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    Trying… (Sequal to “Flowers”)

    Story written on March 28, 2005 by Twitty10.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=52849
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    Bette’s still trying…is Tina?

    Bette cannot believe what she is seeing in front of her, she thinks to just turn around and walk out, but then decides to clear her throat and make her presence know. Tina sees her first and slowly pushing Helena away.

    Tina: Bette.

    Helena, who is still forcefully trying to indulge in Tina, hears Tina mention her name and jolts her head around to see Bette. She pulls away from Tina and begins to adjust her shirt in the process of doing that, Bette walks right up to Tina and plants the biggest kiss on her. Tina who is now blown away, kisses her back, Bette then breaks away in a smile.

    Bette: Hi.

    Tina now red-faced and smiling replies.

    Tina: Hi.

    Both Tina and Bette are now locked eyes. Helena sees this and tries to speak.

    Helena: Well, Ill see you tomorrow then darling, Goodbye.

    She places a soft kiss on Tina cheek, as Tinas eyes are still locked on Bettes.

    Tina: um..okay..bye.

    Bette still smiling and never breaking eye contact.

    Bette: Yes, bye, Helena.

    Helena leaves and slams the door behind her.

    The slamming of the door has now broken the contact. Tina now wipes her mouth and tries to compose herself.

    Tina: So.. umwhats up? What are you doing here?

    Bette: Well, I havent been able to reach you on the phone these past few days and you havent been at the apartment muchandI wanted to see you, so I knew you would be hereI didnt mean to interrupt anything-
    Tina: Its okay.

    Tina now smiles hoping she that Bette knows she is glad she interrupted.

    Tina: Im sorry Ive been a little out of the loop lately, its just things have been crazy around here.

    Bette: Im sure they have. So how are you, how are you feeling?

    Bette places her hand on her tummy.

    Tina: Im good, I feel great.

    Bette: Goodyou know, I was wondering, if you arent that busy tonight, maybe we couldI dont go out to dinner or somethingI was thinking-

    Tina: Bette, honestly I cant go out tonight. I still have to unpack; the apartment is a mess and I really-

    Bette: okay then, why dont I help you unpack, Yea, I can come over later bring some food and we can justyou know.. talk.

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    1. This is just wonderful… It would have been awesome if IC followed your lead Twitty10. Tina is still sticking to her guns and going slow trying to maintain her autonomy while working on a relationship with Bette. And Bette is being patience as Tina mulls her way through her pain. Love is so all about compromising. Again WONDERFUL

    2. YES!! YOU’RE BACK!
      so so awesome, I love that Bette broke down like that, that’s just what she needs to do in front of Tina, just get down to the snotty-crying, I’m following this story like crazy and I’ts only the second chapter! please keep going!

    4. I’m with Revolution over there. The Snotty crying wouldn’t be pleasant for anyone but it would show Tina how Bette feels. This is wonderful please continue!

    12. OK Something is really wrong when I spend my time reading these and stopped watching the show. :) Somebody let me know when they get back together so I can start watching. LOL..

    13. I just can’t stand Helena. I am hlad that Bette didn’t just loose it when she walked in on T kissing Helena at her office, but she just kissed her. That was great & took a lot of courage. I love the humor & the serious side to your writing. Awesome job-love to read more….

    14. OMG.. finally a story that gives us a reason to be joyful. I am so weary of the hurtful words and cold indifference between B&T. I so wish we could see Tina in Bette’s arns again. Good job!

    16. Love your story, I was just thinking, Why does everyone hate Helena so much? Tina is the one who is letting her in to her life, Bette is the one who is letting her win Tina over, If they really loved each other, they would fight for it, But it is just TV right? You go girl your story way out does Ilenes. Thanks

    18. ding ding ding! we have a winner!
      This story has such a good flow and the dialogue is great….So many of you fanfic writers are so much better than TLW writers as far as the direction of the story…I see how many of them are reading your story!

    21. What a great follow up to “flowers”. I love the way you write. I felt I was actually in the apartment witnessing this loving exchange between T & B. Please write more.

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