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True love – Chapter 23
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Helena: “Are you hurt?”
Alice: “Yeah, yeah. A scratch. A scratch.”
Shane looked at her friend and realized that something was wrong. She got up and walked towards Alice.
Shane: “Courage, man. The hurt can not be much.”
Alice: “It’s enough. Ask for me tomorrow and you will find a grave-woman.”
Alice turns around and looks at her injury again. She had a deep cut on her lower body. She slowly turned around looking at Shane and Carlos.
Alice: “A plague on both of your houses!! They made worms’ meat of me.”
She turns around again.
Alice: “A plague on both of your houses!”
She walks away with Shane following her. Shane took her arm but Alice didn’t let her.
Alice: “No !! Why the devil came you between us? I was hurt under your arm.”
Shane: “I thought all for the best.”
Alice: “A plague…on both of your houses.”
Shane shaked uncontrollably the tears running down her face. She held Alice in her arms not wanting to realize what just happened.
Shane: “No!!! No!!!! Alice!!! No!!!”
Carlos and his friends who watched the scene from distance ran and tried to escape. Shane stood up burrying her face in her hands, the anger rising unceasingly. She walked and then ran towards her car, followed by Helena who tried to get into the car with Shane. Shane pushed her out of it and drove away.
Later that night Shane finds Carlos and chases after him in her car. She crashes her car so that his car overturns.
His gun falls out when he hears Shane stopping her car just next to his. Both of them saw the gun and start to run. Carlos got it before Shane and immediately pulled the trigger. He looked at Shane who came towards him.
Shane: “Alice’s soul is but a little away above our heads!! Staying for yours to keep him company!”
Carlos: “You should be with him hence!”
Shane grabbed the gun pointing it at her own head, falling on her knees.
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hey landon…i was confused at first but i caught on quickly…that was awesome…man my reputation must be horrible with all the sex scenes i write…but i cant help it my mind is permanently lost in the gutter i have given up finding it…lol…but once again great chapter cant wait for your next update
Hate to see what Carm would have dreamed if they had watched Pulp Fiction :) I’m quite proud of my extremely dirty mind and am imfamous for it…bring on the toys!!!! :) Great chapter.
Oh and the only thing scarier then Carm’s dreams…her mom! good luck Shane.
hey landon :) i’m so happy to see you updated. so it’s dedicated to me? i’m so proud, lol~ seriously, thank you. at first i was a bit confused about the so romeo and julet dream that carmen had. guess what, i just started reading “Hamlet” i thought what a coincidence lol. it’s really time for shane to see carmen’s family, hope it goes well… PPS!! (i was expected that you continue the night before… about how they used the “toys” lol)
I was in the same boat as the others, was confused at first. Luckily you explained it to me! It’s a good chapter! Love Roemo and Juliet!! You did justice to it and luckily, no one died! Yes, I was referring to your sex toys! Didn’t know that you are into them! haha Don’t worry, your reputation is clean. can’t say that to mine! :)
was confused as hell, then i realised lol, gr8 story cant wait for more
yay took me awhile lol to get a hold of what was up. I kept reading lol the prev. chapter n then going back to this one. BUT yes that version of Romeo n Juliet was one of my favorite..u did a nice adaptation..