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True love – Chapter 23
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Shane: “Either you or I or both of us must go with him! Either you or I or both of us! Either you or I or both of us must go with him!”
Shane pushed Carlos who fell backwards on the steps of a fountain. The gun fall on the ground. Shane took it and shot at Carlos who fell backwards into the fountain, his blood spreading quickly in the water.
Shane looked at the gun slowly and realized what she had done. She let the gun slip from her fingers. The rain rain came down in sheets now. Shane looked above.
Shane: “I am fortune’s fool!!”
Shane covered her face with both of her hands trying to stop her tears. Trying to regain composure. I took her back into my arms, kissing her face and whispering into her ear.
Carmen: “Listen to me…no matter what happens…I love you.”
After a short moment she calmed down again and pulled me even closer to her. Our lips met gently. We looked into each others eyes intensely. I opened up the buttons of her shirt taking it away gently, not wanting to hurt her. She winced in pain, so I laid my hand on her abs. I knew that this wouldn’t make her pain go away but it was a gesture of love. Again I cupped her face and turned it gently in order to look at all the injuries she got. My hands were in her hair when placed her hands on my face to kiss me softly. She lifted my shirt and I lifted my arms to help her taking it off. She never stopped smiling at me which gave me a feeling of safety and comfortable, although it was my first time- I felt complete in her arms and it seemed to be something we were supposed to do. I felt like we were made to love each other.
Next morning
We were sleeping peacefully in my bed. I had my arm around Shane’s body and my head on her shoulder when I felt her scare up breathing heavily. She must have had a nightmare. I kept my eyes closed though not wanting this moment to end until I noticed that she was starting to get dressed.
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hey landon…i was confused at first but i caught on quickly…that was awesome…man my reputation must be horrible with all the sex scenes i write…but i cant help it my mind is permanently lost in the gutter i have given up finding it…lol…but once again great chapter cant wait for your next update
Hate to see what Carm would have dreamed if they had watched Pulp Fiction :) I’m quite proud of my extremely dirty mind and am imfamous for it…bring on the toys!!!! :) Great chapter.
Oh and the only thing scarier then Carm’s dreams…her mom! good luck Shane.
hey landon :) i’m so happy to see you updated. so it’s dedicated to me? i’m so proud, lol~ seriously, thank you. at first i was a bit confused about the so romeo and julet dream that carmen had. guess what, i just started reading “Hamlet” i thought what a coincidence lol. it’s really time for shane to see carmen’s family, hope it goes well… PPS!! (i was expected that you continue the night before… about how they used the “toys” lol)
I was in the same boat as the others, was confused at first. Luckily you explained it to me! It’s a good chapter! Love Roemo and Juliet!! You did justice to it and luckily, no one died! Yes, I was referring to your sex toys! Didn’t know that you are into them! haha Don’t worry, your reputation is clean. can’t say that to mine! :)
was confused as hell, then i realised lol, gr8 story cant wait for more
yay took me awhile lol to get a hold of what was up. I kept reading lol the prev. chapter n then going back to this one. BUT yes that version of Romeo n Juliet was one of my favorite..u did a nice adaptation..