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    Truly, Madly, Deeply: Chapter 3

    Story written on November 10, 2005 by buildmeupbreakmedown.
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    Last Chance for Romance

    Shane slightly pushed her cheek towards the caressing warmth, never breaking eye-contact, drawing some strength from the loving touch. ‘Holy *****’

    “I just… I need to know where this is going. One day I think it’s one way and then it’s something completely different. I need to know if you feel the same way about me that I feel about you”. ‘There it is’. The ball was in Shane’s court now.

    Shane stared at her a while, it was the same stare she’d given her when she asked about the scar on her chest and it was scaring the living ***** out of her. Then, Shane leaned over and kissed her, a soul searching kiss, the kind of kiss you only have when someone is looking for something but just doesn’t know where to find it. So Carmen gave everything in that kiss, her mind, her energy, her heart, and prayed that it was enough.

    When they broke away she noticed Shane was panting slightly and she couldn’t help but feel proud she’d caused that.

    ‘I can’t’ Shane looked at Carmen one last time ‘I can’t do that to her, she deserves someone better then me’. She sat up at the edge of the bed and ran her hands through her hair, her heart thumping uncomfortably in her chest.

    ‘no. NO.’ “No. Don’t do this, not again, please.” the pleading in Carmen’s voice wrenched Shane’s insides into knots.

    “Please, just say something” Carmen was sitting up behind Shane, she reached out her hand and gently placed it, palm flat, on Shane’s back, her own heart going a mile a minute. “Say anything”.

    She let out a shuddery breath as she felt the warmth on her back, “Carmen, I don’t know if I can give you what you want. I don’t even know what I feel means”.

    “But you feel something”

    “Yes”

    “Can you at least describe what it is?”

    “There’s too much there, too much to explain”

    Carmen breathed out a sigh of semi-relief ‘Well at least I’m not alone in that department’.

    They stayed silent for a while, a deafening uncomfortable silence that would drive even the most stable person crazy after a few minutes. It made Carmen shudder slightly.

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    1. Great update as always! I love it when Carmen is pinning over Shane , not knowing what Shan feels. I love the angst between them. I love the drama. I loved this chapter so much, hoefully you will cont. to spice things up with some drama.:)

    3. Great update! Loved it! And, like 2BMe, I thought Shane was going to blow it too. Nice job. :D Very hot, very sweet when Shane got into bed with Carmen and cuddled, and the phone conversation was funny. I’m glad Carmen finally brought up the issue of where they were going with this, and that Shane finally told her she loved her too. I can’t wait to read more of this! Really, I check for updates every day. Am I hooked? Yeah, I’d say so. :p

    4. Damn! I thought she was going to blow it. Great build up to Shane admitting her feelings. Shane & Carmens inner mental battle nearly drove me to drink:D Great update.

    5. OMG!!!! yes!!!! let shane allow herself to feel what she wants and rightfully deserves. i wish she would quit beatin herself up and allow carmen’s love to wash over and let her start anew. please post soon. PEACE.

    6. oh yeah, I could swear that there is coming so much more (at this point I have the same writing style, by the way). I´m really looking forward to read more of your storys!

    7. oh yeah, I could swear that there is coming so much more (at this point I have the same writing style, by the way). I´m really looking forward to read more of your storys!

    9. Wonderful as always. Love that Carmen is sincere about her affection for Shane. Shane need to trust herself. Cant wait for whats gonna happen with Shane and Carmen. Thanks

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