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True love – Chapter 23
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Carmen: “Do you think we will see each other again?”
Shane: “I do not doubt it. Trust me, all these woes shall serve for sweet discourses in our time to come.”
Mercedes: “Ho, daughter!”
We shared one last kiss before I finally had to let her go.
Mercedes: “Carmen!”
Shane fell backwards into the pool. I turn to see my mother who went back into my room, which is my chance to look at Shane again. The picture I got to see of her concerned me more than anything else.
Carmen: “Oh god! I have an ill-divining soul. It seems like I am seeing you as a dead in the bottom of a tomb. Either my eyesight fails, or you do indeed look pale.”
Shane: “Adieu.”
Carmen: “O fortune, fortune! Everybody calls you fickle: If thou art fickle, what do you do with her. Be fickle, fortune; For then, I hope, you will not keep her long, but send her back.”
Shane’s POV
It was like a déjà-vu. I laid next to Carmen and again she was mumbling something in her sleep hitting me. I hoped that she didn’t dream of Cherie Jaffe alias Peroni or whatever her name is.
Shane: “Hey…hey Carmen…wake up…you had a bad dream…you’re having a bad dream. You’re kicking me…again…”
Carmen: “Hmm? Oh my god…”
Shane: “What?”
Oh my god, what have I done this time? The last time I gave a tatoo to Cherie, the same Carmen and I have. And then she was mad at me for the rest of the day and kicked me out of the bedroom. Oh boy, I really don’t want to sleep on the couch again.
Carmen: “You killed my Carlos.”
My eyes flew open, I thought that she was going to tell me something about me cheating on her or whatever. I didn’t expect that at all. I’d rather be a cheater than a killer!
Shane: “Carmen, I swear, I didn’t kill him. It was just a dream…you had a bad dream. I have an alibi. I was at work and then I came home and then I got to the Planet to see your gig. I was at the bar drinking a beer. Okay three, maybe four. But I can remember everything what I did. I was watching you all the time and I talked to Alice. Please…don’t go to the police, it was only a bad dream.”
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hey landon…i was confused at first but i caught on quickly…that was awesome…man my reputation must be horrible with all the sex scenes i write…but i cant help it my mind is permanently lost in the gutter i have given up finding it…lol…but once again great chapter cant wait for your next update
Hate to see what Carm would have dreamed if they had watched Pulp Fiction :) I’m quite proud of my extremely dirty mind and am imfamous for it…bring on the toys!!!! :) Great chapter.
Oh and the only thing scarier then Carm’s dreams…her mom! good luck Shane.
hey landon :) i’m so happy to see you updated. so it’s dedicated to me? i’m so proud, lol~ seriously, thank you. at first i was a bit confused about the so romeo and julet dream that carmen had. guess what, i just started reading “Hamlet” i thought what a coincidence lol. it’s really time for shane to see carmen’s family, hope it goes well… PPS!! (i was expected that you continue the night before… about how they used the “toys” lol)
I was in the same boat as the others, was confused at first. Luckily you explained it to me! It’s a good chapter! Love Roemo and Juliet!! You did justice to it and luckily, no one died! Yes, I was referring to your sex toys! Didn’t know that you are into them! haha Don’t worry, your reputation is clean. can’t say that to mine! :)
was confused as hell, then i realised lol, gr8 story cant wait for more
yay took me awhile lol to get a hold of what was up. I kept reading lol the prev. chapter n then going back to this one. BUT yes that version of Romeo n Juliet was one of my favorite..u did a nice adaptation..