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Only to quote Glenn Close in a less frightening manner, Dana wasn’t
about to let herself be ignored. She pushed and pushed and pushed the
situation until Alice found herself in the athlete’s arms moaning sweet
and low, swimming in the touch and scent of Dana and hating herself for
doing this to Helena. Because though many wouldn’t ever think it, they
were alike, she and Helena. They had been carelessly used and tossed
aside by so many people in their lives it seemed to be the status quo
of their existence.
Helena was good to her.
So
impossibly good to her that it pained Alice, the very idea of leaving
her to return to Dana. Even though memories of her time with the
athlete continued to haunt Alice. But as soon as those memories
surfaced she would think of everything Helena had done for her over the
eight months they had become close and the seven months during that in
which they dated.
She
thought about their first date, how Helena had taken to her this
adorable nook and cranny Italian restaurant where the entire staff
barely spoke English. And how the chef, a little old man with smiling
eyes, had kissed Helena’s cheeks and cupped her face while looking at
her as if she was his long lost daughter. How he had clasped Alice’s
hands solemnly and given her some heartfelt advice that she couldn’t
understand one word of but wished she did from the way Helena’s face
was turning a darker shade of red with every word spoken.
When
the relationship with Dana ended Alice had been an unmitigated mess.
She was drowning in regrets and self loathing and pain and anger and
for a long while it seemed it might swallow her whole. Consume who she
was as a person because it just hurt so very badly. Then Helena Peabody
came into her life and she didn’t judge Alice for her almost crazed
behavior at the time. Instead she listened to her and she held her and
she became the only source of comfort Alice knew because her friends
just didn’t know how to help her.
Alice
wasn’t the person they had grown to know and love. She was someone that
frightened and confused them and they had no idea how to help this
stranger that was possessing their friend’s body. It was different for
Helena though, she hadn’t known Alice before. Not really. They were
only passing acquaintances and she didn’t judge Alice for her behavior
or fixate on how she should be acting.
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wow…that was the craziest thing i have ever read…DAMN
Meant to add when I commented earlier that I like your definition of ‘sane’ in the author’s note: not planning a road trip to Canada = sane. I’m sane (well, for now at least)!
oh my! you are amazing – i’m still in denial about the spoilers – but if ic could get you on the writing team, i might be able to handle it! wow!
It’s Helena’s turn for happiness and understanding. Besides, she’s sooooo sexy
This is excellent Dreiser! I salute you!
I’ve never really liked Helena, but you gave her an actual personality and also made me completely fall for her. The choice Alice has to make seems to be impossible at this time.
Loved it, loved it, loved it.
DUDE. You totally know how much I love this story, because I told you as much, like, 50 million times while I tried to find out this story’s ETA.
Damn. Angst and sex, you know that’s my favourite fan fic combo. I think you nailed it, really. The love Alice and Dana have for one another, how similar Helena and Alice really are and how the bond would emerge from that. It’s all so fucking good.
If I weren’t already on board with Helacious, this would totally sway me over.
That brings a new meaning to angst! I love your rules of attraction fic but never post so thought id do so here. Loving the drama in that at the moment too but it has got me guiltily craving the fluff! I think after the fight in that they deserve some make-up worthy of chapter sixs extravaganza? Just a thought!
OK so you’ve left us with a cliffhanger in Laws this week, but all is forgiven. This was amazing. You made me love Helacious, or at least really feel for Helena. Funny, sad and hot.
this is great and I love it just like your another story is there anymore to this one though as to when and where alice makes her decision about the two women in her life if there is more please post soon
Tumbling down in deed…Wow, great one shot story. I admit that the way you wrote Helena made me almost want Alice to chose Helena. With that said, the danish shipper in me just wouldn’t allow that thought to linger for to long–though if all goes to hell in season 3 and the writers were able to write helena as human and as affectionate as you have, then i could be splitting some time between two ships…and because i am a perv loved the sex scene. helena, alice, dana, oh my…good stuff. And one last comment: FINALLY Alice is the one being fought over. Loved it.
someone finally wrote a threesome that was not trite and boring! good for you dreiser. Wow. But does my heart ache for Alice, Dana, and Helena. I wish one of them would declare, whomever you pick Alice, I still love you and you are guarenteed my friendship for life. At least if I were with her thats what I would say… because even if she didn’t have sex with me ever again it would be enough to be in her presense as her friend her colleague and her confidant. Colla cavod (congratulations in hebrew), Dreiser you make LOVEALICE think and write very lengthy comments with no particular point. Great story.
Peace and Love,
LOVEALICE
everything you write always turns out sooooooooo entertaining, gr8 story BUT will u still continue with a part 19 in L.O.A?? it’s killing me 2 see whats going 2 happen…??
Damn girl you are so good that almost I want helacious more than danish; I said “almost” :P. If IC can give us this Helena it’s gonna be very interesting her interaction with Alice :D
I can only come up with three words. Pure Romantic Torture.
Wicked! Give yourself an affectionate slap on the ass for this.
I absolutely love this fic. I have been searching for some good fic with the Dana/Alice/Helena triangle, and I found some amazing work here! It’s very easy to relate to all members of the trio, both Dana and Helena for being so devoted to Alice, and Alice for loving them in return but not knowing how to choose one over the other. Keep up the outstanding work and please post more fanfic asap!