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Turn About Is Fair Play – CH84
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No, thank you, Tina volleyed back. And by the way, did Sparta and Russell tell you Ill be taking Thursday and Friday off?
Yes, go away and enjoy yourself; youve earned it, he smiled and left.
A little while later, Sparta walked in holding a huge vase with calla lilies and assorted flowers.
Delivery for Ms. Kennard, Sparta drooled. Someone must have done something really good to get these, she teased.
Tina turned beet red when she saw the flowers. Oh my! Are you sure theyre for me?
Duh! Yeah, theyre for you. Youre Tina Kennard who works at CM&E right? Tina laughed at her own reluctance. Look, while youre trying to make sense of the obvious, Im gonna sit these down; the vase is heavy.
Sparta handed Tina the card. Tina, thanks for a lovely dinner, great company, and most of all just for being you. – N. Tina gushed at the lovely sentiment, picked out one of the flowers, and handed it to Sparta. This ones for you. Uh, uh, Tina stopped Sparta from protesting. Just take it and have a great day. Ill be leaving in about forty-five minutes for an appointment and wont be back until tomorrow.
Okay, but will you need help getting them to the car?
Tina hadnt considered that and felt conflicted about what she should do with them. Um, Im gonna leave them here for now. Maybe Ill swing back later with a friend and she can hold them for me.
Okay. See you.
Tina left and reluctantly drove to Dr. Giancarlos. She went to the second floor and knocked lightly hoping not to be heard so she could walk away.
Come in, an accented voice called out. Tina walked in and saw a very handsome man sitting behind the receptionists desk. Tina Kennard? He inquired and stood up to shake her hand.
Yes. Was all Tina could say as she stared hopelessly at him.
Good afternoon, Im Marcelo (Mar-Chello), the administrator here and I need you to complete these and when youre done, Dr. Giancarlo will see you.
Tina hung on every word Marcelo said; his accented voice wreaked havoc on her ears. How ***** is that? she thought. Tina completed the papers and handed them back to Marcelo and smiled shyly as she tried not to stare. Marcelo stood at least six feet tall, had hazel eyes with a hint of yellow in them, was built like a Greek god, and his Italian accent could make any woman weak at the kneesTina was no exception. It had been many years since Tina reacted to a man and gave her a bizarre feeling. Think Nya. Think Nya, she told herself as she watched Marcelo review her papers before letting the doctor know she was ready.
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I’ve been remiss in not commenting. But I’ve been reading, does that count *grovels* Just great. Sam Cooke, oh yeah; for me right now it’s Lena Horne and Billie Holiday
Life seems more complicated for Bette than for Tina or non ? In fact, I don’t know what could happen now about them but anyway I love this story.
i was glad to see your post. it was still a great chapter even though not much big happened. so are we going to have a confrontation soon? hurry with the next chapter please.
Great chapter BluJ. Keep’em coming.
Woohoo!
*Dances around the room being the first to post*
Sad how much pleasure being first can bring.
Suchs babe, am blushing now.
I just write it as I feel it. This story always has me coming back for more. That is purely due to your talent and honesty with this story. You make it real; good and bad, in equal measure and that is life.
As for the developments in this chapter, I am intrigued by Bette’s behaviour as it appears that Rayne’s and Kit’s words have finally sunk in and Bette is begining to realise what she had and what she threw away.
Tina is just starting to get her life together and hopefully, even though Nya is good for her, will recognise where her heart truly belong and to whom.
See I am a big softie hoping for Bette and Tina to reunite.
Awaiting your next chapter with much anticipation.
A loyal Fan.
Blu… now here’s the thang~~~ the way I look at it Tina it appears is holding back. This woman has not really face the inner deep-rooted demon in her. I like this line here “scratched the surface†To me this tells a lot but reveals nothing LOL. I just love it when the writer make me go. Hmm I wonder what that means…. Sure it bugs the hell outta me but ah~~ there lies the beauty of it um hmm it keeps me interested. This Tina is desperately trying to be strong but there is something in the way you write this that makes me think that Tina is still very much raw and brittle somewhat that’s why I love that word you use there “surface†and when I went back to read the previous chapter for the second time I find some similarity. Similar in that Bette and Tina are both lost. Of course Bette appear to be the one more lost well at least that’s how I see it at this point of the story. Anyway I’m sticking around, I like the story too much to allow my tibette heart influence me from turning my back away and not come back to enjoy this intriguing plot that you’ve weave. A good read is a good read period!
Thank you for this up-date! I wanna see what tricks you have in store further ;o)
BluJewel, your last post was way way back on the 05/05/05 are you finished with this amazing story? I hope you come back to finish it. Too many of the fantastic writers who previously posted their stories on this site have just disappeard into thin air, we need you all back.
Yeah BluJewel it is now over a year old…surely this story isn’t finished…there are too many questions…please post soon.