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True love – Chapter 23
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Taking on her underwear she winced in pain again and I wrapped my arms around her from behind.
Carmen: “Where are you going? It’s still early.”
Shane: “I have to go and live or stay and die.”
Carmen: “This light is not day-light, I know it. It is some meteor that the sun exhales, to light you on your way to San Diego. Therefore stay yet, you don’t need to leave.”
Shane pushed me on the bed and climbed on top of me with the blanket above us.
Shane: “Let me be taken. Let me be put to death. I have more care than will to leave. Come death, and welcome ! Carmen wants it so. How are you my sould, let’s talk. It is not day yet.”
She lay down on me snuggling against me. I enjoy the feel of her skin and her smell. As much as I want her to stay with me I realize that this could be her death.
Carmen: “It is, it is. Hurry up…be gone. More and more light it grows.”
We stood up on my bed with the blanket wrapped around us sharing a passionate kiss. Each kiss that I shared with her still made me shiver excitedly. Her soft lips…the way she touched me…the way she looked at me. My hands were running through her hair , she had hers on my back…I could practically feel the desire in her. Things would have gone more intimitate if…
Nurse: “Madame!!”
Shane and I both jump up, causing Shane to fall down from the bed on the ground with a loud noise. I looked at her concerned, but she didn’t seem to care about the pain. She got dressed quickly, so I turned my attention back to my nurse.
Carmen: “Nurse?”
Nurse: “Your mother is coming to your chamber. The day is broke, be careful, look about.”
I rushed to the window to help Shane get out.
Carmen: “Then, window, let day in, and let life out.”
Shane climbs down my balcony, before she disappears completely I bend forward to her stealing a sweet kiss. I could never get enough of her kisses.
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hey landon…i was confused at first but i caught on quickly…that was awesome…man my reputation must be horrible with all the sex scenes i write…but i cant help it my mind is permanently lost in the gutter i have given up finding it…lol…but once again great chapter cant wait for your next update
Hate to see what Carm would have dreamed if they had watched Pulp Fiction :) I’m quite proud of my extremely dirty mind and am imfamous for it…bring on the toys!!!! :) Great chapter.
Oh and the only thing scarier then Carm’s dreams…her mom! good luck Shane.
hey landon :) i’m so happy to see you updated. so it’s dedicated to me? i’m so proud, lol~ seriously, thank you. at first i was a bit confused about the so romeo and julet dream that carmen had. guess what, i just started reading “Hamlet” i thought what a coincidence lol. it’s really time for shane to see carmen’s family, hope it goes well… PPS!! (i was expected that you continue the night before… about how they used the “toys” lol)
I was in the same boat as the others, was confused at first. Luckily you explained it to me! It’s a good chapter! Love Roemo and Juliet!! You did justice to it and luckily, no one died! Yes, I was referring to your sex toys! Didn’t know that you are into them! haha Don’t worry, your reputation is clean. can’t say that to mine! :)
was confused as hell, then i realised lol, gr8 story cant wait for more
yay took me awhile lol to get a hold of what was up. I kept reading lol the prev. chapter n then going back to this one. BUT yes that version of Romeo n Juliet was one of my favorite..u did a nice adaptation..