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Trying… (Sequal to “Flowers”)
Tina ponders on this for a moment. She needs to unpack, she cant stand all those damn boxes laying around. But she does want to spend time with Bette, god does she want to spend time with her, as fun as Helena is, theres just something missing, shes just not well.not Bette.
Tina: You know what? I think thats a great idea.
Bette smiles
Bette: Good. Me too.
TINA APARTMENT.
Tina is wearing a blue matertinty tank top and black sweatpants, while Bette is wearing her gray sweatpants and white tank top, both are very casually dressing for the night event of unpacking. Chinese food is on the counter top. Bette is ripping open a box as Tina is trying to hang up a clock on the kitchen wall.
Bette: So what is it exactly that you have been doing all week?
or should I say who was what Bette was really thinking.
Tina: You know, work and stuff. How about you?
Bette: Well the CAC is a mess, we are having the hardest time getting any sort of financial support-
Bette now stops knowing that this stuff isnt important.
Bette: you know ***** like that, but mostly I spent my time trying to see you, trying to get a hold of you and when that failed I just I went over to Shane and Jennys-
Tina: I cant believe they are roommates, hows that going?
Bette: Amazingly well, those two are quite the pair.
Tina: Id say, never in a million years would I think they would get along, but you know, people always seem to surprise me.
Bette now notices Tina struggling with hanging the clock.
Bette: Tina you shouldnt be up on the stool, here let me do it.
Bette goes over to her, Her hands graze over Tinas exposed skin and down the side of her arms and then her upper body and slightly touches her ***** as she pulls her off the stool. Tina feels shivers up and down her spine.
Tina: I can do it you know.
Bette: Im sure you can, but if Im here I might as well be useful.
Bette successfully hangs the clock and steps down from the stool and turns to Tina.
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(50 votes, average: 3.88 out of 5)
This is just wonderful… It would have been awesome if IC followed your lead Twitty10. Tina is still sticking to her guns and going slow trying to maintain her autonomy while working on a relationship with Bette. And Bette is being patience as Tina mulls her way through her pain. Love is so all about compromising. Again WONDERFUL
YES!! YOU’RE BACK!
so so awesome, I love that Bette broke down like that, that’s just what she needs to do in front of Tina, just get down to the snotty-crying, I’m following this story like crazy and I’ts only the second chapter! please keep going!
BRILLIANT…….THIS IS BRILLIANT…..THANX…
I’m with Revolution over there. The Snotty crying wouldn’t be pleasant for anyone but it would show Tina how Bette feels. This is wonderful please continue!
I agree with Focus, just wonderful…
Wonderful…
Beautiful…just beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
Wonderful, you’re a great writer, dont even worry about this being your first fic…
How wonderful….I love it..Bravo!!!
Great Job!!
Loved it. Begging for more!
Can’t get enough! Beautifully written… please continue!
OK Something is really wrong when I spend my time reading these and stopped watching the show. :) Somebody let me know when they get back together so I can start watching. LOL..
I just can’t stand Helena. I am hlad that Bette didn’t just loose it when she walked in on T kissing Helena at her office, but she just kissed her. That was great & took a lot of courage. I love the humor & the serious side to your writing. Awesome job-love to read more….
OMG.. finally a story that gives us a reason to be joyful. I am so weary of the hurtful words and cold indifference between B&T. I so wish we could see Tina in Bette’s arns again. Good job!
great just great..no more pain for those two..please post soon i can wait for more
Love your story, I was just thinking, Why does everyone hate Helena so much? Tina is the one who is letting her in to her life, Bette is the one who is letting her win Tina over, If they really loved each other, they would fight for it, But it is just TV right? You go girl your story way out does Ilenes. Thanks
really love that they are moving forward at last really love this story i feel like im in the room with them…… kinda fly on the wall…
ding ding ding! we have a winner!
This story has such a good flow and the dialogue is great….So many of you fanfic writers are so much better than TLW writers as far as the direction of the story…I see how many of them are reading your story!
Perfectly beautiful.
Wow beautiful chapter. Now it’s time to kick Helena’s ass out and let Bette and Tina in back together. Please post soon, thank you!
What a great follow up to “flowers”. I love the way you write. I felt I was actually in the apartment witnessing this loving exchange between T & B. Please write more.
simply beautiful
Yes they are getting back together you gotta love it