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    Truly, Madly, Deeply: Chapter 3

    Story written on November 10, 2005 by buildmeupbreakmedown.
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    Last Chance for Romance

    “I was sleeping”

    “Oh, well, rise and shine and welcome the sun. Sunshine, you are my sunshine you….”

    “I’m hanging up now”

    “Wait WAIT! Okay Jeez calm down! Tonight, You, Me, Dana, and Carmen are going to over to the house of perpetual boredom (aka Bette and Tina’s) and acquire our visitation rights to our niece” Alice finished off in a rather matter fact tone.

    “You make it sound like a custody battle or some *****”

    “Well we haven’t seen Angelica since the hospital and I know you want to spend some quality time with the whole crew as much as I do”

    Shane sighed, Alice was right. It had been a long time since she’d spent time with the whole family, just relaxing and enjoying each others company and she missed those times dearly.

    Carmen groaned and pressed herself into Shane’s front, causing her to chuckle and kiss her shoulder.

    Alice evidently heard the groan through the phone, “God Shane, can’t you have one night where you don’t have some random custy (*****/gross) hookup chick in your bed”.

    “That custy chick you’re talking about is Carmen” Shane snapped back.

    “WHAT?!”

    Shane hung up the phone.

    Carmen giggled and pulled Shane’s arm back over her, “So I’m custy now?”

    “She didn’t know it was you, Al’s just like that sometimes” Shane replied as she pulled her closer.

    “Yeah I know…” Carmen nibbled on her bottom lip. She was afraid to ruin the moment but she didn’t know when she would get another chance to bring up her and Shane’s current situation. ‘Do or die I guess’.

    “Shane?” she said as she turned over to face the woman who has been haunting her thoughts for months.

    “Yeah?” the look in Shane’s eyes was that of concern and happiness. The latter being something that Carmen hadn’t seen very often and it gave her more courage.

    “We need to talk about us”

    Shane’s eyes rapidly changed into those of a cornered animal. Carmen felt herself freak out a little but quickly regained control over her emotions.

    “No, no it’s nothing bad” she lifted her hand to stroke the side of Shane’s face.

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    1. Great update as always! I love it when Carmen is pinning over Shane , not knowing what Shan feels. I love the angst between them. I love the drama. I loved this chapter so much, hoefully you will cont. to spice things up with some drama.:)

    3. Great update! Loved it! And, like 2BMe, I thought Shane was going to blow it too. Nice job. :D Very hot, very sweet when Shane got into bed with Carmen and cuddled, and the phone conversation was funny. I’m glad Carmen finally brought up the issue of where they were going with this, and that Shane finally told her she loved her too. I can’t wait to read more of this! Really, I check for updates every day. Am I hooked? Yeah, I’d say so. :p

    4. Damn! I thought she was going to blow it. Great build up to Shane admitting her feelings. Shane & Carmens inner mental battle nearly drove me to drink:D Great update.

    5. OMG!!!! yes!!!! let shane allow herself to feel what she wants and rightfully deserves. i wish she would quit beatin herself up and allow carmen’s love to wash over and let her start anew. please post soon. PEACE.

    6. oh yeah, I could swear that there is coming so much more (at this point I have the same writing style, by the way). I´m really looking forward to read more of your storys!

    7. oh yeah, I could swear that there is coming so much more (at this point I have the same writing style, by the way). I´m really looking forward to read more of your storys!

    9. Wonderful as always. Love that Carmen is sincere about her affection for Shane. Shane need to trust herself. Cant wait for whats gonna happen with Shane and Carmen. Thanks

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