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Because
Alice had never in her life loved or felt as loved as she did when with
Dana Fairbanks and Helena Peabody. If she couldn’t be with either of
them then she couldn’t be with anyone.
As
much as she loved them Alice could admit their faults. The fault of
Dana and her impatience then Helena and her withdrawn nature is what
led to her current predicament.
Choosing
wasn’t exactly an easy task and Alice hated to even attempt the process
of doing so because to her it seemed to make the feelings she had for
both women cheaper somehow. As if one love was of greater importance
than the other and that wasn’t true. If anything, it was the precise
opposite which is why Alice was tormented by the concept.
Though
this didn’t go unnoticed by Dana, she couldn’t take the situation after
three months of being with Alice while she kept dating Helena. Every
time Alice did something that made her fall a little bit more, whether
it be the carefree sound of her laugh, the silly dances she did, the
dark shine of want in her eyes during *****, the love the athlete felt
would be followed by the crippling fear that one day she would lose
this. Dana was falling for Alice harder than before and she knew the
longer the situation with Helena continued the worse off she would be
if the blonde chose the British woman over herself.
That’s
why Dana demanded Alice finally make her choice. Dana or Helena. Helena
or Dana. She would have to choose which woman she wanted to spend her
life with, which one was truly meant for her.
When
Alice told Helena of Dana’s demands the reaction she received further
confused and worried her. Namely the fact that there wasn’t any
reaction to speak of. There was what she thought could have been a tiny
yet resigned flicker of hurt appearing in smoky blue eyes but as soon
as she thought she saw it, the look was gone. In its place, the
standoffish veneer Helena liked to present to the world came slamming
down in front of Alice. Watching that happen was enough to make Alice
want to pick Helena without a second thought just to ensure she never
saw that happen again.
But she couldn’t.
That
wouldn’t be fair to any of them, herself, Dana, or Helena. She had to
know her own heart and mind to make sure whatever she decided was the
right choice in order to spare all of them anymore pain. It was what
she knew but it didn’t make her choice any easier to make.
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wow…that was the craziest thing i have ever read…DAMN
Meant to add when I commented earlier that I like your definition of ‘sane’ in the author’s note: not planning a road trip to Canada = sane. I’m sane (well, for now at least)!
oh my! you are amazing – i’m still in denial about the spoilers – but if ic could get you on the writing team, i might be able to handle it! wow!
It’s Helena’s turn for happiness and understanding. Besides, she’s sooooo sexy
This is excellent Dreiser! I salute you!
I’ve never really liked Helena, but you gave her an actual personality and also made me completely fall for her. The choice Alice has to make seems to be impossible at this time.
Loved it, loved it, loved it.
DUDE. You totally know how much I love this story, because I told you as much, like, 50 million times while I tried to find out this story’s ETA.
Damn. Angst and sex, you know that’s my favourite fan fic combo. I think you nailed it, really. The love Alice and Dana have for one another, how similar Helena and Alice really are and how the bond would emerge from that. It’s all so fucking good.
If I weren’t already on board with Helacious, this would totally sway me over.
That brings a new meaning to angst! I love your rules of attraction fic but never post so thought id do so here. Loving the drama in that at the moment too but it has got me guiltily craving the fluff! I think after the fight in that they deserve some make-up worthy of chapter sixs extravaganza? Just a thought!
OK so you’ve left us with a cliffhanger in Laws this week, but all is forgiven. This was amazing. You made me love Helacious, or at least really feel for Helena. Funny, sad and hot.
this is great and I love it just like your another story is there anymore to this one though as to when and where alice makes her decision about the two women in her life if there is more please post soon
Tumbling down in deed…Wow, great one shot story. I admit that the way you wrote Helena made me almost want Alice to chose Helena. With that said, the danish shipper in me just wouldn’t allow that thought to linger for to long–though if all goes to hell in season 3 and the writers were able to write helena as human and as affectionate as you have, then i could be splitting some time between two ships…and because i am a perv loved the sex scene. helena, alice, dana, oh my…good stuff. And one last comment: FINALLY Alice is the one being fought over. Loved it.
someone finally wrote a threesome that was not trite and boring! good for you dreiser. Wow. But does my heart ache for Alice, Dana, and Helena. I wish one of them would declare, whomever you pick Alice, I still love you and you are guarenteed my friendship for life. At least if I were with her thats what I would say… because even if she didn’t have sex with me ever again it would be enough to be in her presense as her friend her colleague and her confidant. Colla cavod (congratulations in hebrew), Dreiser you make LOVEALICE think and write very lengthy comments with no particular point. Great story.
Peace and Love,
LOVEALICE
everything you write always turns out sooooooooo entertaining, gr8 story BUT will u still continue with a part 19 in L.O.A?? it’s killing me 2 see whats going 2 happen…??
Damn girl you are so good that almost I want helacious more than danish; I said “almost” :P. If IC can give us this Helena it’s gonna be very interesting her interaction with Alice :D
I can only come up with three words. Pure Romantic Torture.
Wicked! Give yourself an affectionate slap on the ass for this.
I absolutely love this fic. I have been searching for some good fic with the Dana/Alice/Helena triangle, and I found some amazing work here! It’s very easy to relate to all members of the trio, both Dana and Helena for being so devoted to Alice, and Alice for loving them in return but not knowing how to choose one over the other. Keep up the outstanding work and please post more fanfic asap!