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    Truly, Madly, Deeply: Chapter 3

    Story written on November 10, 2005 by buildmeupbreakmedown.
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    Last Chance for Romance

    “You deserve someone who knows what’s going on with themselves and can let you in completely”

    “I don’t want anyone else” her voice was becoming desperate.

    “You don’t know that” Shane got up and threw on a white-beater, back turned to Carmen.

    “I love you Shane and I at least know that”

    And there it was again, that silence. That silence that let you know things were completely different between all the persons involved. It was the same silence that hung in the air when Carmen told her sister Dizzy (Isadora) that she was *****. Things just couldn’t be the same after it was out in the open.

    ‘It’s all you’ve ever wanted’ Shane’s conscience reasoned.

    ‘But I’m scared’

    ‘Since when has that stopped you before? There’s only one soul mate for each person in this world and you only have a one in six billion chance of finding them. Take a chance on love’

    “I…” the dry lump in Shane’s throat was making it impossible to speak.

    Carmen, tears and mascara running down her cheeks, got up and stood just behind Shane; not close enough that they were touching, but close enough to feel the body heat bouncing off of each other. ‘Please. God Shane, Please’.

    She turned around to find Carmen in just a bra, make up hopelessly smudged as tears flowed freely from her beautiful brown eyes and in that moment, Shane never saw anything more beautiful in her entire life.

    She lifted her hands to cup the caramel skinned face, her thumbs brushing away the stray tears and make up. She leaned in and very gently but very deeply kissed the teary eyed womans lips. Carmen’s hands went up to the side of Shane’s shoulders, holding on for dear life.

    It was salt and heat and something that Shane thought she would never find and Carmen always knew would find her, it was there. It was between them. It was around them. They were in it and in it with each other.

    When she broke the kiss, they were stuck in that moment where you felt like if you blink the whole world would shatter into thousands of tiny razor sharp shards. They were fragile, Carmen was vulnerable, and for once… Shane was sure.

    “I love you too”

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    1. Great update as always! I love it when Carmen is pinning over Shane , not knowing what Shan feels. I love the angst between them. I love the drama. I loved this chapter so much, hoefully you will cont. to spice things up with some drama.:)

    3. Great update! Loved it! And, like 2BMe, I thought Shane was going to blow it too. Nice job. :D Very hot, very sweet when Shane got into bed with Carmen and cuddled, and the phone conversation was funny. I’m glad Carmen finally brought up the issue of where they were going with this, and that Shane finally told her she loved her too. I can’t wait to read more of this! Really, I check for updates every day. Am I hooked? Yeah, I’d say so. :p

    4. Damn! I thought she was going to blow it. Great build up to Shane admitting her feelings. Shane & Carmens inner mental battle nearly drove me to drink:D Great update.

    5. OMG!!!! yes!!!! let shane allow herself to feel what she wants and rightfully deserves. i wish she would quit beatin herself up and allow carmen’s love to wash over and let her start anew. please post soon. PEACE.

    6. oh yeah, I could swear that there is coming so much more (at this point I have the same writing style, by the way). I´m really looking forward to read more of your storys!

    7. oh yeah, I could swear that there is coming so much more (at this point I have the same writing style, by the way). I´m really looking forward to read more of your storys!

    9. Wonderful as always. Love that Carmen is sincere about her affection for Shane. Shane need to trust herself. Cant wait for whats gonna happen with Shane and Carmen. Thanks

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