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She was simply there.
Helena
Peabody had picked Alice up from her great fall and with quiet and
loving care put the broken pieces of her heart back together again and
Alice loved her for that. She loved her desperately and not only for
that but for the fact that she knew Helena understood what it was like
to exist like that. Because she knew Helena had been hurt in that same
way. By people who looked at her and only saw the Peabody name and the
wealth and privilege that came with it.
They
only saw what Helena could do for them and never Helena herself. When
they began dating Alice swore to herself that wouldn’t be like those
others. That she wouldn’t hurt Helena as they had, that she would love
and care for her with the same gentle attentiveness and earnest
affection the heiress had shown her.
But then there was Dana.
Her
oldest and very best friend, the woman who knew nearly everything that
happened in her life, whether it be good, bad, or embarrassing and had
still wanted to be with her. Dana with her sincere gaze and bumbling
kindness who couldn’t ever conceive of being spiteful or vindictive to
someone no matter how cruel they were to her. Dana who wanted her back
despite the utterly and painfully insane way Alice had acted during
their initial break up. Dana who forgave her for that behavior with a
gentle smile and a tender whisper. Saying that she knew Alice and the
person who had done those things wasn’t her before she ducked her head
and said in broken tones that she had caused it. Dana who blamed
herself for the nights of Alice calling her only to hang up when she
answered, appearing when she was on dates with Lara, and having angry
words thrown at her at an almost daily basis.
Alice had done all of that and more and yet, Dana wanted her back…
Dana
not only wanted her back but Dana loved her. She loved Alice and told
her that she wanted to be with her more than anything. And Alice, even
before her terrible actions towards the athlete, was never someone who
had been good at denying Dana of her wants.
Dana or Helena.
Helena or Dana.
These
were her choices and Alice had been trying her best during the three
months while dating them both to figure out who she was meant for.
Because the idea of losing one of these women in her life was so
devastatingly painful but nowhere as painful as the idea of losing one
after making the wrong decision. Whoever she chose, Alice knew there
would be no going back. If it was Helena then Dana wouldn’t be
appearing on her doorstep one late night or early morning with
whispered words of love and fiercely intense kisses that nearly stopped
her heart. And if it was Dana then Helena would no longer be dropping
in on her at work with twinkling eyes and a mischievous smile before
taking her out on an impromptu and impossibly romantic date. Whoever
she chose would be the final word on the outcome of her romantic life.
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wow…that was the craziest thing i have ever read…DAMN
Meant to add when I commented earlier that I like your definition of ‘sane’ in the author’s note: not planning a road trip to Canada = sane. I’m sane (well, for now at least)!
oh my! you are amazing – i’m still in denial about the spoilers – but if ic could get you on the writing team, i might be able to handle it! wow!
It’s Helena’s turn for happiness and understanding. Besides, she’s sooooo sexy
This is excellent Dreiser! I salute you!
I’ve never really liked Helena, but you gave her an actual personality and also made me completely fall for her. The choice Alice has to make seems to be impossible at this time.
Loved it, loved it, loved it.
DUDE. You totally know how much I love this story, because I told you as much, like, 50 million times while I tried to find out this story’s ETA.
Damn. Angst and sex, you know that’s my favourite fan fic combo. I think you nailed it, really. The love Alice and Dana have for one another, how similar Helena and Alice really are and how the bond would emerge from that. It’s all so fucking good.
If I weren’t already on board with Helacious, this would totally sway me over.
That brings a new meaning to angst! I love your rules of attraction fic but never post so thought id do so here. Loving the drama in that at the moment too but it has got me guiltily craving the fluff! I think after the fight in that they deserve some make-up worthy of chapter sixs extravaganza? Just a thought!
OK so you’ve left us with a cliffhanger in Laws this week, but all is forgiven. This was amazing. You made me love Helacious, or at least really feel for Helena. Funny, sad and hot.
this is great and I love it just like your another story is there anymore to this one though as to when and where alice makes her decision about the two women in her life if there is more please post soon
Tumbling down in deed…Wow, great one shot story. I admit that the way you wrote Helena made me almost want Alice to chose Helena. With that said, the danish shipper in me just wouldn’t allow that thought to linger for to long–though if all goes to hell in season 3 and the writers were able to write helena as human and as affectionate as you have, then i could be splitting some time between two ships…and because i am a perv loved the sex scene. helena, alice, dana, oh my…good stuff. And one last comment: FINALLY Alice is the one being fought over. Loved it.
someone finally wrote a threesome that was not trite and boring! good for you dreiser. Wow. But does my heart ache for Alice, Dana, and Helena. I wish one of them would declare, whomever you pick Alice, I still love you and you are guarenteed my friendship for life. At least if I were with her thats what I would say… because even if she didn’t have sex with me ever again it would be enough to be in her presense as her friend her colleague and her confidant. Colla cavod (congratulations in hebrew), Dreiser you make LOVEALICE think and write very lengthy comments with no particular point. Great story.
Peace and Love,
LOVEALICE
everything you write always turns out sooooooooo entertaining, gr8 story BUT will u still continue with a part 19 in L.O.A?? it’s killing me 2 see whats going 2 happen…??
Damn girl you are so good that almost I want helacious more than danish; I said “almost” :P. If IC can give us this Helena it’s gonna be very interesting her interaction with Alice :D
I can only come up with three words. Pure Romantic Torture.
Wicked! Give yourself an affectionate slap on the ass for this.
I absolutely love this fic. I have been searching for some good fic with the Dana/Alice/Helena triangle, and I found some amazing work here! It’s very easy to relate to all members of the trio, both Dana and Helena for being so devoted to Alice, and Alice for loving them in return but not knowing how to choose one over the other. Keep up the outstanding work and please post more fanfic asap!