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    Trying… (Sequal to “Flowers”)

    Story written on March 28, 2005 by Twitty10.
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    Number of Comments: 23
    Words: 2375
    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=52849
    Author Notes:

    Bette’s still trying…is Tina?

    Bette: There.

    Tina: Thank you.

    Bette: Dont mention it.

    Bette turns away to head to the boxes. Tina sees that a piece of tape from the boxes is stuck on Bettes *****. Tina laughs herself and follows Bette, as Bette bends down to grab something out of the box, Tina rips the tape off of her. Bette quickly turns around.

    Bette: Excuse me?

    Bette smiles as they both share a laugh.

    Tina: Sorry, but this was on your *****.

    Tina waves the piece of tape to show proof.

    Bette gets up and moves close to Tina.

    Bette: You know Tee, its okay..as long as you can just admit you wanted to touch my *****.

    Tina: You had a piece of tape there thats all I was doing was getting it off. I was being nice.

    Bette: You could have just told me, but nooo,, you choose to rip it off, come on Tee, I know you better than that, just admit you wanted to grab my *****. Its okay, Im happy you did, but dont blame it on the tape

    Tina and Bette are all smiles, loving this banter that they so desperately missed.

    Tina: Fine. If it makes you happy I wanted to.

    Bette: You wanted to what?

    Tina now all red.

    Tina: I wanted tograb your *****.

    Bette: See? That wasnt that hard.

    Bette then moves her hand to grab Tinas *****.

    Tina: Hey!

    Bette throws her a ***** wink.

    They both continue laughing their asses off. Bette then turns back to the boxes, as Tina goes to grab some more food.

    Bette rummages through the box to find a jewelry box, she looks at Tina who is stuffing her face with noodles, and then opens the box to find the ring, yes the ring, the ring Tina took off. Bette face then falls from laughter to pain. Tina picks her head up from eating and notices Bette change in mood.

    Tina: Whats the matter?.. What happened?

    Tina moves closer to Bette and the box.

    Tina: .did something break, I swear those movers dont know what the word fragile—

    Before Tina can say another word she sees what it is that Bette is looking at. Tina then puts her head down and grazes her hand over her finger where the ring use to be.

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    1. This is just wonderful… It would have been awesome if IC followed your lead Twitty10. Tina is still sticking to her guns and going slow trying to maintain her autonomy while working on a relationship with Bette. And Bette is being patience as Tina mulls her way through her pain. Love is so all about compromising. Again WONDERFUL

    2. YES!! YOU’RE BACK!
      so so awesome, I love that Bette broke down like that, that’s just what she needs to do in front of Tina, just get down to the snotty-crying, I’m following this story like crazy and I’ts only the second chapter! please keep going!

    4. I’m with Revolution over there. The Snotty crying wouldn’t be pleasant for anyone but it would show Tina how Bette feels. This is wonderful please continue!

    12. OK Something is really wrong when I spend my time reading these and stopped watching the show. :) Somebody let me know when they get back together so I can start watching. LOL..

    13. I just can’t stand Helena. I am hlad that Bette didn’t just loose it when she walked in on T kissing Helena at her office, but she just kissed her. That was great & took a lot of courage. I love the humor & the serious side to your writing. Awesome job-love to read more….

    14. OMG.. finally a story that gives us a reason to be joyful. I am so weary of the hurtful words and cold indifference between B&T. I so wish we could see Tina in Bette’s arns again. Good job!

    16. Love your story, I was just thinking, Why does everyone hate Helena so much? Tina is the one who is letting her in to her life, Bette is the one who is letting her win Tina over, If they really loved each other, they would fight for it, But it is just TV right? You go girl your story way out does Ilenes. Thanks

    18. ding ding ding! we have a winner!
      This story has such a good flow and the dialogue is great….So many of you fanfic writers are so much better than TLW writers as far as the direction of the story…I see how many of them are reading your story!

    21. What a great follow up to “flowers”. I love the way you write. I felt I was actually in the apartment witnessing this loving exchange between T & B. Please write more.

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