the sitation was.
Carlos: “The hate that I bear you can afford no better term than this: you are a villain.”
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hey landon…i was confused at first but i caught on quickly…that was awesome…man my reputation must be horrible with all the sex scenes i write…but i cant help it my mind is permanently lost in the gutter i have given up finding it…lol…but once again great chapter cant wait for your next update
Hate to see what Carm would have dreamed if they had watched Pulp Fiction :) I’m quite proud of my extremely dirty mind and am imfamous for it…bring on the toys!!!! :) Great chapter.
Oh and the only thing scarier then Carm’s dreams…her mom! good luck Shane.
hey landon :) i’m so happy to see you updated. so it’s dedicated to me? i’m so proud, lol~ seriously, thank you. at first i was a bit confused about the so romeo and julet dream that carmen had. guess what, i just started reading “Hamlet” i thought what a coincidence lol. it’s really time for shane to see carmen’s family, hope it goes well… PPS!! (i was expected that you continue the night before… about how they used the “toys” lol)
I was in the same boat as the others, was confused at first. Luckily you explained it to me! It’s a good chapter! Love Roemo and Juliet!! You did justice to it and luckily, no one died! Yes, I was referring to your sex toys! Didn’t know that you are into them! haha Don’t worry, your reputation is clean. can’t say that to mine! :)
was confused as hell, then i realised lol, gr8 story cant wait for more
yay took me awhile lol to get a hold of what was up. I kept reading lol the prev. chapter n then going back to this one. BUT yes that version of Romeo n Juliet was one of my favorite..u did a nice adaptation..