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Kissing Dana the way the athlete had longed for.
In a way that told her clearly Alice loved her. Her mouth fierce and
demanding, tongue hot as it pushed past her lips, groaning and
muttering nonsensical words into Dana. Only to pull away with a
mischievous smile and tug of a bottom lip.
The moment the kiss with Dana ended another with Helena began. Gently
cupping Alice’s face in her hands, kissing her slowly and sweetly with
such tender devotion Alice whimpered at the feel of it all. Helena was
always like this with her though. So very kind and loving, treating her
like she was the most precious thing in the entire world to her. Then
again, that’s how Alice felt when she was with Helena. Special, just so
unbelievably special and wanted… god… Helena made her feel wanted
like no one ever had before. Enough that Alice knew the only way it
would cease, that Helena would stop wanting her, was if she had deemed
it so.
Only when she told Helena not to have these feelings would be the
moment that they stopped… but even then, not really. They would just
be hidden from Alice’s sight so she could ignore them and go back to
her happy life sans the heiress.
The problem was, she no longer could see her life without Helena
Peabody in it. Much like she couldn’t see her life without Dana
Fairbanks who was reaching for her now.
Pulling her up from the couch and Helena’s lap in that frantic but
surprisingly gentle manner she had to lift Alice up into her embrace.
Kissing her fierce and passionate, tongue invading her mouth in a
heated exploration while callused hands traveled the length of her body
in a frenzied touch. Seeming desperate to feel as much of Alice while
she could, as if afraid that very soon she would no longer have this
chance available to her.
She was right to think this because the moment they parted for air,
Helena was there, hand soft on Alice’s cheek, cupping her face and
drawing her forward in a soul searing kiss while her free hand fell to
the blonde’s waist. Teasing her bottom lip in a slow and seductive suck
while pushing her tongue coyly in then out, smiling into Alice’s tiny
and pleading whimper before finally thrusting deep inside, sucking on
her tongue long and hard, delighting in the moans of pleasure coming
from the woman in her arms.
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wow…that was the craziest thing i have ever read…DAMN
Meant to add when I commented earlier that I like your definition of ‘sane’ in the author’s note: not planning a road trip to Canada = sane. I’m sane (well, for now at least)!
oh my! you are amazing – i’m still in denial about the spoilers – but if ic could get you on the writing team, i might be able to handle it! wow!
It’s Helena’s turn for happiness and understanding. Besides, she’s sooooo sexy
This is excellent Dreiser! I salute you!
I’ve never really liked Helena, but you gave her an actual personality and also made me completely fall for her. The choice Alice has to make seems to be impossible at this time.
Loved it, loved it, loved it.
DUDE. You totally know how much I love this story, because I told you as much, like, 50 million times while I tried to find out this story’s ETA.
Damn. Angst and sex, you know that’s my favourite fan fic combo. I think you nailed it, really. The love Alice and Dana have for one another, how similar Helena and Alice really are and how the bond would emerge from that. It’s all so fucking good.
If I weren’t already on board with Helacious, this would totally sway me over.
That brings a new meaning to angst! I love your rules of attraction fic but never post so thought id do so here. Loving the drama in that at the moment too but it has got me guiltily craving the fluff! I think after the fight in that they deserve some make-up worthy of chapter sixs extravaganza? Just a thought!
OK so you’ve left us with a cliffhanger in Laws this week, but all is forgiven. This was amazing. You made me love Helacious, or at least really feel for Helena. Funny, sad and hot.
this is great and I love it just like your another story is there anymore to this one though as to when and where alice makes her decision about the two women in her life if there is more please post soon
Tumbling down in deed…Wow, great one shot story. I admit that the way you wrote Helena made me almost want Alice to chose Helena. With that said, the danish shipper in me just wouldn’t allow that thought to linger for to long–though if all goes to hell in season 3 and the writers were able to write helena as human and as affectionate as you have, then i could be splitting some time between two ships…and because i am a perv loved the sex scene. helena, alice, dana, oh my…good stuff. And one last comment: FINALLY Alice is the one being fought over. Loved it.
someone finally wrote a threesome that was not trite and boring! good for you dreiser. Wow. But does my heart ache for Alice, Dana, and Helena. I wish one of them would declare, whomever you pick Alice, I still love you and you are guarenteed my friendship for life. At least if I were with her thats what I would say… because even if she didn’t have sex with me ever again it would be enough to be in her presense as her friend her colleague and her confidant. Colla cavod (congratulations in hebrew), Dreiser you make LOVEALICE think and write very lengthy comments with no particular point. Great story.
Peace and Love,
LOVEALICE
everything you write always turns out sooooooooo entertaining, gr8 story BUT will u still continue with a part 19 in L.O.A?? it’s killing me 2 see whats going 2 happen…??
Damn girl you are so good that almost I want helacious more than danish; I said “almost” :P. If IC can give us this Helena it’s gonna be very interesting her interaction with Alice :D
I can only come up with three words. Pure Romantic Torture.
Wicked! Give yourself an affectionate slap on the ass for this.
I absolutely love this fic. I have been searching for some good fic with the Dana/Alice/Helena triangle, and I found some amazing work here! It’s very easy to relate to all members of the trio, both Dana and Helena for being so devoted to Alice, and Alice for loving them in return but not knowing how to choose one over the other. Keep up the outstanding work and please post more fanfic asap!