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True love – Chapter 23
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Carlos spit on the ground while Papi pulled his gun taking out the magazine and takes out the munitions leaving one, which she showed to Shane and her friends.
Alice took Shane’s gun to do the same but Shane stopped her by holding her arm and the gun. She looked at Alice and shook her head walking towards Carlos.
Shane: “Carlos, the reason that I have to love you alleviates the rage to such a greeting. I am not a villain. Therefore farewell. I see you don’t know me.”
Shane offers him her hand. He turns around confused but hits it away angrily. Shane turns around and walks away.
Carlos: “This shall not excuse the pain that you have done to me. Therefore turn and draw!”
Shane keeps walking away but Carlos follows her grabbing her by her shoulder and pushing her down. He kicks her in the stomach expressing all his hatred towards her.
Carlos: “Turn and draw!!”
Shane: “I do protest, I never injured you. I love you more than you believe. Until you know the reason of my love. And so, good Morales, which name I tender as dearly as my own, be satisfied.”
She pulled her gun and gave it to him. Carlos breathed heavily and looked at Shane and the gun in disbelief before he hit the gun away from Shane’s hand and punched her again. Shane fell
again and didn’t get the chance to recover since Carlos kicked her hard uncontrollably.
Alice: “Oh calm, dishonorable and vile submission!”
Alice looked at her gun for a second, considering to use it, but let it drop on the ground to help her friend.
Alice: “Carlos, you rat-catcher. Will you walk?”
Carlos: “What do you want from me?”
Alice: “Good king of cats, nothing but one of your nine lives.”
Alice lashed out on Carlos which made him fall on a window laying on the ground. Before she could continue Shane wrapped her arms around her in order to stop her.
Shane: “Forbear this outrage, Alice!”
Alice looked at Carlos and saw the a piece of broken glass in his hand. Carlos injured Alice under Shane’s arm, which made Shane and Alice fall on the ground. Shane looked at Alice who stood up slowly covering her stomach with her arm. She laughed faintly.
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hey landon…i was confused at first but i caught on quickly…that was awesome…man my reputation must be horrible with all the sex scenes i write…but i cant help it my mind is permanently lost in the gutter i have given up finding it…lol…but once again great chapter cant wait for your next update
Hate to see what Carm would have dreamed if they had watched Pulp Fiction :) I’m quite proud of my extremely dirty mind and am imfamous for it…bring on the toys!!!! :) Great chapter.
Oh and the only thing scarier then Carm’s dreams…her mom! good luck Shane.
hey landon :) i’m so happy to see you updated. so it’s dedicated to me? i’m so proud, lol~ seriously, thank you. at first i was a bit confused about the so romeo and julet dream that carmen had. guess what, i just started reading “Hamlet” i thought what a coincidence lol. it’s really time for shane to see carmen’s family, hope it goes well… PPS!! (i was expected that you continue the night before… about how they used the “toys” lol)
I was in the same boat as the others, was confused at first. Luckily you explained it to me! It’s a good chapter! Love Roemo and Juliet!! You did justice to it and luckily, no one died! Yes, I was referring to your sex toys! Didn’t know that you are into them! haha Don’t worry, your reputation is clean. can’t say that to mine! :)
was confused as hell, then i realised lol, gr8 story cant wait for more
yay took me awhile lol to get a hold of what was up. I kept reading lol the prev. chapter n then going back to this one. BUT yes that version of Romeo n Juliet was one of my favorite..u did a nice adaptation..