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The brunette turned around and saw Shane standing next to the other suspect. “Your Russian is getting better” Bette told her partner.
“Why must you always sound so surprised?” Shane replied feigning annoyance as they both left in search of other potential suspects, assuming they had left anyone else alive other than these two.
“Team leaders talk to me… what are your positions and how many attackers have you taken?” Bette spoke to the air again and soon enough all the answers she was looking for were provided. “Roger that team leaders, keep on clearing the field and search for survivors”
After half an hour of intense search both Bette and Shane decided there was probably no one else alive, and the ones that may have survived had clearly fled that cemetery. Both brunettes were inspecting a huge map of the area on top of one of the Range Rover’s hood.
“We have to widen our search area… there were many of them and is possible many more decided to call it day when they saw we were waiting for them” Shane pointed out.
“You’re right…” But before the taller brunette had the chance to complete her sentence her cellphone rang for the hundredth time that day. “Porter… … … … … … are you sure about that?” She asked sounding more exasperated than usual. “We’re on our way” She simply replied and immediately disconnected the call.
“What’s wrong?” Shane asked as she noticed her partner’s concerned expression.
“The techs from facial recognition just called, apparently we have to un-subs heading towards Peggy’s office” Bette said speaking a mile a minute, as she collected the huge map and tossed it inside the car as they entered it. “Buckle up, this thing is not over yet” Bette said in a somber tone of voice as she ignited the engine.
“Well if facial recognition called that can only mean they are already inside the building, you were right… these guys are serious business” Shane said rather surprised and Bette just nodded a yes as she was speeding out of the cemetery.
“Call Dana to make sure they are all right and notify her of this situation” Bette ordered as they kept on speeding down the traffic with the sirens on.
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Awesome update… had me at the edge of my seat the whole time. You do write well. Please keep the chapters coming. Thank you!
I’ve missed quite a few chapters on this story, absolutely live it and I am hoping both Peggy, Shane and Bette will be ok. I wonder how Tina will greet Bette if she comes back un injured and completely unharmed.
Just read all your updates on this story thank you absolutely excellent
Great job, now you have to post quickly cause I want to know what happens. Thanks
Really interesting,good job.Please not too much drama.PPS
great update. talk about action…you nailed it.
All caught up…I clicked ‘next post by author’ and got nothing, Dang it!!!!!!! PPVS!
Whoa!! Anne…! You left me baffled here :-O I do hope you will post the next chapters soon!! ;-) and how could you worry about the way you write it?! You know what they said-there’s always a first time for everything :-D and you, my friend, just do it so perfectly amazing!! I don’t think anyone would believe your confession about being your first time writing this kind of action story ;-) I hope there’s another update from you soon, regardless how great is the Monday for you ;-) and let me thank you again for this update and for sharing the story that make me sit on the edge and still I asked for some more :-)
Great update. Great story. Why in the world couldn’t they have caught these guys before they entered the building? You are doing such a great job with this story. Thanks for coming back to complete it. Enjoying it so much. PPS. Thanks.
Well, my Monday improved considerably, but now I´m hanging from that seat again..Peggy is my all time favourite..you know you have to post asap – please.
Hope they will be ok