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    Trying… (Sequal to “Flowers”)

    Story written on March 28, 2005 by Twitty10.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=52849
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    Bette’s still trying…is Tina?

    Bette: Yes, something did break.my heart Tina, it breaks my heart every time when I look at your hands and I dont see this ring on your finger.

    Tina doesnt respond, she quickly returns to the kitchen counter and continues eating her noodles, she then looks everywhere around the room except for where Bette is, Tina decides to change the subject all together, she cant bare to discuss this right now, they were having fun, they were being playful, she cant do serious right now..

    Tina: So I was thinking that maybe I would put that lamp in that corner, or maybe over by the window, but I dont know a lot of light comes through her in the morning, maybe Ill just put it”

    Bette: Tee, come on-

    Tina knows she cant avoid not having this conversation..

    Tina: Bette, you know why I took that ring off, I cant wear something that is broken, that ring was about trust and commitment, and you broke that, apparently you feel that you didnt because you still wear yours, but I cant, I cant just put it on, it doesnt mean the same thing anymore.

    Bette: Nothing means the same thing anymore does it?

    Tina: What do you mean?

    Bette: Tee, you told me the last time we talkedthat you wanted to give us a try. I dont see you trying all Im seeing is you spending all your time with Helena, I know youre out with her when youre not here at night I know that she is always with you at the center I know youre still sleeping with her and thats totally up to you, you have that right but while youre doing that, I cant help but think that Im slowly loosing you. I havent had time to build trust with us again. because I havent seen you since that night I havent been able to show you that Im still Bette this Bette the woman that you feel in love with seven years ago.. All I think is how Helena is going to start becoming more of your future while I,,,..I become nothing but the past.

    Bette is now crying out loud, not caring that she looks weak, shes upset, and has no other way to express it anymore, tears stream down her face.

    Tina: Dont say that.

    Bette: Why its the truth. This is the reality of whats happening, I would love to pretend that I can just come over here and try to act like its not happening but it is, Tee, it is. Im noting gaining any ground here, we can banter and play all we want, but Its not helping.

    Tina: Bette, Im not with Helena, I dont want to be with Helena, Its just she was something I needed at the time, I needed to be with someone else, I needed to feel something else, I dont know what I was looking for but I can tell you I didnt find anything I wanted. Im telling her tomorrow.

    Bette: Youre telling her what?

    Bettes tears have now slowed down, Tina now goes to hold her.

    Tina: That whatever was going on with us is over.

    Bette: Really?

    Bette hold tighter onto Tina.

    Tina: Yea, Really. I want to work on us, Bette. I believe in us.

    Bette now softly kisses Tina on the lips.

    Bette: Me too, god I believe in us too, Baby, always.

    Tina now kisses her hard on the lips.

    Tina: Thank you.

    Bette: Thank you? Is that what you just said, did you just thank me?

    Tina: Yea I did. Thank you for giving me time and space, and thank you for not going anywhere, thank you for letting me realize on my own, what I hope you have known all along

    Bette: Whats that?

    Tina: That you will always have something of mine that no one will ever have.

    Bette smiles as she touches her stomach and looks at Tina, but is confused, Tina is shaking her head no.

    Bette: What do you mean?

    Tina: No, not just the baby.my heart my heart will always belong to you.

    Tina again kisses Bette with all the passion inside of her.

    Bette: I hope you know the same goes for me, my heart has always been right there, because you, you are my heart.

    Bette places her hand on Tinas chest, the both continue to hold and kiss each other letting their hearts guide the moment.

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    Comments

    1. This is just wonderful… It would have been awesome if IC followed your lead Twitty10. Tina is still sticking to her guns and going slow trying to maintain her autonomy while working on a relationship with Bette. And Bette is being patience as Tina mulls her way through her pain. Love is so all about compromising. Again WONDERFUL

    2. YES!! YOU’RE BACK!
      so so awesome, I love that Bette broke down like that, that’s just what she needs to do in front of Tina, just get down to the snotty-crying, I’m following this story like crazy and I’ts only the second chapter! please keep going!

    4. I’m with Revolution over there. The Snotty crying wouldn’t be pleasant for anyone but it would show Tina how Bette feels. This is wonderful please continue!

    12. OK Something is really wrong when I spend my time reading these and stopped watching the show. :) Somebody let me know when they get back together so I can start watching. LOL..

    13. I just can’t stand Helena. I am hlad that Bette didn’t just loose it when she walked in on T kissing Helena at her office, but she just kissed her. That was great & took a lot of courage. I love the humor & the serious side to your writing. Awesome job-love to read more….

    14. OMG.. finally a story that gives us a reason to be joyful. I am so weary of the hurtful words and cold indifference between B&T. I so wish we could see Tina in Bette’s arns again. Good job!

    16. Love your story, I was just thinking, Why does everyone hate Helena so much? Tina is the one who is letting her in to her life, Bette is the one who is letting her win Tina over, If they really loved each other, they would fight for it, But it is just TV right? You go girl your story way out does Ilenes. Thanks

    18. ding ding ding! we have a winner!
      This story has such a good flow and the dialogue is great….So many of you fanfic writers are so much better than TLW writers as far as the direction of the story…I see how many of them are reading your story!

    21. What a great follow up to “flowers”. I love the way you write. I felt I was actually in the apartment witnessing this loving exchange between T & B. Please write more.

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